3rd August 2009, 10:43 AM
saahil saahab,
yahaa.n sdc par aap ka swaagat hai.. aap ne takhallus hi itna pyaara chuna hai kii kyaa kahe.n............. dekhate hi saahir ludiyanvi ki yaad aati hai... par yeh takhallus chun kar,aap ne thoDa sa apne liye mushkil khada kar liya hai.. kyun ki ab aap ko behtar hi likhan paDega.. aur aap ki yeh koshish dekh kar lagaa ki, aap kaafi behtar likh sakte hai.n.. ek achchhi koshish ke liye meri aur se daad qubool keejiye..
soch ko milta nahi kabhi sukooN
haiN kai sawaal har jawaab maiN
ho hi jaata hai yahan deedar-e-yaar
bas yahi hai baat achhi khaab maiN
kashtiyaN 'saahil' tujhe hain dhoondti
aur tu dooba hai khud sailaab main
bohat achchhe! likhte rahe.n
-mayank
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