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aap ka yu sirf shayri likhna bahot acha lagta hai bahot khubsurat hai .sadgi se bahri hui ye gazal padh ne ka acha lagta hai. keep writing 4 us.
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4th October 2003, 09:53 PM
Musharrafh Jee, wah bohot achha hein. Ha, hamesha ki tarha hi aapka kalam hume bara achha lagta hein.
Sukriya. Likhte rahiyega. Aapna khayal rakhiyega.
Allah Hafiz.
*Aapni Parwaaz-e-Takhayyull Hain Zamane Se Juda
Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain
Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche**
*~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~**
mujhe baarish kaa mausam aur baadal
achcha lagta hai
uski haseen aankhon mein phela kaajal
achcha lagta hai
churaana haath mujh se
aur jaana ghair ki jaanib
haseen saajan mer dil ker ke ghayel
achcha lagta hai
BOHAT KHOOB MUSHARRAF HUSSAIN SAHEB.....................waise yeh radeef hameiN bhi behad pasand aaya, is radeef per kisi din hum bhi zarur kuch likhenge....
aapki nayi peshkash ka besabri se intezaar hai....
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...