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22nd August 2015, 03:41 PM

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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad' View Post
Madhu ji sabse pahle to main aapke is athak prayaas ki saraahnaa karta hoon.....

aap nirantar apne kalam ke jaadu se bazm ki roshnii me izaafaa kartii aayee hain aur is baar bhi aapne wahi kiya hai....

Agar aapki ghazal ki baat karun to na jaane kyon (merii niji raay ) mujhe aisaa lag rahaa hai ke is baar is ghazal me wo baat nahi nazar aa rahii hai jiske liye aapkii tahreer mash'hoor hai.... main mahaz khayaal aur lafzon ki bunaai ki baat kar raha hoon.... technically kuch point out nahi kar raha hoon....

ummeed hai meri baaten aapko nagawaaraa saabit nahi hongee aur aap isse bhi acchaa likhne ka prayaas kartee rahengee.....

khush rahiye.... likhtii rahiye

Shaad......
Shaad ji aapke atoot sath aur rahbari ka tah e dil se shukriya ada karna chahoongi.....vaise to aap jante hee hain bas koshisheiN kiya karti hoon main...ki kuch dhang ka likh paun par apki baton par gaur kiya to paya ki wakai kahiin na kahiin koshish me kami rah gayi....isiliye dubara isme kuch changes kiye haiN...shayad pahle se kuch behtar ho payi ho....

Aur aapki bateiN kabhi nagwaar nahi lag sakti mujhe...kyun ki vo hamesha improvement ke liye hee kahi jati hain...ek nek irade se....to aap bina hichak apni rai dete rahiyega aage bhi....

Salamat rahein.....
Aate rahein..........



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