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16th September 2007, 09:35 PM

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aap sabh ko jo kabhi na kabhi kuch na kuch dil se nikal kar kagaaz par likthe hai, unko mein kudh tareef deena chaahtee hu. Hum parthe sabh ke shayri hai, par kabhi kabhi reply post nahin karthe. Yeh saach hai ke sabh ka hunsla barhana chayee, par mein sirf ithna kaho ge ke ke koi kuch reply karee ya na karee aap likhthee rahee. Hunsla ithnee jaldee nahin har the, aur yeh koi contest bhi nahin hai ke kyon acha likhtha hai ya nahin. Yeh tho kisse ne site banayee hai jo hum sabh ko maukha deethe hai dil ke kuch baath sunanee ko. Please contine to write no matter what it may be. Writting something drains the heart of some pain and lets one know that atleast someone knows how they feel.

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aap sabh ko jo kabhi na kabhi kuch na kuch dil se nikal kar kagaaz par likthe hai, unko mein kudh tareef deena chaahtee hu. Hum parthe sabh ke shayri hai, par kabhi kabhi reply post nahin karthe. Yeh saach hai ke sabh ka hunsla barhana chayee, par mein sirf ithna kaho ge ke ke koi kuch reply karee ya na karee aap likhthee rahee. Hunsla ithnee jaldee nahin har the, aur yeh koi contest bhi nahin hai ke kyon acha likhtha hai ya nahin. Yeh tho kisse ne site banayee hai jo hum sabh ko maukha deethe hai dil ke kuch baath sunanee ko. Please contine to write no matter what it may be. Writting something drains the heart of some pain and lets one know that atleast someone knows how they feel.

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Jee Haa...you are absolutely right...keep writing...doesn't matter what anyone says! Most genuises did whatever they're famous for by fluke or by mistake!

   
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6th April 2008, 08:55 AM

adab dosto
men ne bade chao se sab ke jawabat padhe. mera to kahna he k ap log likhie or padhie aur dad bhi dijie. dad dene se hausla afzai hoti hai jo k shairi ka ek aham juzv he isi lie mushaire hote hen or vahan har sher par dad di jati he kisi par kam to kisi par ziyada.
mera yeh bhi manna he k padhna or rasmi wah wah ke sath sath agar apko kalam men koi kami ya beshi nazar aye to use ba adab ba mulahiza batane se na jhijhak karen ku k batane se hi ilm kii shama jalti he aur ham ek dusre se sikhenge to hi hamara kalyan hoga shero shairi ke medan men.
ho sakta he ap meri bat se sehmat an hon par aesa kahna mera farz banta ha so kah diya. chhama chaahunga agar koi gutaakhi ho gai ho to.
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U'R thought is very true.
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