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Post _.·KhWahish KArNa bHul gAye·._.· - 29th March 2007, 11:50 AM

Assalam walekum,
kaise hain aap sab?


Aaj phir hum apni nayi koshish,aap sabke samne rakh rahe he.
is baar humne kuch alag tarah se likhne ki koshish ki hai ,
aur is umeed ke saath ise aap sabke nazar kar rahi hu,,,
ke aap hamesha ki tarah hamara hosla badhayege.
aur hamari khamiyon se hame ru_ba_ru karwayenge.


UMEED KARTI HUN,,AAP SABKO HAMARI YE NAZM PASAND AAYEGI,

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»*>>-(¯`·._.·KhWahish KArNa bHul gAye·._.·´¯)->>«


Waqt se pehle,kuch Na mila,
Taqdir se zyada,paNa tha,
tarakki ki chahat,itni thi,
ke Dua karnNa,Bhul gAye.



damm bharte the,Manzil ka,
waqtan fa_waqtan,chalna tha,
Bulandi ki,Unsiyat,itni thi,
ke safar karNa,Bhul gAye.



milne ki Arzu,itni thi,
pane ka jazba,itna tha,
darpan me khoye,itne hum,
ke waqt dekhNa,Bhul gAye.



Mann ke in,Registano me,
baghicha,pyar ka banana tha,
yakin me Milawat itni thi,
ke koshish karna,Bhul gAye.



sukun se Darr yu lagta hain,
Dard_e_dil ka,Alam tha,
Andhero ki adat itni thi,
ke roshni karNa,Bhul gAye.



bhul gaye hain,Ab yeh bhi,
kya_kya humne manga tha,
Mohabbat se Nafrat itni thi,
ke khuwahish karNa,Bhul gAye.



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Love Kuch Aap Sa - 29th March 2007, 12:13 PM

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»*>>-(¯`·._.·KhWahish KArNa bHul gAye·._.·´¯)->>«


Waqt se pehle,kuch Na mila,
Taqdir se zyada,paNa tha,
tarakki ki chahat,itni thi,
ke Dua karnNa,Bhul gAye.


damm bharte the,Manzil ka,
waqtan fa_waqtan,chalna tha,
Bulandi ki,Unsiyat,itni thi,
ke safar karNa,Bhul gAye.


milne ki Arzu,itni thi,
pane ka jazba,itna tha,
darpan me khoye,itne hum,
ke waqt dekhNa,Bhul gAye.


Mann ke in,Registano me,
baghicha,pyar ka banana tha,
yakin me Milawat itni thi,
ke koshish karna,Bhul gAye.


sukun se Darr yu lagta hain,
Dard_e_dil ka,Alam tha,
Andhero ki adat itni thi,
ke roshni karNa,Bhul gAye.


bhul gaye hain,Ab yeh bhi,
kya_kya humne manga tha,
Mohabbat se Nafrat itni thi,
ke khuwahish karNa,Bhul gAye.


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Hi Sony..

Good Ho Yaar Aap to.. Achha Likha hai. Achha laga....

Kuch is kadar yaad aaye wo,,
Har Unsiyat ko apni main bhool gaya...
Itni mohabbat thi apne Qatil se mujhe,,
Ke Bewafa se nafrat karna bhool gaya..
Gumm'on ki khwahish to khud hi ki thi,,
So dard mein tadapna pada mujhe..
Itna mashroof tha dhadkane sametne mein Ehsaas,,
Apni Rooh ko Ruksat karna bhool gaya...


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great!!! - 29th March 2007, 12:59 PM

sony jee asalaam walekum ,

kaisi haiN aap?

aaj to bahot hi khusHii hui aapki is behtrin si nazm ko paRH ke ..har baar aap apni kosisH ko aur bhi behtrin banaane me kamyaab hoti jaa rahi hai ye baat mujhe baRii achHii lagi ..ye nazm meiN aapne jo apne dil ke un ehsaasoN ko pesH kiyaa hai wo andaaz-e-bayaaN baRaa achHaa raha ..khas karke har lafzoN ko aapne sahi tarike se use pesH kiye haiN jahaaN unki zaroort hai wahaaN .isiliye kosisH ki khoobsoorti aur bhi baRH jaati hai..


