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Originally Posted by Hassan
bohat umdah Kaifiyat dii hai bhai ....
is per aik koshish :-
maiN jab bhi sanwar ke baahir nikalta hooN
un se mulaqaat ke liye zaroor jaata hooN
un ke aaankhoN ke samandar ko maiN!
dil meiN sama ke chupa ke rakhta hooN
saaz saare ke saare be-saaz hue jate haiN!
koyal si awaaz un ki jab bhi sunta hooN…
aalam-e-izteraab hota hai waqt-e-rukhsat!
bin paani machli ki manind machalta hooN
aalam-e-izteraab : condition of anxiety
manind : alike
shab-e-hijr meiN pal pal tadapta ‘parStaar’
'ki aag hi nahi rehta, dhuaaN bhi hota hooN'
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Hassan bhai,
Kya khoob saaz-e-bayaan hua hai dost, kya kahifiyat bayaan kar gaye par bhai hidayaat yeh bhi thi ki lafz kisi ek sher mein hona laazmi hai. Agar aap gaur-talab kar paaye to inaayat hogi..Shukriyaa