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21st May 2009, 12:20 AM
hey khanak..

1st i wud like to say.. thx 2u.. for ur reply..
and dear dekhiye.. likh toh bahut kux sakte the, bt deemag me har tym ek se thot nahi aate hai, may be next tym me isi gazal me kuch chnage karke aur achaa bana du..
anyways.. tumari iss point ke bhi thx..

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Originally Posted by khanak View Post
superb again...............

naam se uske hi machalta hai mera Dil
kaash uske dil mein mera ghar hoo jaye
it was very nice........ but omi ji aisa kyu lag raha hai ke aap isse aur khaas likh kar sakte the...........

Ek InteZaar si ban gayi hai Zindagi,
Har pal tere aane ki Aash mein.......
   
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