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Re: Pehli Koshish... - 31st January 2005, 02:54 PM

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Originally posted by Pulkit_gupta
For the first time in life... I have tried to write something on my own...Some ppl very dear to me insisted in scuh a manner that i cud not turn it down...Hope you wud bear with me and request the moderators if they decide to throw me out of here ...

Yeh sirf ehsaas hain(Of the time, I first fall in Love), Technical flaws abound here... but understandably so as this is the first time, I am writing myself...

Mere dil me chhupe hain kucch ehsaas, kucch ankahi, kucch ansuni si hai baat,
Woh baat kehne main aya hoon...

Uska saanson se mehkana mere tan-man ko, aankhon aankhon me kar lena sau baat
Uske is andaaz se dil ko ab main naa bachaa paya hoon

Tanhaiyon me zara muskurana, sochte rehana unki hi har baat
Behekte jaane se khud ko ab main naa rok payaa hoon

Kaise kehdoon dil ki baat unse, kaise karloon izhaar-e-mohabbat
Badi shiddat se kalam uthhayi thhi, lafz par chaar hi likh paya hoon...

-- Pulkit Gupta


mere shareef bachae,

Mere dil me chhupe hain kucch ehsaas, kucch ankahi, kucch ansuni si hai baat,
Woh baat kehne main aya hoon...


~aaj tak jo baate tumhari aankhe bayaan karti thhi wahi baate aaj tumhari kalam se nikhar oothi hai.


Uska saanson se mehkana mere tan-man ko, aankhon aankhon me kar lena sau baat
Uske is andaaz se dil ko ab main naa bachaa paya hoon

~hmmmmmm... aisa waqt aata hi hai ... jab di ko bhi lagta hai ke bachaa ab bada ho gaya . lol

Tanhaiyon me zara muskurana, sochte rehana unki hi har baat
Behekte jaane se khud ko ab main naa rok payaa hoon

~bbc par news aaj aani hi hai.... mera pulkit bahek gaya.


Kaise kehdoon dil ki baat unse, kaise karloon izhaar-e-mohabbat
Badi shiddat se kalam uthhayi thhi, lafz par chaar hi likh paya hoon...


~lafz bhale hi chaar likhe hai par dil apna bayaan kar diya hai.
khush raho mere bachae.
tumhari yah pahli koshish k liye tumhe lakh abhinandan
diiii
   
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