Well meri rai kisi kaam ki to nahi par ...
bas yahi ki ye ek acha kadam hai . likhne ko protsahn milta hai ......
lekin likhen pe jayda pabandi an lagaye .. jaise ek word denge uspe ghazal ... ya use kafiya banana ......
ispe kuch aur bhi ad kar le .......... ya koe b situation ho .........
ya current situation like ... kuch b humari life mai ho raha ho ......
aur nazm ko bhi shamil kare ........
maksad achi poetry se hai mera haar jeet se nahi ..........
har koe is bajah se acha likh sake bas
mai yaha naya hun ......... jayda nahi janta kisi ko bhi
maien ye threaD DEKGHA
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mayank ne jis tarah se sabko commnt diye hai . its really gr8 work .. haan lekin agar ye suggestion pm kiye jaye jo shayed confusion se bacha ja sakta hai ......
poem achi buri to poll se sabit ho jayegi .........
lekin jo achye se samhna chahte ho unko is tarah se samjhna . its really gr8 work
poem of month se
achi poetry likhna aur seekhna yek maksab sabit hona chahiye
na ki haar jeet ...........
best regard
Janumanu