Mann ke in,Registano me,
baghicha,pyar ka banana tha,
yakin me Milawat itni thi,
ke koshish karna,Bhul gAye...wah wah!

bhul gaye hain,Ab yeh bhi,
kya_kya humne manga tha,
Mohabbat se Nafrat itni thi,
ke khuwahish karNa,Bhul gAye...wah wah




dua karta huN aap aise hi aage baRHte raheN aur aage isse bhi behtrin kosisH likheN taaki hum bhi aapse kuch seeKH sakeN ..

ehsaasoN se bhari behtrin kosisH ke liye daad ko kubul kijiyenGa

apna khayaal rakheN aur khusH raheN

duaoN ke saath ijaazaT

allah hafiz

aapka dost
dhaval



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29th March 2007, 02:50 PM

Bahot achchi kalam hai aapki,
aapki kalam ka main kyaa jawaab du..!!!
muje ye aapka andaaz pasand aaya.
aisi batein kuch had tak dil ko chhu jati hai..!


aap aisa hi likhti rahein aisi dua hain.
AFTAB...!! EK UMMID



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Thumbs up Bahut khoob likha hai - 29th March 2007, 04:35 PM

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Assalam walekum,
kaise hain aap sab?


Aaj phir hum apni nayi koshish,aap sabke samne rakh rahe he.
is baar humne kuch alag tarah se likhne ki koshish ki hai ,
aur is umeed ke saath ise aap sabke nazar kar rahi hu,,,
ke aap hamesha ki tarah hamara hosla badhayege.
aur hamari khamiyon se hame ru_ba_ru karwayenge.


UMEED KARTI HUN,,AAP SABKO HAMARI YE NAZM PASAND AAYEGI,

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»*>>-(¯`·._.·KhWahish KArNa bHul gAye·._.·´¯)->>«


Waqt se pehle,kuch Na mila,
Taqdir se zyada,paNa tha,
tarakki ki chahat,itni thi,
ke Dua karnNa,Bhul gAye.



damm bharte the,Manzil ka,
waqtan fa_waqtan,chalna tha,
Bulandi ki,Unsiyat,itni thi,
ke safar karNa,Bhul gAye.



milne ki Arzu,itni thi,
pane ka jazba,itna tha,
darpan me khoye,itne hum,
ke waqt dekhNa,Bhul gAye.



Mann ke in,Registano me,
baghicha,pyar ka banana tha,
yakin me Milawat itni thi,
ke koshish karna,Bhul gAye.



sukun se Darr yu lagta hain,
Dard_e_dil ka,Alam tha,
Andhero ki adat itni thi,
ke roshni karNa,Bhul gAye.



bhul gaye hain,Ab yeh bhi,
kya_kya humne manga tha,
Mohabbat se Nafrat itni thi,
ke khuwahish karNa,Bhul gAye.



**********************************

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Soni ji ko Shaan ka salam,

Kyasen hain aap, aap ye post ko padhne ke baad hum to sub kuch bhool gaye Daad dena chunga is post ke liye. Mujhe kushi hui ki aapne apna wada pora kiya or itni jaldi or itne achee rachna likhi... thanx

ab ijazat
Aap Hamesha hanste or muskurate rahe..

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30th March 2007, 12:06 PM

walekum salam sony ji
hum thik hai aap kese hai?

kya baat hai sony ji aaj aap alag hi andaaz mein nazar aa rahe ho..


sony ji aap jab jab bhi kuch alag hamare samne rakhte ho har baar aapke ehsaason ko aap badi khubsurati se bayan karte ho, har baar aapka likha padh ke dil khush sa ho jata hai ki hamare dost ne aaj kya baat kahi hai,

sony ji aapki is rachna mein to aapne kamal hi kar diya aapki is rachna se ek seekh jarur milti hai ki kabhi kisi chiz ki lalach mein aakar kudrat ki banai chiz ko bhul mat jana, har baar uska anjaam bura hota hai, aur sony ji aapki is rachna se sikh ke sath sath aapka aamir ji ke upar apaar pyaar bhi nazar aa raha hai, khuda aapki aur aamir ji ki jodi yuhi hasti khikkhilati rakhe yehi dua hai hamari

aamir ji ko hamra salam pesh karna

dono khush rehna
aapka dost
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Assalam walekum,
kaise hain aap sab?


