Ghazal Of The Month "Jan 2010"

zainy · 08:08 AM

Mehfil ko Zainy ka salaam

Kaise hain aap sab??.....lijiye ek baar phir hazir hooN maiN...is mahine ki kuch khoobsurat ghazaloN ke saath...is mahine humeiN 4 ghazaleiN mili haiN...

Is baar hamare dostoN ne bohat hi khoobsurat ghazaleiN likhi haiN...chaliye ab aap sab in ghazaloN ko utne hi pyar se padhiye jitne pyar se inhe likha gaya hai,aur inhe apna vote dijiye...

DostoN ab aap sabko yeH tay karna hai ki inme se sabse behtar ghazal kaunsi hai..ab yeh faisla aapke hathoN me hai, zara soch samajhkar faisla kijiyega..

P.S:...Sabhi participants se meri guzarish hai ke woh apni ghazal ka zikr kisi se bhi na kareiN..........

Agar kisi member ne apne dostoN ko apni ghazal ke baare me bataya aur votes ke liye unhe majboor kiya,aur agar hameiN uska koi suboot mila, tou hameiN majbooran us ghazal ko kharij karna padega, aur woh member dubara kabhi Gtm me hissa nahi le sakega...

Enjoy Gtm, plzz play it fairly...

zainy · 1st February 2010, 10:00 AM

Khayalo.n ko masroof* rakhne ka, ye bahana achha hai
Husn-e-Mah* jo dekha toh, ab na hona judaa achha hai

Dekha jo unko fajr* ke waqt, dekta hi reh gaya
Jhuk gayee unki jo, nigaah-e-hayaaa achha hai

Ab talak muflis* tha dil, taaluqaat ki bheed mein
Tham gaya tanhaiyo.n ka, ye zaalim toofaaa' achha hai

Hotho.n se laganaa mai*, saza ho gaya nisharth*
Angoor ki beti ka ye mijaaz, badnumaaa achha hai

Kabhi Pee jaate the botalein, mehfil-e-guftagoo*
Ek hi Paimane mein,maikhane bhar ka maza achha hai

Kal tera zikr jo aaya, raat, baat hi baat mein
Makaa'n mera ye ban gaya, aashiyaaa' achha hai

Yaad badolat teri jo, mehek raha hai gulistaa'
Khuld-e-Muqaddas* lag rahi hai, aaj fizaaa achha hai

Deedar hi hua ab talak, aur kya kya sitam dhayegi
Ik kaafir ko aaj mil gaya, uska Khudaaa achha hai

Ibadat-e-arzoo ya khuda, ye kaafir haath uthata hai
Unke dil mein jo dede tu, thodi jagaaa achha hai

Dozakh* Maazi* jannat-e-mohabbat Mustaqbil*, hauslaa achha hai
Husn_Parast* ban gaya ye gustaakh*, Dilrubaaa achaa hai

*
Masroof: Busy
Mah: Moon
Fajr: Dawn
Muflis: Poor
Mai: Wine
Nisharth: Overnight
Guftagoo: conversation
Khuld-e-Muqaddas: Holy Paradise
Dozakh: Hell
Maazi: Past
Mustaqbil: Future
Husn_Parast: Someone who appreciates beauty
gustaakh: rude/arrogant

zainy · 1st February 2010, 10:01 AM

"JIS DIN SE HUYE TUM JUDA HUMSE"

Jis din se huye tum judaa humse
usi din se rootha hai khudaa humse.

kitni mannatein ki, per asarheen rahi
ab tou hoti bhi nahi dua humse.

halay-dil kar diya bayaan maine apna
apni kahani ab na tu chupa humse.

teri chahat mein chhoda tha saara jahaaN
ab apni chahat tou na churaa humse.

teri justaju teri arzoo hi ki maine sadaa
na maloom kyon rehta hai tuu judaa humse

rab hi hota hai aakhri saharaa sabka
uska bhi pataa na chala kab rootha humse.

yun tou chhod di hai saari dunia maine
ik tera nasha hi na chuutaa humse.

zainy · 1st February 2010, 10:02 AM

Tum na hamse gar Judaa hoti
yun na phir zindagi sazaa hoti

Teri chahat jaanta huuN maiN
kyon yeh saanse sabaa hoti

dee hoti milan ki khushiyan
rahe guzar na yun khafaa hoti

reh jaati is dil-e-anjuman me tum
itni nazr-e-inayat hi Jafaa hoti

khwabon me tera tasavvur
aankhon ke liye nashaa hoti

de saka sukun tujhe main
mohabbat me yahi wafaa hoti

zainy · 1st February 2010, 10:05 AM

MaiN apne Zuhuur* kay parakhchey* meiN bataa hua'a
Wujood mera MusafatoN* ki ghubaar meiN ataa hua'a

