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21st August 2015, 11:02 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Madhu 14 View Post
namaskaar dostoN.......
fir se ek baar dil ke kuch khyaal pesh kar rahi hoon...
aap sab ki rai ka intzaar rahega..........
teri gulaab ki khushboo si mahakti bateiN
chaman ke phool par titli si vo sajti bateiN..

zara ho gam to bateiN bhi hoN pareshaN jaise
meri khushi me fir udti vo chahakti bateiN

Ye dooriyaN kabhi dil ko jo kare bekabu..
lage yuN wasl ki chahat me tadapti bateiN

bina piye he maiN madhosh huyi jati hooN
lage sharaab si ye teri bahakti bataeiN

jo roothti haiN gar fir khud hee manati bhi haiN
madhu ke jaisi haiN bachchoN si machalti bateiN....



Madhu ji sabse pahle to main aapke is athak prayaas ki saraahnaa karta hoon.....

aap nirantar apne kalam ke jaadu se bazm ki roshnii me izaafaa kartii aayee hain aur is baar bhi aapne wahi kiya hai....

Agar aapki ghazal ki baat karun to na jaane kyon (merii niji raay ) mujhe aisaa lag rahaa hai ke is baar is ghazal me wo baat nahi nazar aa rahii hai jiske liye aapkii tahreer mash'hoor hai.... main mahaz khayaal aur lafzon ki bunaai ki baat kar raha hoon.... technically kuch point out nahi kar raha hoon....

ummeed hai meri baaten aapko nagawaaraa saabit nahi hongee aur aap isse bhi acchaa likhne ka prayaas kartee rahengee.....

khush rahiye.... likhtii rahiye

Shaad......


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