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Geet: ke unse muHabbat haii itnii...! -
9th February 2010, 09:30 AM
Mere Pyaare dostoN: Namaskaar aur Aadaab...! baRe dinoN baad kuch liKhane kii koShiSh kii.. kal raat baiThe huye ..aasamaa.N meiN sitaaro ki chamak ko deKhte huye... aik Premi ke ehsaas ko soch rahaa thaa.. tou kuch lafzoN ne dil par dastak dee.. uN lafzoN ko sitaaro ko deKhte huye.. uss Premi ke ehsaas ko mehsoos karte huye aik gungunaane ki koShiSh kar rahaa thaa... uss koShiSh ko fir maine kaaGaz par uthaaraa.. liKhate huye Tech.baatoN par Gaur nahiiN farmaayaa! ees koShiSh ko aap sab ke saath baaNT rahaa huuN... ummid kartaa huuN aapka pyaar aur saath haMeShaa ki taraH Zaruur mileNgaa..! *************************** ey sitaaro! kuch to bataa do kismat meree tuM sajaa do ke unse muHabbat haii itnii... ke wahii meraa aasamaa.N ke wahii to merii zameeN unse hii saarii KhuShii sapne sach kar diKhaa do unse mujh ko milaa do ey sitaaro! kuch to bataa do kismat meree tuM sajaa do ke unse muHabbat hai itnii... ke wahii haii meraa Khudaa ke wahii to merii ha.nsii unse hii saarii KhuShii sapne sach kar diKhaa do uNse mujh ko milaa do mujh ko milaa do..milaa do.. ey sitaaro... mujh ko milaa do... bas milaa do..! ***************************  kaaSh dunyaa meN ye"kaaSh"nah hotaa zinda ho kar bhii maiN laaSh nah hotaa *~*Dhaval*~*....Ek ehsaas... |
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9th February 2010, 09:37 AM
OOYE !!HOYE!!........Kis ki yaadoN me doobey ho Dhaval bhai.....hmmmm,lagta hai ,valentine's day ka badi besabri se intezaar ho raha hai...hahaha....
 bohat hi khoobsurat ehsaas haiN..... Aap ki dost........ ....Zainy.... 1)PLEASE SELECT THE "SUPER GHAZAL OF THE YEAR".. |
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9th February 2010, 11:48 AM
Dhaval Ji...Namaste ! ishq se milan ki aarzoo jagata ...aapke geet ke bol aur ehsaas bahut khubsurat lage mujhe...dil se daad hazir hai......yuhi likhte rahen...khush rahen...
apna khayal rakhen... duaaon ke saath... |
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9th February 2010, 01:09 PM
chotu aa rahi hoon main gujraat, tumhe us se milane ke liye, vaise hai kauN yeh mohtarma.....????
dear chotu, bahut accha likha hai tumne.....ishq thread par kabhi hi aate ho tum, accha laga ishq par tumhe padna.....aise aur geeto.n ka intzaar rahega. huggs sister  ............Sunita Virender Singh............"पोंछ कर अश्क अपनी आँखों से मुस्कुअराओ तो कोई बात बने, सर झुकाने से कुछ नहीं होगा सर उठाओ तो कोई बात बने" |
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9th February 2010, 04:47 PM
bahut sundar bol hai geet ke..daad kubul kijiye dhaval bhai
apka apna ishk Aapka Apna Ishk ये इश्क नहीं घर खाला का उसको भी समझना लाजिम है | हर नक्शे कदम पर दिलबर के इस सर को झुकाना पड़ता है || email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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jawab appka muhabbat ki or se |
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jawab appka muhabbat ki or se -
10th February 2010, 11:32 AM
hoti kamyab muhabbat to har koi khuda hota,
rang bhari duniya hoti, har nazara juda hota, ki apni bebasi aur nakayambi pe rona, har ruhani chahat ka jamne me ye na sila hota...... ek koshish hai plz dont mind dhananjay pandit ...... benarasi |
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11th February 2010, 04:24 PM
aapka geet mujhe pukarta hua. bahut qareeb tak ley aaya. ati khoosurat ehsaas. likhte rahiey.
Radhika  Khamosh sa afsaana Pani se likha hota Na tumne kaha hota Na humne suna hota |
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12th February 2010, 01:53 PM
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Hi Dhavu...  bete padhayi nahi kar rahe ho aajkal tum... kabhi aasmaan ke sitaron ki taraf dekh kar kitabon ko bhi yaad karliya karo....:P ... meine tumhare geet ki tabdeelee ki hai kuch ... :P pasand na aaye to bhi pasand karna ey sitaaro! kuch to bataa do kismat meree tuM sajaa do ke exams mere sar pe hai.N ke course complete nahi hai.N ke tutions bhi nahi hai.N bas kisi tarah pass karado sapneN sach kar diKhaa do mujhe kuch bana do ey sitaaro! kuch to bataa do kismat meree tuM sajaa do ke kuch atajataa nahiN ke samajh bhi kuch ata nahi.N ke kya karun mein kuch toh mujhe bata do sapneN sach kar diKhaa do mujhe kuch bana do mujh ko kuch bana do..bana do.. ey sitaaro... mujh ko bana do... bas kuch banaa do..! khair joke tha ji... sach mein bahut pyara likhaa hai... kintu parantu...yeh sab likhne ke liye itna tym kaise niqaalte ho tanikk batao toh... :P aise hi likhte raho...khush raho abaad raho...mehyfil-e-raunaq raho... taek caer jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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12th February 2010, 02:52 PM
dhaval bhai bahut khubsurat geet hai bilkul apki tarah. bahut acha laga padhakar
khush rahiye hamesha aur likhte rahahiye. AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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14th February 2010, 11:32 AM
Nice lines Dhaval Jee.......................
