[kabir_shayer]

Arvind Bhai,,,,,



Itne saare comments aur likes ke baad, mujh adna se shayer ki DAAD koi Maayene nahi rakhti, phir bhi ye zaroor kahunga ki ... aapki ghazal me ek JOSH hai , aage badhne ka, isme honsla hai, ummeed hai,
lekin NIRASHAA nahi...
aur yeh kaafi acchi cheez hai,,,,,,

bas wo KHUDA waala sher thoda Na-Gawaar guzra mujhe.
sorry agar bura laga ho to...


baaki,, ghazal me har ek ash-aar par DAAD hai meri...

likhte rahiye.

God bless you...