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21st November 2004, 02:29 AM

Wah dosto!!

aapne to 'imaan' ko ek anuthaa rang diya hai.. Bakhoob har sher khud mein dilchasp aur muqamal

Kunal Bhai..ek nishaan chod gaya yeh sher dil par

ajnabi musafiron se hum hal-e-dil farmaya karte hai
tere sajde main sir jhuka, imaan-e-dil jalaya karte hai


kehtey hai hum hai tere, rakh mujhpar yaakeen,
hulchal si dil me basa kar, katal e aam kartey hai


khoob priya Ji...

isi tarah likhti rahiYeGaa

aman ji...Bahut khoob

chal diya apni hi khwab-e-mehfilon mein......
chirag-e-dil se roshan kar dete use bhi hum......
khaaq-e-mohabbat ek baar to aazmaya hota.....


aur dusri nazm mein bhi kamaal

jo suna jo dekha jo kiya jo khayal aaya.....
chand lafzoon mein tumhe kahe jaate hain.....


par aap is nazm mein shayad lafz 'imaan' ko rakhna bhul gaye...koi baat nahi aage se dhayan rakhiYeGaa

Talib Sir

Deewar jab gire to mein paooN sukoon-e-dil,
Ke Accha hua ghar nahi makaan chal basaa.


Isi andaaz-e-byaan ke to kaatil hai hum...is mehfil ko isi tarah sajaate rahiYe

-aap sab ka



Qasid


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Last edited by Qasid; 21st November 2004 at 02:32 AM..
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