Aaj phir hum apni nayi koshish,aap sabke samne rakh rahe he.
is baar humne kuch alag tarah se likhne ki koshish ki hai ,
aur is umeed ke saath ise aap sabke nazar kar rahi hu,,,
ke aap hamesha ki tarah hamara hosla badhayege.
aur hamari khamiyon se hame ru_ba_ru karwayenge.


UMEED KARTI HUN,,AAP SABKO HAMARI YE NAZM PASAND AAYEGI,

************************************************** **

»*>>-(¯`·._.·KhWahish KArNa bHul gAye·._.·´¯)->>«


Waqt se pehle,kuch Na mila,
Taqdir se zyada,paNa tha,
tarakki ki chahat,itni thi,
ke Dua karnNa,Bhul gAye.



damm bharte the,Manzil ka,
waqtan fa_waqtan,chalna tha,
Bulandi ki,Unsiyat,itni thi,
ke safar karNa,Bhul gAye.



milne ki Arzu,itni thi,
pane ka jazba,itna tha,
darpan me khoye,itne hum,
ke waqt dekhNa,Bhul gAye.



Mann ke in,Registano me,
baghicha,pyar ka banana tha,
yakin me Milawat itni thi,
ke koshish karna,Bhul gAye.



sukun se Darr yu lagta hain,
Dard_e_dil ka,Alam tha,
Andhero ki adat itni thi,
ke roshni karNa,Bhul gAye.



bhul gaye hain,Ab yeh bhi,
kya_kya humne manga tha,
Mohabbat se Nafrat itni thi,
ke khuwahish karNa,Bhul gAye.



**********************************

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SoNY _ HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!


**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!





Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe,
Tab dil se me naraz tha,
Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du,
Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha.


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30th March 2007, 02:43 PM

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walekum salam sony ji
hum thik hai aap kese hai?

kya baat hai sony ji aaj aap alag hi andaaz mein nazar aa rahe ho..


sony ji aap jab jab bhi kuch alag hamare samne rakhte ho har baar aapke ehsaason ko aap badi khubsurati se bayan karte ho, har baar aapka likha padh ke dil khush sa ho jata hai ki hamare dost ne aaj kya baat kahi hai,

sony ji aapki is rachna mein to aapne kamal hi kar diya aapki is rachna se ek seekh jarur milti hai ki kabhi kisi chiz ki lalach mein aakar kudrat ki banai chiz ko bhul mat jana, har baar uska anjaam bura hota hai, aur sony ji aapki is rachna se sikh ke sath sath aapka aamir ji ke upar apaar pyaar bhi nazar aa raha hai, khuda aapki aur aamir ji ki jodi yuhi hasti khikkhilati rakhe yehi dua hai hamari

aamir ji ko hamra salam pesh karna

dono khush rehna
aapka dost
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Smile Frnd 4 Ever - 30th March 2007, 06:28 PM

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Hi Sony..

Good Ho Yaar Aap to.. Achha Likha hai. Achha laga....

Kuch is kadar yaad aaye wo,,
Har Unsiyat ko apni main bhool gaya...
Itni mohabbat thi apne Qatil se mujhe,,
Ke Bewafa se nafrat karna bhool gaya..
Gumm'on ki khwahish to khud hi ki thi,,
So dard mein tadapna pada mujhe..
Itna mashroof tha dhadkane sametne mein Ehsaas,,
Apni Rooh ko Ruksat karna bhool gaya...



AADAB WIDHANI JI,
KAISE HAIN AAP?