Na AndhiyoN ki Khabar na Gard-o-Pesh* ka pataa mujhey
MaiN Musas'sal Azaab meiN, duniya se Bilkul Kataa hua'a

Kuch Adhorey khwaab aur Kuch Sulagti YaadeiN liye
MaiN Gum gashtah* Ajnabi MudatonN se Thakaa Hua'a

Yeh Gumnam Rastey aur yeh Anjaan manzileiN
MaiN hooN Uryaan* Pa Libas mera Phatta Hua'a

Zindagi nay haraaya mujhey DostoN ne diya Dhoke
MaiN Haara Hua'a Khiladi Taqdeer se Pitaa hua'a

Har Khadam apne hi aghlaat* se maiN Tanhaa hua'a
Naajane kab mera jism meri Rooh se Judaa hua'a

zuhuur=appearance,
parakhchey=parts
musafaton= Distances
gard-o-pesh= Approaching Dust
gum-gashtah=wandering,lost
uryaan=naked,bare
aghlaat=mistakes

zainy · 3rd February 2010, 06:20 PM

plzz apne votes aur comments dekar ,members ki hausla afzaaii kijiye...

shukriyaH..

Dhaval · 4th February 2010, 12:22 PM

sabhee dostoN ne bahot hi Khoob liKhaa hay.. merii ShubhakaamnaayeN sabhee dostoN ke saath haii... bahot bahot mubaaraQ..!

aapka

~ Dhaval

sunita virender · **All d best all of u -** 4th February 2010, 04:21 PM

sabhi ne bahut accha likha hai.....dosto voting apne dil ke kahne par karna....jiske ahsaas aapke dil ko chu jayeN, usi gazal ko vote kijiyega

sabhi participants ko hamari shub-kaamnaye

naresh_mehra110 · 5th February 2010, 06:06 PM

GTM mai hissa lene wale sabhi shayar Dosto ne bahut achi ghazal kahi aur likhi hai..sabhi likhne walon ko tahe dil se daad detaa hu....aur duaa karta hu..aapki ghazal kaamiyaab ho..mujhe 3rd no. aur 4th no. ghazal ke ehsaas jiyada pasand aaye.....vote kise doonga aisa abhi socha nahi hai.....

sab se iltza hai ........imandaari se.....aur apne dil se vote karen....

Baqtiar · 7th February 2010, 03:49 PM

hmmm.....................

Raaz ki Baat kehdo tou jane mehfil mein phir kya ho.....????

N@zneen · 7th February 2010, 03:58 PM

Ths one is the best one, har ek sher lajawaab, whoever wrote it keep it up.............baaki sabhi ghazal bhi bht khoobsurat hain bt ths mnth i've decided not to give multiple votes, so frnds all the best to all of u

Quote:

Originally Posted by zainy

Khayalo.n ko masroof* rakhne ka, ye bahana achha hai
Husn-e-Mah* jo dekha toh, ab na hona judaa achha hai

Dekha jo unko fajr* ke waqt, dekta hi reh gaya
Jhuk gayee unki jo, nigaah-e-hayaaa achha hai

Ab talak muflis* tha dil, taaluqaat ki bheed mein
Tham gaya tanhaiyo.n ka, ye zaalim toofaaa' achha hai

Hotho.n se laganaa mai*, saza ho gaya nisharth*
Angoor ki beti ka ye mijaaz, badnumaaa achha hai

Kabhi Pee jaate the botalein, mehfil-e-guftagoo*
Ek hi Paimane mein,maikhane bhar ka maza achha hai

Kal tera zikr jo aaya, raat, baat hi baat mein
Makaa'n mera ye ban gaya, aashiyaaa' achha hai

Yaad badolat teri jo, mehek raha hai gulistaa'
Khuld-e-Muqaddas* lag rahi hai, aaj fizaaa achha hai

Deedar hi hua ab talak, aur kya kya sitam dhayegi
Ik kaafir ko aaj mil gaya, uska Khudaaa achha hai

Ibadat-e-arzoo ya khuda, ye kaafir haath uthata hai
Unke dil mein jo dede tu, thodi jagaaa achha hai

Dozakh* Maazi* jannat-e-mohabbat Mustaqbil*, hauslaa achha hai
Husn_Parast* ban gaya ye gustaakh*, Dilrubaaa achaa hai

Dhaval · 8th February 2010, 10:08 AM

sabhee dostoN se guzaariSh haii ki Vote Zaruur kareN...!

