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16th June 2010, 04:14 PM

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Originally Posted by ghayal_shayar View Post
Ab to waqt hi nahiN mil pata kavitaayeN likhne ka par kuch puraane pannoN me mil gaya mujhe to socha likh hi daalun kya pata kisi ko ahchi hi lag jaaye,gar kisi ki baahvnaoN ya soch pe ye kavita kataksh kare to maafi ka talabgaar rahuNga.....!!



mera janam
kisi aspatal ya
prashav grih me nahiN,
balki samaj ki
oopri manjil mein
hua tha.

mera laalan paalan
kisi maa ne nahi
balki samaj ki
beechwali manjil ne
kiya tha.

main
ab tandurust aur
jawan hoon.

mera vichran sthal
neechli manjil se
oopari manjil tak faila hua hai
meri maan aur maryadaa
aakash choom rahi hai.

log bhagwan ke bina
reh sakte hain,par
mere bina nahi.
Meri pahuNch,
panditoN ki shikhaoN,
aur mullaoN ki dadhiyon me,
samaan roop se hai.

mai saapekch hoon
dharm nirpekch hoon
meri gandh lagte he
khushali fail jati hai
aur jahan mein nahi hota
wahan badhali fail jati hai.

main yug ki pukar hoon
samay ki dhaar hoon
najuk sukumar hoon
desh ka bharshtachar hoon.


Pehle 3 stanzas padhe tou lagaa tha ke shayed aap apne hi baare me baat kar rahe haiN...phir baad ke 3 stanzas padhe tou laga ke yeh kya hogaya Lucky ji ko....akhiri stanza me puuri baat samajh aayi, ...phir dubaara padha maine..

Just 2 words..."Its good."........keep writing...




Zainy


PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...

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