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29th April 2009, 03:38 PM

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Diya ji,

Aap ladkiyo ki ye sachhi padi maine, kafi dard bara hai, mayka chhod ek jaate ek dulhan ke man ke conditon ko aap ne kafi achhe se represent kiya hai.. Kafi kaabile tarif hai hai, aap ke ye lines..

Aap ke Line ke liye main bhi aapni likhi kuch line sunata hu, jara dhyan deke padiyega kyuki isme mera desi touch hai, local language ka bhi kafi use hai isme..

hope aap ko pasnd aayegi..

Regard -->

** OMi **
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" ..Beti praya dhan,kal kisi aur ke ghar jai.. "

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Yeh duniyaa ki reet Sada se chali hai aai..
Beti praya dhan, kal kisi aur ke ghar jai..

Moh na laga babul aapni betiya se itana...
Jab Jai hai aangahn chhod, tohe bhi rula jai..

Itana kahe ko tutat hai jawat dekh ooke...
Tor gharana chhod ke woh kahi aur ghar basaye jai..

Hash ke Vidaa kariya, aashirwad deva tor ladali ko..
Taaki aage oohar jindagi khusiyoo se bhar jai..!!


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Meri aapni kalam se.. ** OMi **
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So nice of u Omi jee
youn hi saath detey rahiye


aapki dost
Diya



Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai


Goodbye SDC

Diya
   
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