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30th July 2007, 03:00 PM

HEY JAWED,
aap ke is sher ka jawab dena chahungi..........gaur farmaye.........

tumne na kiya yaad kabhi bhulkar humein,
hum ne to teri yaad mein sub kuch bhula diya,
mitne lagi hai dil se tere ab to parchaiya humari,
par ho saka na dur tu humse,humne khud ko mita diya..........
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Bahut khoob Lamha ji ....

Hamien aapka jawab bahut pasand aaya.......per yeh raahen yahan khatm nahin hoti hain....aakhir is bazm ko hamein aage bhi to badhana hai.....to leejiye is silsile ko aage badhhate hain is sher ke saath....

Woh na sahi unki yaad hi sahi
kam se kam itna to mere naseeb mein tha
Tamam umre kati hai unki yaad mein
Jo bachi hai woh bhi kat jayegi unki yaad mein.

Jawed..
   
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