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musafir ek pal
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16th May 2007, 05:44 AM

bahut khub gayal g, bahut acha likha hai apne. u have expressed ur feelings in an excellent manner. i enjoyed reading this story of urs. there is lot of pain and depth in this story. i m finding it hard to write down wha i m feeling right nw. bahut khub janab, bahut khub. keep on writng like this. very good. daad kabul kijiye,

apka dost

manish


Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little...



Darkness falls on me like rain...
just
one drop at a time....

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