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5th September 2015, 01:33 PM

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Originally Posted by maikasH View Post
aadaab-o-namaste Sarika jee

aapki yeh Ghazal padhi aur majbooran, ba'daulat aapke sukhan, aapko daad-o-mubarakbaad diye bina "champat hona " gaNwara na hua to khaaksaar ki duaayeN aur daad tasleem farmaiiye


aapki Ghazal "taqreeban" beher meiN hai iske liye "alag se" khaas mubarakbaad qabuul farmaiiye, do-ek baateiN jo zabaan aur takkhayul-o-taGhazzul se ta'lluq rakhtii haiN aapse kehna chaahuNgaa, kabhi waqt ne ijaazat di to


ba-har-haal, Ghazal par aapki fiqr aur mehnat saaf zaahir ho rahi hai aur aap bilaa-shaq mubarakbaad ki haqdaar haiN, qabuul kijiye


rab raakha
maikash
Ahaaa......................

Somebody should pinch me today.........................

Maikash bhaiyaa

Main humesha sochti thi ki aap kabhi to aaoge kuch bhi kehne aur phir lagta tha ki shayad aapko mera likha kuch bhi pasand nahi aata hoga iss liye itne saalo.n mein aap kabhi bhi nahi aaye.


AApne yaha.n aakar mujhe kitna motivate kiya hai aap ko andaaza nahi hai. main iske liye aapki shukrguzaar hun.

aapko jab bhi waqt mile to mujhe zaroor sikhaiyega mujhe bohut khushi hogi aur main apki shukrguzaar rahungi.


-Apki Dost
Sarika
   
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