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13th July 2014, 11:40 AM

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Originally Posted by ananthpak View Post
Ek koshish

muntazir hun iltija par meri kab tu dil-o-jaan se razi hogi

k tera ik bosa hi iss aashiq par zara-nawazi hogi

Wwwwaaahhhh !!! Bahaut hi khoob kaha ye sher aap ne ananthpak sahab !! Jazbaat ka pur asar bayaan hua sher meiN !! Lafz-e-bosa to ka bahaut hi khoob istemaal kiya hai aap ne. saath hi aap ke qaafiye ka bhi bahaut lutf aaya. Dheron daad !!!!


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mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
   
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