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19th October 2007, 03:24 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by MahamAzmi
[B
Raat bhar deeda e namnaak mein lehraate rahe[/B]
sans ki tarhe se aap ate rahe jaate rahe
Siyah shab maine gujari jaag-kar,
Yaad teri tadpati rahi shab-bar…

Ek tisnagi* se rahi jisam mein, (pyas)
Saanse sum* pilati rahi shab-bar… (zehar)


Maham ji aapke sher ke jawaab meiN hum apni hi gazal ke do sher likh rahey haiN, umeed hai sahi lageNge.


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.....Sunita Thakur.....

यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...


   
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