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Kaise koi Bhulaaye?? - 16th September 2003, 01:57 PM

Adaab Doston!

Akant ji ne ek baRa pyaara kalaam likha tha, 'Kaise bhul jaau..' usi se inspire hokar aaj hum ye ashaar yahan post kar rahe hain.. Umeed hai ki pasand aayega..


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Kaise koi bhulaaye,
Woh guzre hue pal,
Woh dil me jugnu,
Yaadon ke kamal.

Woh saawan ka mahina,
Hansi se gunjti waadiyan,
Phoolon par jami boondein,
Aur un par Thehri titliyan.

Woh sard mausam me,
Anch se haath garam karna,
Aur Nazaron, ishaaron se,
Soz e dil thanD karna.

Woh khamakha muskuraana,
Khamosh aahein bharna.
Ikraar zehen me sochna,
Aur dil hi dil me darrna.

Woh aasmaani uRaan,
Woh chaand ki baatein,
Subah ke intezaar me,
Woh bechayn raatein.

Kaise koi bhulaaye,
Woh guzre hue pal,
Woh dil me jugnu,
Yaadon ke kamal

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Smile Taarif-e-kaabil! - 16th September 2003, 02:29 PM

Beautiful, fantastic,excellent

Bahut hi khubsoorat hai, Gar aur taarif karo tu iski khubsoorati kam hojayegi

Great writen Keep it up

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16th September 2003, 02:31 PM

Thank you, Dhanywaad, Merci, Shukria!!

Gar aur shukria adaa kiya to aapki tareef ki khubsoorti kum ho jaayegi..

LOL!

Thanks for the encouragement!


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16th September 2003, 02:35 PM

Afshan Jee, Bohot khub likhha hein aapne.
Puri likhdiya hein aapne aur kuch baki nehi lagraha hein. Aise hi likhte rahiyega. Thanks. Take care. God bless.
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16th September 2003, 02:38 PM

Likhne ko bohat hai!.. Itna hai ki use bayaan karne ke liye waqt aur alfaaz kum paR jaate hain.. kya kya hai, jo kabhi hulaaya nahi ja sakta.. ye to shayad puuri tarah byaan karna mumkin hi nahi..


Aapne is kalaam ko apna waqt, aur apne alfaaz diye.. aapka tahe dil se shukria!


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16th September 2003, 02:43 PM

Afshan Jee, Aapne toh meri dilki baate kehdiya.
Aur ish liye meine aise likhha. I hope you can understand my point. Waise shayed aap ishe kabhi waqt mile toh complete bhi kardijiyega. Sukriya aapki ke aapne waqt nikal ke mujhe reply kee. Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless.
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16th September 2003, 02:47 PM

I understand Shimul ji..

Aur hum koshish zaroor karenge, ki kabhi is nazm ko aage bara sakein.. aap younhi himmat baRaate rahiyega.. thanks!


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16th September 2003, 03:01 PM

Afshan!

Nothing changed!!! You always write so good yaar.


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16th September 2003, 03:04 PM

LOL.. some people call it the gift of gab!.. Hum bas likhte hain.. ye paRne waale ki nazar hoti hai jo ashaar me khubsoorti dhoondhti hai.. Aapko ye kalaam pasand aaya, hume bohat khushi hui.. thanks!


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16th September 2003, 03:07 PM

Dear Afshan Jee, Mein jab tak hu toh zaroor reply karti rahungi.
Waise aap toh hamesha se hi achhe hi likhte hein, meine pehle bhi kaha aapko. Aap zaroor ishko puri karsakenge. I know that.
Thank you. Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless.
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16th September 2003, 03:09 PM

Jazbaaton par aytbaar hai tujhe Aye Kalam!
Dekhte hain ye kab tak tera saath dete hain.


Jab tak humare jazbaat saath dete rahe.. hum yunhi likhte rahenge..

Once again.. thanks!


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16th September 2003, 03:18 PM

Dear Afshan Jee, waise log mujhe jazbaati kehte hein.
Shayed mein kuch hadh se jiyada hi jazbaati hu.
Lekin mein jo bhi kehti hu aur sunti hu woh meri dil kehta hein aur mein dilki baate kehti hu aur sunti hu.
Waise mujhe pata hein ke aapne mujhe nehi kaha kuch lekin mein yuhi kehdiya, mein keya karu? Dilne kaha so mein kehdiya.
Sukriya aapka. Mein jab tak ish zinda hu tab tak mein aise hi rahungi, kyu ke mein khudh ko badal nehi sakti. It's too late I guess.
Yes I know. And I know as well you can do it. It's just a matter of time. Meri duwa hein aur rahega. Aapna khayal rakhiyega.
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16th September 2003, 03:23 PM

Log hume patthar kehte hain.. humari shayri shayad kuchh aur kehti hai.. na jaane logoon ko ghalatfehmi hai, ya shayri jhhooti..