AAPKA BOHOT_BOHOT SHUKRIYA jo apne hamari nazm pasand ki,
shayaD Apne hame pehli baar padha hain,
umeed karti hu,aap aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhege,

apna khayal rakhiye
ALLAH HAFIZ


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Smile frnd 4ever - 2nd April 2007, 12:38 PM

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sony jee asalaam walekum ,

kaisi haiN aap?

aaj to bahot hi khusHii hui aapki is behtrin si nazm ko paRH ke ..har baar aap apni kosisH ko aur bhi behtrin banaane me kamyaab hoti jaa rahi hai ye baat mujhe baRii achHii lagi ..ye nazm meiN aapne jo apne dil ke un ehsaasoN ko pesH kiyaa hai wo andaaz-e-bayaaN baRaa achHaa raha ..khas karke har lafzoN ko aapne sahi tarike se use pesH kiye haiN jahaaN unki zaroort hai wahaaN .isiliye kosisH ki khoobsoorti aur bhi baRH jaati hai..


Mann ke in,Registano me,
baghicha,pyar ka banana tha,
yakin me Milawat itni thi,
ke koshish karna,Bhul gAye...wah wah!

bhul gaye hain,Ab yeh bhi,
kya_kya humne manga tha,
Mohabbat se Nafrat itni thi,
ke khuwahish karNa,Bhul gAye...wah wah




dua karta huN aap aise hi aage baRHte raheN aur aage isse bhi behtrin kosisH likheN taaki hum bhi aapse kuch seeKH sakeN ..

ehsaasoN se bhari behtrin kosisH ke liye daad ko kubul kijiyenGa

apna khayaal rakheN aur khusH raheN

duaoN ke saath ijaazaT

allah hafiz

aapka dost
dhaval

WALEKUM ASSALAM DHAVAL JI,
JI HUM BILKUL THIK HAI,

AAP KAISE HO?

DHAVAL JI,aapne har baar ki tarah is baar bhi hame padkar,
,hamari hosla afzayi ki,,,sachhi dilse aapka shukriya ada karti hun,
aapko hamare ehsaas pasand aaye,iske liye tahe dilse shukriya,

bas aise hi apna saath banaye rakhna.

apna khayal rakhiye
ALLAH HAFIZ


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Smile Frnd 4 Ever - 2nd April 2007, 12:42 PM

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Bahot achchi kalam hai aapki,
aapki kalam ka main kyaa jawaab du..!!!
muje ye aapka andaaz pasand aaya.
aisi batein kuch had tak dil ko chhu jati hai..!


aap aisa hi likhti rahein aisi dua hain.
AFTAB...!! EK UMMID




ASSALAM WALEKUM aftab ji,
KAISE HAIN AAP?

Aapko hamari nazm pasand ayi,,hamare liye yeh khush kismati ki baat hain,
bas aise hi hame sarahte rahiye,
INSHA ALLAH,agli baar bhi hum behtrin si koshish pesh karege,

apna khayal rakhiye
ALLAH HAFIZ


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2nd April 2007, 08:21 PM

Aadab Sony Ji,

kya bata hai bahut aach
bahut hi aach likha hai aapne.....


Mann ke in,Registano me,
baghicha,pyar ka banana tha,
yakin me Milawat itni thi,
ke koshish karna,Bhul gAye.


sukun se Darr yu lagta hain,
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hellow sony ji ..
kesi he aap ..
thode din ho gaye yaha aaye hue
per aate hi aapki pyari si kalam padhne ko mili ..
to aate hi dil khus ho gaya aur is khusi me dad dena bhul jaye to pahle hi hum kah dete he .. aapki baki ki nazmo ki tarah ye bhi bahut achhi lagi ..
u hi apne dosto ke sath apne zazbat share karte rahiyega ..
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Smile Frnd 4 Ever - 3rd April 2007, 09:02 PM

SALAM SHAAN JI,
HUM THIK HAIN,,

AAP KAHIYE,,AAP KAISE HAIN?