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +91 9967511713
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15th February 2010, 05:37 PM
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17th February 2010, 03:41 PM
Dhaval ji bhaut umda
agar vo padhti hogi to jarur milegi hamari duaa aapke saath hai......... |
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22nd February 2010, 06:02 PM
Dhaval,
Pyaara likha hai bahot...kitna achha hota agar sitare sacch me man ki iccha puri karte to..kaash.... ehsaaso ko achha bayaan kiya apne sitaro ke saamne...hahaha... likhte rahiye... Grazie Pooja  ===========Pooja_D=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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24th February 2010, 09:04 PM
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namaste! kisii ki yaadoN meiN Khud Doob kar yeh Geet nahiiN liKhaa maine.. kisi ki yaadoN meiN Doobe huye ShKs ke ehsaasoN ko bayaa.n karne ki koShiSh thee yeh tou.. pasaNd karne ke liye ShuKriyaaH! duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval kaaSh dunyaa meN ye"kaaSh"nah hotaa zinda ho kar bhii maiN laaSh nah hotaa *~*Dhaval*~*....Ek ehsaas... |
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27th February 2010, 04:28 PM
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Naresh bhaa'ii: namaste! aapne apnaa Qeemtee waQt diyaa baRii hi KhUShii hu'ii mujhe.. aage bhee yuuNhi paRhte rahiyeNgaa.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN... KhuSh raheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~Dhaval kaaSh dunyaa meN ye"kaaSh"nah hotaa zinda ho kar bhii maiN laaSh nah hotaa *~*Dhaval*~*....Ek ehsaas... |
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10th March 2010, 01:06 PM
Dhawal Bhai AadaaB!
Wah kya baat hai, behad khoob lafz aur adaygii ki hai aapne, aapka Geet bahut khub laga..... ek do mukhade aur bhi laga dete to char chand lag jate aapke is geet par.... Likhate rhaiye, Aur aise hi geetoN aur NazmoN se bazm ko roshan karte rahiye... Khush rhiaye, Khuda Hafez.... Don't disturb me....... I am quiet......... 
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21st March 2010, 04:47 PM
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pranaam! pehle to geet ki pasandagee ke liye bahot baDaa wala thank U! aur zaruur aa'iiye Gujarat ..par koii moHtarmaa hai nahiiN life meiN.. aapse thoRinaa ChhupaauNgaa.. saath dete raheN..KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ChhoTu kaaSh dunyaa meN ye"kaaSh"nah hotaa zinda ho kar bhii maiN laaSh nah hotaa *~*Dhaval*~*....Ek ehsaas... |
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9th April 2010, 02:48 PM
chhote bhai ki teraf se daad kabul karein.........ehsas sundar hai
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9th April 2010, 06:35 PM
bahut khoob bhaiyya.... ehsaas bahut khubsoorat hai aur adaygi dilkash..... likhte rahiye.... khush rahiye.....
 "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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aADAB DHAVAL JI |
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aADAB DHAVAL JI -
12th April 2010, 02:16 PM
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aADAB DHAVAL JI, KAISE HAI AAP? WAAH JANAB KYA BAAT HAIN HMMMMMMMMMMMMM sovhne wali baat hai,,itna pyaar _ or khubsurat ehsaas hai kiske liye kher jis kisi ke liye bhi kahe ho...per hai laa jawab. apni kalam ko hamesha chalate rahiyega. khush rahiye ALLAH HAFIZ Sweet HASSONI, ( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi ) ()""""()()""""() ( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' ) (,) (,) (,) (,) SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN forever.. and ever and ever! **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ |
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17th May 2010, 10:13 AM
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namaste: aapne merii koShiSh ko pasaNd kiyaa maiN aapka ShuKraGuzaar huuN .. aage bhee yuuNhi paRhte raheN! KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval kaaSh dunyaa meN ye"kaaSh"nah hotaa zinda ho kar bhii maiN laaSh nah hotaa *~*Dhaval*~*....Ek ehsaas... |
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namaskaar! bahot KhuShii hu'ii aapne apni taraf se kuChh ehsaasoN ko joRaa.. ShuKriyaaH.. yuuNhi saath dete raheN aage bhee..! KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval kaaSh dunyaa meN ye"kaaSh"nah hotaa zinda ho kar bhii maiN laaSh nah hotaa *~*Dhaval*~*....Ek ehsaas... |
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17th May 2010, 10:16 AM
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Aadaab! be-Had ShuKraGuzaar huuN aapka aapne apnaa Qeemtee waQt merii koShiSh ko diyaa.. saath nibhaate raheN! KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval kaaSh dunyaa meN ye"kaaSh"nah hotaa zinda ho kar bhii maiN laaSh nah hotaa *~*Dhaval*~*....Ek ehsaas... |
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17th May 2010, 10:53 PM
Dhaval ji,
Namaste! Bahot achhi lagi aapki ye rachna...... Dil se daad hazir hai. qubool kaen!Mann |
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namaste! bahot bahot dhanyawaad aapne apnaa qeemtee waqt diyaa! paRhte rahe.n aage bhee! KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n duaao.n ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval kaaSh dunyaa meN ye"kaaSh"nah hotaa zinda ho kar bhii maiN laaSh nah hotaa *~*Dhaval*~*....Ek ehsaas... |
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4th June 2010, 09:49 PM
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namaste! Shukriyaa'h... bas yuuNhi paRhte rahe.n aage bhee! KhuSh rahe.n.. duaao.n ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval kaaSh dunyaa meN ye"kaaSh"nah hotaa zinda ho kar bhii maiN laaSh nah hotaa *~*Dhaval*~*....Ek ehsaas... |
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