Shimul ji.. aapne itne khul ke baat ki hai, hume bohat achha laga.. aap sahi hain.. hume kisi ke liye bhi badalna nahi chahiye.. aksar log pyaar paane ki chah me itna badal jaate hain ki apna wajood hi bhool jaate hain.. aap jaisi hain, waisi hi theek hain.. Umeed hai ki aap aage bhi yunhi hi dil ki baat bayaan karte rahengi. Dua ke liye shukria..


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16th September 2003, 03:39 PM

Dear Afshan Jee, Logoka kaam hi hote hein kehna woh toh kuch bhi kehdenge lekin aapko pata hoga kausa sahi aur kaunsa galat.
Ha, bohot pehle mujhe bhi aise hi baate kafhi pareshan karte the lekin mujhe pata chala mein sahi hu kyu ke dil kabhi galat nehi kehta. Chahe log pagal kahe chahe jo marzi kahe mujhe koi fark nehi parta hein ab.
Aap aur Patther? Well I can only say this that who says so they are totally wrong.
Ha, kabhi kabhi shayed aap logoke nazar meh aise hi nazar ate honge, lekin meri nazar meh aap kuch aur hi hein aur hamesha rahenge. Aur duwa mein dilse karti hu. Sukriya kehke aap mujhe sharminda na kijiyega, only a request.
I hope you can understand. Aapka likhha hua mujhe toh bohot achha lagta hein toh iska keya yeh matlab hua ke mein bhi Patther ka hu? Aap khudh itni samajhdar hein aap samajhle.
Aur ek request, please ayenda aap aisi waisi baate nehi sochenge. Sukriya. Aapna khayal rakhiyega.
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16th September 2003, 03:44 PM



Shayad isi liye log hume patthar kehte hain.. kyonki unki kisi baat ka asar hota hi nahi hum par.. sach kahein to kuchh hadh tak ye dil sakht hai!.. lekin ise aisa hona bhi zaroori hai.. warna choNt aur lagti.. khair, ye sab baatein chhodo!.. Tum apna khayaal rakho.. aur humesha muskuraati raho..


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16th September 2003, 03:55 PM

Dear Afshan Jee, ab jake aapko pata chala. Exactly yehi hein.
Upar se mein bhi shayed aise hi thorisi hu. Sukriya.
Mujhe achha laga ke aapko pata hein.
Mein toh muskurate hi rahti hu. Aur aap bhi aise hi likhte rahiyega.
Aur muskurana toh bohot zaroori hein chahe woh asli ho yea na.
Aaj aapse baate karke bohot achha laga.
Actually I just came back today from Turky. Lekin jish liye gayi thi woh nehi hopaya. Aur mujhe yeh shakh bhi tha ke aise hi hona hein lekin fhir bhi risk lena bhi toh zaroori hein, kyu?
I haven't been sleeping for two nights in a row.
Abhi bhi neend toh nehi arahi hein lekin I am tired.
Anyway, aapko aur nehi rukna mujhe. Aapki aur bhi bohot kaam kaj honge.
Aapna khayal rakhiyega.
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16th September 2003, 04:01 PM

Aap rest karo.. kaafi thak gayi hongi... Baat cheet to chalti rahegi... jab bhi man ho, PM kar dena..ok??

Apse phir mulaqaat hogi..

Tab tak ke liye.. Take care!


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16th September 2003, 04:09 PM

Dear Afshan Jee, Mein thaki huyi zaroor hu lekin yeh baat karne meh mujhe koi problems nehi hoti hein. Aur ha, shayed mein aapko bhi shayed kuch jiyadahi tired kardu. Yeh daar hein.
Aise na ho ke aap bhi mujhe pagal kehna shuru karde.
Just kidding.
Waise mein agar kabhi thaki huyi hu toh meri dil kuch bhi kehta hein toh mein sirf aur sirf wohi likhti jati hu. Because my brain dosen't work so I can't think ke keya nehi kehna chahiye aur keya kehna chahiye.
I hope you understand. Ish liye achha hein ke mein kuch aur nehi kahu toh. Thank you for your time, I really loved to talk to you.
Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless.
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16th September 2003, 05:07 PM

Kisi na kisi ki banno banna hai ke nahi, to

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kahien na kahien koi intazaar karta hoga, rah takta hoga tumhari
tum bhi to talaash karo, kabhi to milega woh kahien na kahien

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hello - 16th September 2003, 05:53 PM

Afshan ji,

maine to sirf ek raah dikhaayie thi
aapne to puri manjil tak pahucha diya,
hum jise kaach bhi na bana sake
use aapne hira(diamond) bana diya

ki thi surat maine likhane ki,
per pura na ker saka tha use
padh ke yahaN aapke shabd
raha na kuchh adhura usmein


bas etana hi kah paane ki sthiti mein hoon, mujhe jo laga main sab online type kerta gaya. samay mere pass bahut kam hai, so ab chalta hoon. apana kheyaal rakhe.


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Hi - 16th September 2003, 05:54 PM

waaah se shuru karta hun aur waaaah parr khatmm karata hun....Af..daad kabul farmaye....iss khaqsar sanju kii!!! baki bate baad mai..chalta hu,,,,Sanju


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16th September 2003, 06:04 PM

Baba ji..