apne is baar bhi apna kimti waqt hamari nazm ke liye diya,,
us ke liye Apka tahe dilse shukriya ada karti hun,
aur jab dosto se wada kiya jata hain,,to use puara bhi kiya jata hain,
bas isi liye hame to koshish karni hi thi,,

aap aise hi apna saath banaye rahiyega,

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umeed karte hain,,aapka saath aage bhi milta rahega,

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Smile Frnd 4 Ever - 3rd April 2007, 09:12 PM

AADAB MERUL JI,
khushi hui jaan ke ,,,ke janab achhe hain,,
ji aap sab ki dua se hum bhi thik hain,

merul ji ,,hame aapki sabse achhi baat yeh lagi,,,
k aapne hamari nazm k maksad ko samajh liya,
aapne hamari nazm ko itni gehrayi se padha,,,hame bohot achha laga,,

aage bhi apna saaath banaye rakhiye,

Aapne hamare aur hamare HASSAN ke liye dua ki,,
sach merul ji,,dilse apka shukriya ada karti hun,

ALLAH AAPKE AUR APKE PYAR KA BHI SAATH,HAMESHA BANAYE RAKHE,,
AAMIN,,,,SUMM AAMIN
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hi - 4th April 2007, 10:39 AM

sukun se Darr yu lagta hain,
Dard_e_dil ka,Alam tha,
Andhero ki adat itni thi,
ke roshni karNa,Bhul gAye.


wah wah sony ji kyaa andaaz hai bhut khub....har qita bhut pyara bana hai khaaskar upper likha qita ti gazab ka bana hai......meri daad pesh hai kabool karain.......raj........


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hellow swt SoNy Ji ..

wah wah .. kya khub likha he ..

kitna kuch bhulte hue bhi bahut kuch likh diya ..
really aapke likhe ye lafz dil ko chu gaye ..

baithe the kisi ke intzaar me ..
ek pyari si kashis dil me leke ..
humne kabhi na kuch manga ..
fir bhi na jane kyo hume hi bhul gaye ..

ab kya kahe sony ji ye bhulne ki aadat bahut buri he .. bahut dard deti he ..
so aap apne dosto ko na bhul jana .. likkhte hue hamare sath chalte rahna ..
duao ke sath khuda hafis ..

Aapka Apna
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Smile Frnd 4 Ever - 27th April 2007, 09:43 PM

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Aadab Sony Ji,

kya bata hai bahut aach
bahut hi aach likha hai aapne.....

Mann ke in,Registano me,
baghicha,pyar ka banana tha,
yakin me Milawat itni thi,
ke koshish karna,Bhul gAye.


sukun se Darr yu lagta hain,
Dard_e_dil ka,Alam tha,
Andhero ki adat itni thi,
ke roshni karNa,Bhul gAye.


bhul gaye hain,Ab yeh bhi,
kya_kya humne manga tha,
Mohabbat se Nafrat itni thi,
ke khuwahish karNa,Bhul gAye

bahut aach wah wah....aise hi likhte rahi na......
daad hazire hai kubul kijiye.....

aapki dost,
sandhya

Aadab sandhya ji,
kaisi he ap.
sabse pehle me aap sab se mafi chahti hun,bohot dino baad aap sabhi ka shukriya ada kar rahi hun,

aapne hame padha hame saraha,
apka bohot_bohot shukriya,,aage bhi hamara saath dijiyega,
Apna khayal rakhiye,
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Smile Frnd 4 Ever - 27th April 2007, 09:47 PM

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hellow sony ji ..
kesi he aap ..
thode din ho gaye yaha aaye hue
per aate hi aapki pyari si kalam padhne ko mili ..
to aate hi dil khus ho gaya aur is khusi me dad dena bhul jaye to pahle hi hum kah dete he .. aapki baki ki nazmo ki tarah ye bhi bahut achhi lagi ..
u hi apne dosto ke sath apne zazbat share karte rahiyega ..
take care ..
Aapki Dost
~Beena ..

