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Originally Posted by LAMHA
MASHA ALLAH,
DOST, aap ka koi jawab nahi.bahut hi khub.aap ki is gazal ne to dil ko chu liya..........dard ko bayan karna koi aap se sikhe............. dard kabhi mazaa nahi deta ,ye to dil ko behlane ki baatein hai...............mohabbat aur dard ek saath chalte hai,dono ek dusre ke bina adhure hai...............mohabbat mai dard na ho to mohabbat ki ehmiyad ka ehsaas nahi rehta.............aap ke gazal ka jawaab dena chahungi..........plz gaur farmaye.............
WOH MILE HUMSE KAHANI BANKAR,
DIL MAI RAHE PYAAR KI NISHANI BANKAR,
HUM JINHE JAGAH DETE HAI ANKHON KE ANDAR,
AKSAR WOH BEH JATE HAI PAANI BANKAR..........
umeed hai aap ko ye sher pasand aayega...........
AAP KI DOST,
LAMHA......
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Lamha ji ek baar phir apke reply ka jawab de raha hoon apne sahi kaha ke koi dard maza nahi deta lekin kuch dard hoten hain jo jab uthte hai to kisi ki yaad dilahi jaten hain ab us dard ki ahamiyat pata chalti hai...........jo is dor se guzarte hain ye wohi samajh sakte hain............ab apke sher ki baat bahut hi umda sher apne pesh kiya hai mazaa aa gaya............aapki daad sar aankho per