HUme jise milna tha.. so mil chuke.. aur bichhaD chuke.. ab kya hai kismat me.. kaun jaane.. hum sab musaafir hain.. raah me kya milta hai, dekhte hain.. Aur aap ki kisi bhi baat ka hume bura nahi laga..


Akant ji!

Aapne jo likha tha.. usne to hume ye likhne ki preRna di.. us par aap aur bhi itna kuchh keh gaye!.. bas, tahe dil se shukria kar sakte hain aapko bas..


Sanju!!

Ye kya baat hui?? aaye.. aur itni jaldi chal diye!!!.. bohat busy ho shayad..

chalo.. tum aaye to sahi.. bohat bohat shukria janaab!!


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Cool Bahut Khoob - 17th September 2003, 10:58 AM

Bahut Khoob likha hai aapne Bannoji, wakai Kuchh bhi bhool paana bahut mushkil hai.

YooNhi likhti rahiyega.

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17th September 2003, 12:53 PM

aur bohat kuchh bhool paana namumkin...

Chaand ji..

Aapki shayri ke hum kaayal the hi.. ab aapke shukrguzaar bhi ho gaye ki aapne is kalaam ko apna waqt aur apne anmol alfaaz diye. Ye humare liye bohat maayne rakhte hain.. shukria!


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Salaam bhai!!

LOL.. kya karein.. ye zamaana hai hi 'multi-purpose' cheezon ka.. shayri me bhi anek roop hon, to achha hai..

Aapko ye kalaam pasand aaya.. hume aur kya chahiye..


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Meena.. tumhe ye kalaam pasand aaya, ye kya kum tareef hai????


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Banno ji
exellent. i have not read Akant ji shayri now i will read. kutch alag likhne ka prayas kamyab lajawab keep it up.


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Mita ji..

Akant ji ka kalaam zaroor paRna.. bohat achha likha hai unhone!

Aap ko ye kalaam pasand aaya.. apne iski tareef ki.. aapka bohat bohat shukria!


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Mast ji..

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Re: Kaise koi Bhulaaye?? - 5th September 2004, 03:58 PM

Banno jii wakaii bahot pyaaraa likhaa hai

khaaskar ye chand line
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Woh khamakha muskuraana,
Khamosh aahein bharna.
Ikraar zehen me sochna,
Aur dil hi dil me darrna.


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Durga ji..

Ye to bas kuchh khayaal the jo Akant ji ki rachna paR kar humaare mann me chale aaye.. bas.. inhi khayaaloN ko kaaghaz par utaar diya.. DostoN ne saraaha aur ye nazm ban gayi..

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Re: Kaise koi Bhulaaye?? - 6th October 2004, 02:30 AM

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Kaise koi bhulaaye,
Woh guzre hue pal,
Woh dil me jugnu,
Yaadon ke kamal.

Woh saawan ka mahina,
Hansi se gunjti waadiyan,
Phoolon par jami boondein,
Aur un par Thehri titliyan.

Woh sard mausam me,
Anch se haath garam karna,
Aur Nazaron, ishaaron se,
Soz e dil thanD karna.

Woh khamakha muskuraana,
Khamosh aahein bharna.
Ikraar zehen me sochna,
Aur dil hi dil me darrna.

Woh aasmaani uRaan,
Woh chaand ki baatein,
Subah ke intezaar me,
Woh bechayn raatein.

Kaise koi bhulaaye,
Woh guzre hue pal,
Woh dil me jugnu,
Yaadon ke kamal

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Aayega woh samay.. aayega woh phir woh guzra kal..
Muskura de tu aaj... aur aage badh..
Saath honge tere hum saaye woh kal..
Housla kar tu aaj.. aur aage tu nikal..

Der se yahan aane ke liye maafi chaahti hun...

Afshan ji aapne humesha ki tarah ek bahut hi khoobsoorat nagma pesh kiya hai..

Par is baar to sach mein yun laga jaise meri zindagi ko zehan mein rakh ke aapne yeh likha ho... woh guzra vakt jo kabhi sach mein guzra hi nahi.. phir se aage laa diya aapne... Bahut bahut shukriya... woh anmol yaadein.. aur na jaane kitni aur baatein anmol yaadon ke khazaane mein aati rahengi..

Meri daad kubool farmaaiye..

Apna khayaal rakhiye..

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Hmmmm.. Guzra hua waqt.. har kisi ki zndagi me.. ateet me.. kuchh aise pal hote hain jo ta umr saath nibhaate hain.. ek geet ke bol yaad aa rahe hain..

Chhoti chhoti baatoN ki hain yaadein baRi..

Bas.. yahi chhoti chhoti baatein bohat yaad aati hain.. kuchh dard de jaati hain.. to kuchh jab bhi yaad aati hain, laboN par muskaan sajaa jaati hain... Umeed aur dua rahegi ki aapki zindagi me aisi dheroN yaadein bane.. jinhe soch kar aap humesha hansti muskuraati rahein!

Is kadar hausla baRaane ke liye bohat bohat shukria.. aap bhi apna khayaal rakhein.. aur yunhi saath dete rahein..


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