AADAB BEENA JI.
HUM BIKUL THIK HAI,
AAP KAISI HE.


in dino hum kafi mushkilose guzar rahe the,,kafi gham me mubtila the,
kafi dinon ke baad apne is parivaar me jab hamari wapasi hui.
humne apne doston ke reply dekhe,

or yakin maniye,

Aapne jis andaz me hame izzat bakshi he,,hum aapko dilse kehte he ,,,sach hame be hadd khushi hun,
aapka bohot-bohot shukriya.isi tarah saath banaye rakhiye,

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frnd 4ever - 27th April 2007, 09:51 PM

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sukun se Darr yu lagta hain,
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Andhero ki adat itni thi,
ke roshni karNa,Bhul gAye.


wah wah sony ji kyaa andaaz hai bhut khub....har qita bhut pyara bana hai khaaskar upper likha qita ti gazab ka bana hai......meri daad pesh hai kabool karain.......raj........

AADAB raj ji,
kaise hain aap?

raj ji wese,hum apko
1 baat zarur kahege,,
aap itne masruf rehte hain,,
ke humne,hamare kalam me,aapke reply,,bohot kamm dekhe hain,


to aaj hum aapka shukriya tahe dilse ada karenge.
kyunki aapne hamari us nazm me reply diya hai,,
jis nazm se hame kafi umeede thi,

shukriya raj ji,
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Hello Sonyji.

Aaj bahut dino baad main aaya hoon.Aur aate hi itni badhiya nazm padhkar Dil khush ho gaya.Aise hi likhte rahiye


Gam ki dukaan kholkar baitha hua hai "Saifee"
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Smile Frnd 4 Ever - 1st May 2007, 11:56 AM

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hellow swt SoNy Ji ..

wah wah .. kya khub likha he ..

kitna kuch bhulte hue bhi bahut kuch likh diya ..
really aapke likhe ye lafz dil ko chu gaye ..

baithe the kisi ke intzaar me ..
ek pyari si kashis dil me leke ..
humne kabhi na kuch manga ..
fir bhi na jane kyo hume hi bhul gaye ..

ab kya kahe sony ji ye bhulne ki aadat bahut buri he .. bahut dard deti he ..
so aap apne dosto ko na bhul jana .. likkhte hue hamare sath chalte rahna ..
duao ke sath khuda hafis ..

Aapka Apna
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AADAB PRINCE JI,
kaise hain aap?


AAPKA bohot_bohot shukriya,,jo aapne hamari nazm ko saraha,
wese hame zyada khushi is baat ki hai,,,
k aapne pehli baar hamari nazm ki taraf rukh kiya hai,,
ab umeeb karti hun,,
ki aap hamesha hamari nazm ko padhenge,,aur hamari hosla afzai karenge,,

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Smile Frnd 4 Ever - 7th May 2007, 12:56 PM

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Hello Sonyji.

Aaj bahut dino baad main aaya hoon.Aur aate hi itni badhiya nazm padhkar Dil khush ho gaya.Aise hi likhte rahiye
ASSALAM WALEKUM SAIFEE JI,
kaise hain aap?

saifee ji yeh jaan kar bohot_achha laga ke,hamari nazm aapko dilse pasand ayi.
bas aap logo ka saath isi tarah banaye rakhiye,
INSHA ALLAH hum aur achha likhne ki koshish karenge.AAMIN


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8th May 2007, 11:20 AM

sukhriya sony ji

ki aap hamare liye dua karte hai, sony ji jab jab bhi hum sath kush hoge hum samjenge ki har baaar aapki dua kabul hui

sath dete rahiyega
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AADAB MERUL JI,
khushi hui jaan ke ,,,ke janab achhe hain,,
ji aap sab ki dua se hum bhi thik hain,

merul ji ,,hame aapki sabse achhi baat yeh lagi,,,
k aapne hamari nazm k maksad ko samajh liya,
aapne hamari nazm ko itni gehrayi se padha,,,hame bohot achha laga,,

aage bhi apna saaath banaye rakhiye,

Aapne hamare aur hamare HASSAN ke liye dua ki,,
sach merul ji,,dilse apka shukriya ada karti hun,

ALLAH AAPKE AUR APKE PYAR KA BHI SAATH,HAMESHA BANAYE RAKHE,,
AAMIN,,,,SUMM AAMIN
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9th May 2007, 01:10 AM

Sony ji, salaam.

