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thak kar taraash hi liya............ -
3rd April 2004, 02:00 PM
assalaam alaikum .....
aap ki khidmat me apni ek ghazal le kar aaya hoon .... ummeed karta hoon pasand aaye gi......... "thak kar taraash hi liya ghar ke sutoon* me... mai jis ko tha talaash raha uss hujoom* me..." "afsoos yeh nahi ki mujhe mil sake na woh... gham yeh hai mai phirta raha yun hi fizool me.." "kya dair hai kya mai hoon kya hai mai khana... soochun ga kisi roz baith kar sukoon me.........." "khamoshyon ka shauq ab raha nahi mujhko.... mai marr bhi gaya to bhi rahooN ga junoon me.." sutoon(khamba,pillar)hujoom(croud,bheer) sahil.. --------- |
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3rd April 2004, 02:11 PM
Sahil Sahab
Sabse pehley humara shukriya kabool kijiye bhai daad deni padegi aapki shayri ki bahut sadgi se bhara aur dil ki gehraiyon ko choo janey wala likha hai yakeen maniye humein aapki shayri bahut pasand aayee aaapki khushiyon ki dua ke saath aapse izazat chahonga " khamoshyon ka shauq ab raha nahi mujhko.... mai marr bhi gaya to bhi rahooN ga junoon me.." Liveinnothing@yahoo.co.uk |
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3rd April 2004, 02:17 PM
"is izzat afzaai ka bahot shukriya....
aap logon ki daad se hi is bande ki zindagee hai....ya yun kahen ki aap hain to hum hai...ghalib sb ka ek sher yaad aa gaya aap ki izzat paa kar.... "bana hai shah ka musahib . phire hai itrata.. wagar na shehar me ghalib ki aabroo kya hai.." |
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hi -
3rd April 2004, 03:27 PM
hi
bhut hi acha likha hai aapne. kaafi gehri sooch rakhte hai aap. its a really nice poem especially the last two lines muhe bhut pasand aayi umeed hai aap ainda bi aise hi likthe rahe ge keep it up bye |
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Re: hi -
16th April 2004, 07:10 PM
aap ki is izzat afzaai ka bahot bahot shukriya ... roomana sahiba..
ummeed karta hoon aage bhi issi gehri soch ko barqaraar rakhoon ga...." if its a compliment i accept" agar ho sake to mujhe kuchh achhe topics aur situations likh kar bhej dijye ga....insh allah likhne ki koshish karoon ga.. ALLAH HAFIZ duaaon ke saath duaaon ki guzarish saud....(sahil) |
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