~ Dhaval

mehra126 · 12th February 2010, 09:00 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by zainy

Khayalo.n ko masroof* rakhne ka, ye bahana achha hai
Husn-e-Mah* jo dekha toh, ab na hona judaa achha hai

Dekha jo unko fajr* ke waqt, dekta hi reh gaya
Jhuk gayee unki jo, nigaah-e-hayaaa achha hai

Ab talak muflis* tha dil, taaluqaat ki bheed mein
Tham gaya tanhaiyo.n ka, ye zaalim toofaaa' achha hai

Hotho.n se laganaa mai*, saza ho gaya nisharth*
Angoor ki beti ka ye mijaaz, badnumaaa achha hai

Kabhi Pee jaate the botalein, mehfil-e-guftagoo*
Ek hi Paimane mein,maikhane bhar ka maza achha hai

Kal tera zikr jo aaya, raat, baat hi baat mein
Makaa'n mera ye ban gaya, aashiyaaa' achha hai

Yaad badolat teri jo, mehek raha hai gulistaa'
Khuld-e-Muqaddas* lag rahi hai, aaj fizaaa achha hai

Deedar hi hua ab talak, aur kya kya sitam dhayegi
Ik kaafir ko aaj mil gaya, uska Khudaaa achha hai

Ibadat-e-arzoo ya khuda, ye kaafir haath uthata hai
Unke dil mein jo dede tu, thodi jagaaa achha hai

Dozakh* Maazi* jannat-e-mohabbat Mustaqbil*, hauslaa achha hai
Husn_Parast* ban gaya ye gustaakh*, Dilrubaaa achaa hai

*
Masroof: Busy
Mah: Moon
Fajr: Dawn
Muflis: Poor
Mai: Wine
Nisharth: Overnight
Guftagoo: conversation
Khuld-e-Muqaddas: Holy Paradise
Dozakh: Hell
Maazi: Past
Mustaqbil: Future
Husn_Parast: Someone who appreciates beauty
gustaakh: rude/arrogant

badi hi dilkash gazal hai meri pahli pasand yahi hai
jisne bhi likhi hai bahut khoob likhi hai

mehra126 · 12th February 2010, 09:02 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by zainy

Tum na hamse gar Judaa hoti
yun na phir zindagi sazaa hoti

Teri chahat jaanta huuN maiN
kyon yeh saanse sabaa hoti

dee hoti milan ki khushiyan
rahe guzar na yun khafaa hoti

reh jaati is dil-e-anjuman me tum
itni nazr-e-inayat hi Jafaa hoti

khwabon me tera tasavvur
aankhon ke liye nashaa hoti

de saka sukun tujhe main
mohabbat me yahi wafaa hoti

bade hi sundar ahsaason ko itne simple shabdon me likha hai ki dil ko chhoo jaate hai jisne bhi likhi hai khoob likhi hai

zainy · 13th February 2010, 08:56 AM

VOTES PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ........................

Baqtiar · 15th February 2010, 10:30 AM

Zainy DON............... Jis ko bara mulkon ki GTM contestants dondh rahey hai...Kyun ke....DON ki Dhamkiyan itni khatarnaak thi hehehehehe

Quote:

Aaj poore sdc ke saamne maiN us group leader ko yeh warning deti huuN, ke woh khud aur uske group ke saare members,Gtm thread per hi aana chhod de aur is tarah ke mails kar kar ke apne dostoN ko jitaana chhod de,agar maine agle kisi bhi Gtm per , is saare group ko, kisi ek ghazal ko vote karte dekha, aur woh participant bhi usi group ka member hai, tou I promise, mai us ghazal ko hi neutralize kar dungi,aur jo member 2nd position per hai, usay winner declare karungi….bet on that…..

Quote:

Yeh mat samajhna ke zainy is helpless,woh aapka kuch nahi bigaad sakti, I can go any far to make Gtm a better place…maiN Gtm me hissa lene waale kisi bhi member ke saath na insafi nahi hone dungi…

Baqtiar · 15th February 2010, 10:38 AM

Oops.... Contestants nahi Voters......

Becharey Contestants tou mujhse naraaaz hai....

Khair Don ki Dhamki..."Ye Mat samajhna wo kuch biggad nahi sakti, i can go any far...." hahahaha i was laughing aload....

Katl bhi karte hai aur haath mein Talwar nahi..............

Zainy Don...... chotey chotey mausam shohra ko yun darana achi baat nahi

zainy · 15th February 2010, 02:17 PM

HAHAHAHA......................

Darne ki zarurat sirf usay hai, jo be-imaan ho......baqi members vote kar sakte haiN........................

LAST DAY OF VOTING FRIENDS.................

ajay nidaan · **behtreen adayegi hai aapki -** 4th March 2010, 08:05 PM

Khayalo.n ko masroof...

ghajal jagjit singh ji ke ek ghajjal ki tarz par likhi gayi hai.

wakai me shabdo me aapne piroya bahut khub hai .