Aaj apko pahali martabaa padha. Padha to bahot achha laga apka likha. Likha apka har lafz geharaai liye hai. Ek khub'surat kalaam par is nachiiz ki daad kabuul kijiiyegaa.

sukun se Darr yu lagta hain,
Dard_e_dil ka,Alam tha,
Andhero ki adat itni thi,
ke roshni karNa,Bhul gAye.


bhul gaye hain,Ab yeh bhi,
kya_kya humne manga tha,
Mohabbat se Nafrat itni thi,
ke khuwahish karNa,Bhul gAye.

Ye do sher laajavaab hai. Bahot khuub likha hai, likhti rahiye.

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Smile frnd 4 ever - 15th May 2007, 09:13 PM

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Sony ji, salaam.

Aaj apko pahali martabaa padha. Padha to bahot achha laga apka likha. Likha apka har lafz geharaai liye hai. Ek khub'surat kalaam par is nachiiz ki daad kabuul kijiiyegaa.

sukun se Darr yu lagta hain,
Dard_e_dil ka,Alam tha,
Andhero ki adat itni thi,
ke roshni karNa,Bhul gAye.


bhul gaye hain,Ab yeh bhi,
kya_kya humne manga tha,
Mohabbat se Nafrat itni thi,
ke khuwahish karNa,Bhul gAye.

Ye do sher laajavaab hai. Bahot khuub likha hai, likhti rahiye.

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SALAM POOJA JI,
KAISI HAIN AAP?


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pooja ji,
aap pehli baar hamari post pe aayi,isliye aapka dilse shukrioya ada karti hun.

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tahe dilse apki shukra guzar hu,

aap logo k saath se hi,hum aaj yahan tak pohonche hain,
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namakar sony g,

wow, bahut khub likha hai apne. abb tareef karein to kaise karein. dil ko chu liya apne. bahut najuk hai yhe ehsaas dil ke. humein bahut ache lage. gayal kar diya apne. aapke yhe sher to humein bahut acha laga:

Mann ke in,Registano me,
baghicha,pyar ka banana tha,
yakin me Milawat itni thi,
ke koshish karna,Bhul gAye.


daad haajir hai hazuur kabul kijiye. app aise hi likthe rahein.

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Smile Frnd 4 Ever - 19th May 2007, 11:40 AM

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namakar sony g,

wow, bahut khub likha hai apne. abb tareef karein to kaise karein. dil ko chu liya apne. bahut najuk hai yhe ehsaas dil ke. humein bahut ache lage. gayal kar diya apne. aapke yhe sher to humein bahut acha laga:

Mann ke in,Registano me,
baghicha,pyar ka banana tha,
yakin me Milawat itni thi,
ke koshish karna,Bhul gAye.

daad haajir hai hazuur kabul kijiye. app aise hi likthe rahein.

tc

manish
Aadab . namaste Manish ji,
kaise hain aap?

aapka bohot_bohot shukriya,jo apne is nachiz ki nazm ko pasand kiya,
hamari nazm ne apke dil ko chhua,,apko hamare ehsaas pasand aaye,dilse apka shukriya ada karti hu.
aur humne aapki daad kabul karli,SHUKRIYA,

ALLAH HAFIZ
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Waqt se pehle,kuch Na mila,
Taqdir se zyada,paNa tha,
tarakki ki chahat,itni thi,
ke Dua karnNa,Bhul gAye.


bhul gaye hain,Ab yeh bhi,
kya_kya humne manga tha,
Mohabbat se Nafrat itni thi,
ke khuwahish karNa,Bhul gAye.


Wah wah..sonyji ...apne kya likha hain........dil se daad kubool kare..apki post bahut hi jyada pasand aayi................

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frnd 4ever - 11th February 2008, 11:32 AM

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Waqt se pehle,kuch Na mila,
Taqdir se zyada,paNa tha,
tarakki ki chahat,itni thi,
ke Dua karnNa,Bhul gAye.


bhul gaye hain,Ab yeh bhi,
kya_kya humne manga tha,
Mohabbat se Nafrat itni thi,
ke khuwahish karNa,Bhul gAye.

