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Originally Posted by Praneeta
tere fusoon-e-bosa ki kya tareef karun 'ananthpak'
ke ek bosa ne umr bhar ka itminaan de diya
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WWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH !!! pur-fusoon sher kaha Praneeta ji !!! paak mohabbat se bhara hua !!! khoobsurat ehsaasaat se labrez !!! aur lafz ka bhi kya khoob istemaal kiya hai !! aap ko dheroN dheroN daad Praneeta ji !!!
just a small point. mujhe intuitively aisa lag raha hai ki donoN misroN meiN agar lafz ko "bose" ke form meiN kaha jaaye to shayad zyada sahi sound kare. again, just my opinion for your consideration only. is ke peechhe ki theory se naawaaqif hooN
ek seekhne ka mudda mujhe ye lag raha hai ki "a" par khatm hone waale lafz even in singular form meiN bhi kab "e" par khatm hote haiN, e.g "tere waade par jiye hum" (lafz "waada), ya "n shole meiN ye karishma" (lafz "shola"). koyee member meherbaanee kar ke agar roshni daaal sakeiN to mujhe seekhne ka mauka haasil hoga.
ek baar phir se aap ko khoobsurat sher par daad !!!