[Dhaval]

Originally Posted by munfairy

ASSALAM WALEKUM,,NAMASTE DHAVAL JI,

MASHA ALLAH KYA KHOOB LIKHA HAI AAPNE.


dil-e-dastaaN kuch aisi hai hamarii,
tasalliyoN se dil ko manaate haiN..

aisi chaahat ko hum kya kaheN,
Ahal-e-ishq khud ko azmaate haiN..


hame aapki yeh nazm bohot pasand aayi,uski ek wajah yeh hain,
ki aapne apni is nazm main,,,mohabbat,yaadein,sabr,tasavvur,,har baat ko bohot pyare andaz ke saath likha hai,agar gaur kiya jaye,to ismain har tarah ke ehsaas hain,
bohot khoob aapki mehnat kafi rang layi..

bas isi tarah likhte rahiye,
apna khayal rakhiye
Allah hafiz

**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
`·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep
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walekum asalaam sony ji,

aapko mera yeH andaz pasaNd aaya bahot hi khusi hui yeH jaanke par is kalaam ka poora credit aapko jaata hai kyuNki aap meri urdu ki teacher ho....! ab kya kareN aapne teacher ne itni shakti se student ko sikhne ko kaha ho to fir thoda sa to aayenGa hi maiN chahta tha ki is kalaam meiN maiN urdu lafzoN ka istemal karuN aapko pasaNd aay mujhe behad khusi hui maiN aage bi kosisH karunGa ki apni urdu aur achhi karuN mujhe pata hai apake jais to naihN hoNgi par kosisH karunGa jaroor , aapka sath milta raha to achhi sikh hi jaunGaa yeh pakka yakeen hai mujhe haha

aap bhi apna khayal rakheN aur khus raheN

duaoN ke sath ijaazaT

allah hafiz

aapka dost
dhaval