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26th July 2008, 03:27 PM

prasad ji thanks a lot
dard-e-zabaani bhool zara dil se sada laga

sada yaani awaaz
ab yahan dil se sada laga ka matlab hai
jab hum kisi ko pyaar karte hain izhaar karne mein jhijhakte hain darte hain
ki kahin sab khatam na ho jaaye
but agar us ke dil mein bhi kuch ho to hamaari baat ko samjh sakti hai yaa sakta hai

bade bade shayar likhte hain ki agar do log raazi hain but izhaar na hua hai to shuruwaat mein un ke dil ek doosre se izhaar kar lete hain
aur yeh shayad sahi bhi hai jab hamaara dil yaa dimaag kisi cheez ko samajhta hai usi ke baad zabaan se iqraar karta hai ki koi cheez acchi hai kharaab hai

bas yehi express karna chaha hai ki pehle dil se dil ko samjha baad mein zabaan se kehna

hope aap ko ab koi doubts nahi honge

aur haan aap ek baat note kijiye main apni gazal mein (dard) word baar baar use karta hoon but dard ka matlab takleef har baar nahi zyaada tar mere dard ka matlab hota hai ehsaas kyunki dard aur khushi dono ehsaas hi to hain
jaise apni indians maan mein hota hai khushi ke aansu

aap ko ek sher bhi pesh karta hoon ismein bhi doubts hon to pooch len plz

MILA HAI SABR AUR TANHAAIYON KE DAUR
JAHAN KHUSHI KA HAI JASHN WAHAN HAI GAM KITNA

main bhi koi khaas urdu nahi jaanta bas koshish karta hoon
aap bhi kijiye aur ho sake to aap meer taqi meer ke kalaam refer kijiye
is se aap ko tehreer banane mein bahot hi khaas tareeke milenge

zyaada typical urdu aana zaroori nahi hai zaroori hai
lafzon ki dhun ko samajhna aur un ko un ki sahi jagah pe naqsh karna

app aur kuch bhi poochna chahte hain to bila jhijhak pooch sakte hain
aap ka yeh adna dost waqt bewaqt aap ke kuch kaam aa jaaye


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