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>> Iskadar mere ishQ kaa asar hoo jaye.. - 18th May 2009, 12:10 PM

Mehfil me sabhi dost ko, Omi ka salam.. kafi dino ke baad kuch likha hai, hope aap logo ko pasand aayega..

<<..Iskadar mere ishQ kaa asar hoo jaye..>>

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Iskadar mere ishQ kaa asar hoo jaye
ki uske dil meiN meraa basar hoo jaye

rag rag meiN bahta hai vo lahu ban k
bas us se bhi ab yeh khabar hoo jaye

aayine mein dek sakooN maiN aks uskaa
uskii soch meiN shaam-e-sehar hoo jaye

naam se uske hi machalta hai mera Dil
kaash uske dil mein mera ghar hoo jaye

palkoN pe bithaa kar rakhega "Omi" usse
Ki ab wo mere khawabo ka sahar hoo jaye

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Meri Apni Qalam se : OMi
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Ek InteZaar si ban gayi hai Zindagi,
Har pal tere aane ki Aash mein.......

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18th May 2009, 12:19 PM

WOW omi ji
its awesome yaar
kya kahe bohot ziyada khoobsurat hai
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18th May 2009, 12:20 PM

Thx u my frnd... aap ki nazar padi iss nacheez pe, aap ne hamari koshiso ko saraha.. iske liye tahee diL se dhanywad..

yuh hi mehfil me aate rahiye..

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,,,,,,,,ab toh aana hi padega ji,,,,,,,


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Love 19th May 2009, 01:22 PM

diL ke armanoN ki mahak se, aa usko mahka dooN,
aaj apne zakhm-e dil ke lahoo se dulhan ki maaNg sazA dooN..
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palkoN pe bithaa kar rakhega "Omi" usse
Ki ab wo mere khawabo ka sahar hoo jaye



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19th May 2009, 03:38 PM

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Mehfil me sabhi dost ko, Omi ka salam.. kafi dino ke baad kuch likha hai, hope aap logo ko pasand aayega..
<<..Iskadar mere ishQ kaa asar hoo jaye..>>



~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~




Iskadar mere ishQ kaa asar hoo jaye
ki uske dil meiN meraa basar hoo jaye

rag rag meiN bahta hai vo lahu ban k
bas us se bhi ab yeh khabar hoo jaye

aayine mein dek sakooN maiN aks uskaa
uskii soch meiN shaam-e-sehar hoo jaye

naam se uske hi machalta hai mera Dil
kaash uske dil mein mera ghar hoo jaye

palkoN pe bithaa kar rakhega "Omi" usse
Ki ab wo mere khawabo ka sahar hoo jaye

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Meri Apni Qalam se : OMi
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
superb again...............

naam se uske hi machalta hai mera Dil
kaash uske dil mein mera ghar hoo jaye

it was very nice........ but omi ji aisa kyu lag raha hai ke aap isse aur khaas likh kar sakte the...........
   
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19th May 2009, 07:56 PM

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diL ke armanoN ki mahak se, aa usko mahka dooN,
aaj apne zakhm-e dil ke lahoo se dulhan ki maaNg sazA dooN..
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20th May 2009, 12:00 PM

Excellent feelings, sabhi sher khoobsurat hai, simple but powerful, gud attempt, KEEP IT UP


Dard-e-dil-shikastah ka ghum kya karuN
Dost mera raqeeboN meiN masroor hai



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21st May 2009, 12:04 AM

hey thxx yaa...
kosis kar raha hu.. waise bhi suna hai simple word me khud represent karna jayda better hai ruther den shabdo ke jaal me ulajhne se..

yuhi aake, haula badate rahoo..

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21st May 2009, 12:20 AM

hey khanak..

1st i wud like to say.. thx 2u.. for ur reply..
and dear dekhiye.. likh toh bahut kux sakte the, bt deemag me har tym ek se thot nahi aate hai, may be next tym me isi gazal me kuch chnage karke aur achaa bana du..
anyways.. tumari iss point ke bhi thx..


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superb again...............

naam se uske hi machalta hai mera Dil
kaash uske dil mein mera ghar hoo jaye

it was very nice........ but omi ji aisa kyu lag raha hai ke aap isse aur khaas likh kar sakte the...........


Ek InteZaar si ban gayi hai Zindagi,
Har pal tere aane ki Aash mein.......
   
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21st May 2009, 08:20 AM

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Mehfil me sabhi dost ko, Omi ka salam.. kafi dino ke baad kuch likha hai, hope aap logo ko pasand aayega..
<<..Iskadar mere ishQ kaa asar hoo jaye..>>



~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~




Iskadar mere ishQ kaa asar hoo jaye
ki uske dil meiN meraa basar hoo jaye

rag rag meiN bahta hai vo lahu ban k
bas us se bhi ab yeh khabar hoo jaye

aayine mein dek sakooN maiN aks uskaa
uskii soch meiN shaam-e-sehar hoo jaye

naam se uske hi machalta hai mera Dil
kaash uske dil mein mera ghar hoo jaye

palkoN pe bithaa kar rakhega "Omi" usse
Ki ab wo mere khawabo ka sahar hoo jaye

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Meri Apni Qalam se : OMi
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Omi ji

aapki iss nazm ke kuch sher toh bahut hi laazawaab lage munjhe....kahi dil chhute hai....aise hi likhte rahiye...

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hey khanak..

1st i wud like to say.. thx 2u.. for ur reply..
and dear dekhiye.. likh toh bahut kux sakte the, bt deemag me har tym ek se thot nahi aate hai, may be next tym me isi gazal me kuch chnage karke aur achaa bana du..
anyways.. tumari iss point ke bhi thx..

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omi ji........... us change ka besabri se intzaar hai................. bas u hi hamare saath bane rahiye.........
   
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21st May 2009, 03:34 PM

Hey Naresh..

Aap ka bahut, bahut sukriya, aap ne hamari Qaalm ko yuh saraha, dekh ke achaa laga..
Yuh hi mehfil me aake hausala badate rahiye..


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Omi ji

aapki iss nazm ke kuch sher toh bahut hi laazawaab lage munjhe....kahi dil chhute hai....aise hi likhte rahiye...

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21st May 2009, 03:36 PM

hey khanak..

Thx again, tumhare reply, dekh ke achaa laga..
yuh hi, mehfil me sath banaye rakhiye..

thx again..


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omi ji........... us change ka besabri se intzaar hai................. bas u hi hamare saath bane rahiye.........


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Omi jee,
bahot achha likha hai aapne .....ghazal dil pe asar kar gayi .....janab aapki ghazal se to mahfil ko char chaand lag gayi .........khus rahiye

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Diya Ji..

Hamari gazal se nahi...
Aap ke aane se hamari mehfiL me char chand lag gaye hai ji..

aur aap ki tareefoo ke liye tahe diL se sukariya madam ji.

Yuh hi aapna sath banaye rakhiyeee..

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