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7th July 2014, 11:29 AM
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Originally Posted by Praneeta View Post
Tumhare comparison mein to hum abhi thik se born bhi nahi hue shayri ki duniya mein...meri soch kya kya samajh aaya hoga mujhe

sirf padha what to use in shayri and its meaning...aur sab explanation sar ke upar se gaya

still I am trying....

gunaah kiya kar ke ulfat 'pari' bewafaa yaar se
saza to milni hai kaise bachogi rasan-o-daar se
Pranitaji,

aapka sher padhke lagta nahi ki aap ham jaise stuents kii list men aati hai.n

behad khubsurat sher pesh kiya hai aapne...

waah hi waah........


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