Wah wah..sonyji ...apne kya likha hain........dil se daad kubool kare..apki post bahut hi jyada pasand aayi................

mausam

Aadab mausam ji,
kaise hai aap?

aapka tahe dilse shukriya ada karte hain,k aapne hamari chhoti si koshish ko saraha,
aap logo k pyar bhare saath ki waja se hi,hum aaj kuch likh sakte hain,
bas aage b apna saath banaye rakhiyega,

apna khayal rakhiye
khush rahiye
ALLAH HAFIZ


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Mashaallah.............:) - 11th February 2008, 02:53 PM

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Assalam walekum,
kaise hain aap sab?

Aaj phir hum apni nayi koshish,aap sabke samne rakh rahe he.
is baar humne kuch alag tarah se likhne ki koshish ki hai ,
aur is umeed ke saath ise aap sabke nazar kar rahi hu,,,
ke aap hamesha ki tarah hamara hosla badhayege.
aur hamari khamiyon se hame ru_ba_ru karwayenge.

UMEED KARTI HUN,,AAP SABKO HAMARI YE NAZM PASAND AAYEGI,

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»*>>-(¯`·._.·KhWahish KArNa bHul gAye·._.·´¯)->>«


Waqt se pehle,kuch Na mila,
Taqdir se zyada,paNa tha,
tarakki ki chahat,itni thi,
ke Dua karnNa,Bhul gAye.


damm bharte the,Manzil ka,
waqtan fa_waqtan,chalna tha,
Bulandi ki,Unsiyat,itni thi,
ke safar karNa,Bhul gAye.


milne ki Arzu,itni thi,
pane ka jazba,itna tha,
darpan me khoye,itne hum,
ke waqt dekhNa,Bhul gAye.


Mann ke in,Registano me,
baghicha,pyar ka banana tha,
yakin me Milawat itni thi,
ke koshish karna,Bhul gAye.


sukun se Darr yu lagta hain,
Dard_e_dil ka,Alam tha,
Andhero ki adat itni thi,
ke roshni karNa,Bhul gAye.


bhul gaye hain,Ab yeh bhi,
kya_kya humne manga tha,
Mohabbat se Nafrat itni thi,
ke khuwahish karNa,Bhul gAye.


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Wo muskra k dard taal deta hai,
Ksi ksi ko KHUDA yh kamal deta hai,
Nazar utha k Wo js ko dekh le aik bar,
Yaqen kro usy mushkil me daal deta hai.



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Smile frnd 4 ever - 2nd April 2008, 04:56 PM

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SALAM SONY G MAIN NE KUCH DIN PAHLE HE JOIN KIA HAI MAIN JANTA HON K LAIT HO GAYA HON EN SAB NE ITNA KAHA HAI K KUCH KAHNE K ZARURAT NAHI HAI LAKIN MAIN AIK BAAT KAHON GA K APP NE WO BATAIN KI HAIN JO AIK ISNSAAN KI FELLING HOTI HAIN APP SADA KHUSH RAHO APNA KHYAL RAKHNA MASHAALAH





Wo muskra k dard taal deta hai,
Ksi ksi ko KHUDA yh kamal deta hai,
Nazar utha k Wo js ko dekh le aik bar,
Yaqen kro usy mushkil me daal deta hai.



KEEP SMILING





Aadab Rizi ji,
kaise hai aap?


ab kya kahe aapse?
sabse pehle aapse maafi chahte hai,ke aapka shukriya ada karne me itni der ho gayi,
kya kare aaj kal waqt ki kami hai,

per yakin maniye hamari is koshish me apka saath pakar hamari khushi dobala ho gayi,

bas yahi umeed hai,,ke aapka pyar bhara saath aage bhi bana rahega,AAMIN SUMM AAMIN,

BOHOT BOHOT SHUKRIYA,

APNA KHAYAL RAKHIYE
KHUSH RAHIYE
ALLAH HAFIZ


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