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Join Date: Oct 2011
Location: Hyderabad (Deccan)
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24th June 2014, 07:43 AM
Aadaab bhaeeo wa behno... sorry jaldee mayn boo boo hogaya... kal... bay-bahr shayr post kar diya.. but anyways.. am trying my best to move forward with you guys.. hoping it would continue the process ..yielding more knowledge on us seekers..... please help in moving ahead...
please help choose which one to go ahead with...
Main huN jaaNbaaz karuN jaan kii kyuN mayN parwah,
Ki meri jaan, meri jaan to jaanee haye ye!
or
Nahi maamooli koee gul jo din mayn khil jaaye
Karay mad-hosh ye shab raat ki raanee haye ye!
Please do not hesitate to express your opinions/views etc...
Duagoh
Ahmad
Last edited by Ahmad Hyderabadi; 24th June 2014 at 07:46 AM..
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