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Originally Posted by zarraa
Waaah waaah waaaah !!! Bahaut khoob Aadeil sahab !!! Umdah sher jis ne rindon ke dil ki baat ko asardaar alfaaz diye  dheron daad !!! |
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Originally Posted by zarraa
Waaahhh !!! Bahaut khoob Aadeil sahab !!! Parastish aur khuda-saaz ka kya khoob wordplay kiya hai !!! Daad hi daad !!!
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Originally Posted by zarraa
WWWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
saare ke saare aashaar behad hi khoobsurat aur pur-asar hain, aur lutf-o-nafaasat se sarshaar !!!
Aadeil bhai .... maanna padega ..... aap mein kamaal ki capacity hai sher kehne ki jis se lafz ke mukhtalif rang ubhar aate hain aur hazireen-e-mehfil ko lafz ko pooree 360 degree tareeke se appreciate karne mein bahaut madad mil tee hai.
Jaisa N@zneen ji ne kaha tha .... is activity mein fusoon-e-aadeil chaaya rehta hai jis se sabhi shayari ke deewaane mantra-mugdh rehte hain.
Ek baar phir se ....Waaah !!!! Daad !!! Is bazm ko aap ke qalaam ki roshni hamesha milti rahi yahi dua hai !!! |
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Originally Posted by zarraa
is sher mein mujhe "zulmat" aur "aaftaab ke gavaah hone" ki technique behad hi khoob lagi. zulmat mein jo hota hai wo taareekee ke parde mein chhipa rehta hai lekin jab koyee cheez had se bardh jaaye to us ka koyee na koyee gawaah ban jaata hai .... aur yahaan par baada-parastee ke saath ye hua .... literally as well as figuratively ..... SUPERB !!! bahaut bahaut daad !!
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Zarraasaab,
aapkii yehi muhabbat aur rehnumaaii hameN josh deti rehtii hai
aur kaii baar aap hamaare sher kii interpretation humse bhii behtar kar dete haiN jo aapne aakhri comment meN kiya hai, waaaah! kya khub interpretation kii hai, bilkul jaise ki aapne hi ye sher keh diya ho
aapkii hausla afzaaii aur daad ke liye aapka mamnoon hooN...
Adil