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hamara shouk - 20th August 2008, 06:55 PM
aashq bahaney ka hamey shauk sa hai
har kadam nishaan mitaney ka shauk sa hai

sagar se pyasey laut aatey hai
sahilon par kashti duboney ka shauk sa hai

log tutey hua tukdo ko jodtey hai
hamay bus bikhar janey ka shauk sa hai

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21st August 2008, 02:35 PM
hi.....
maine aapke saare nazm-e-shaayri padhi hain......aur mujhe saare pasand aaye......tumhaare emotions ko darshaane ka andaaz mujhe behad accha laga........ keep posting......

Ab to apni zindagi yuhi tanhaa rehti hain........
Saans leti hu to zakhmon ko hawa lagti hain........
Kabhi raazi to kabhi khafaa lagti hain..........
Tu hi bata EH zindagi tu meri kya lagti hain........
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hi.....
maine aapke saare nazm-e-shaayri padhi hain......aur mujhe saare pasand aaye......tumhaare emotions ko darshaane ka andaaz mujhe behad accha laga........ keep posting......
uske dekhne ke andaaj se pata chala,
kaise bujhata hai koi barso ki pyaas ek najar mein....
ye mahobbat hai yaaro meri koi dekhawa nahi...
kaise byaan karun ise main ek gajal mein......
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21st August 2008, 03:30 PM
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aashq bahaney ka hamey shauk sa hai
har kadam nishaan mitaney ka shauk sa hai

sagar se pyasey laut aatey hai
sahilon par kashti duboney ka shauk sa hai

log tutey hua tukdo ko jodtey hai
hamay bus bikhar janey ka shauk sa hai
aapke teeno sher bahut acche haiN....agar aap es mein 1-2 sher aur add kar deiN to yeh ek mukaamal gazal ban sakti hai....accha likhtey haiN aap...yoon hi mahfil mein aate rahiye....kush rahiye.


aapki diiii

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21st August 2008, 10:56 PM
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aashq bahaney ka hamey shauk sa hai
har kadam nishaan mitaney ka shauk sa hai

sagar se pyasey laut aatey hai
sahilon par kashti duboney ka shauk sa hai

log tutey hua tukdo ko jodtey hai
hamay bus bikhar janey ka shauk sa hai
aapke nagme bahat achhe hain ...aap aise hi share karte rahiye ....bahat khoob kaha aapne..............

log tutey hua tukdo ko jodtey hai
hamay bus bikhar janey ka shauk sa hai


Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai

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aapke teeno sher bahut acche haiN....agar aap es mein 1-2 sher aur add kar deiN to yeh ek mukaamal gazal ban sakti hai....accha likhtey haiN aap...yoon hi mahfil mein aate rahiye....kush rahiye.


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aapke nagme bahat achhe hain ...aap aise hi share karte rahiye ....bahat khoob kaha aapne..............

log tutey hua tukdo ko jodtey hai
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hum toh aapke nagmon ke fan hai...aapko hamra nagma pasand aaya..bahut khushi hui..

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hi.....
maine aapke saare nazm-e-shaayri padhi hain......aur mujhe saare pasand aaye......tumhaare emotions ko darshaane ka andaaz mujhe behad accha laga........ keep posting......
chhaliya ji...tareef ke liye shukriya..
mumbai mein khaan se hai aap?...

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22nd August 2008, 03:17 PM
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hum toh aapke nagmon ke fan hai...aapko hamra nagma pasand aaya..bahut khushi hui..
sukriya ............

Tumhain chaha hai shidat se magar tum se kehna paaye
Base hain Dil main mudat se magar tum se kehna paaye

Tumhari aankhon ne jo chahre pe likha hua dekha hai
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Yeh Dil dete hue hum ko tumhain taqeed karni thi
Is Dil ko rakhna hifazat se magar tum se kehna paaye

Tumhain kehna tha yeh humne Mohabbat cheez hai aisi
Nahi milti hai jo daulat se magar tum se kehna paaye..nm


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