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Rain - 1st March 2006, 02:27 AM

The sky grew to be dark with anger
Shortly, with no prompt, it tore
It poured all its emotions, whether angry or mad
It showed others, that yes, it was not happy, but sad
The rain poured down, concealing my tears
The salty, similar taste was vulnerable to all fears
And then, out of nowhere,
Came a ray of sunshine
Growing bigger and bigger, so prime
The rain left its mark, but not for the worse
The landmark, the droplets did nurse
Soon, everything became healthy and strong
People say rain is bad, they’re neither right, nor wrong
But after the rain, comes the glow
It heightens the beauty of everything that never seemed so
The shower is just a warning of the happiness that lies ahead
We just decipher the meaning as something else,
“Rain rain go away,” a million times we have erroneously pled

hmmm...nah...forget it...no need to explain wht i have written
Just that...for a while, going to stop writing, taking a break...for a few days


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hi - 1st March 2006, 04:41 AM

Hi Warda

U always write brilleitnt, the way u expressed Rain, one of my fav topic as well! I liked it, but hey! I am a fan of urs yaar, plz dont take a break, i mean u can take a break, but do come here often...and do keep in touch and writing...we dont want you to feel alone at all at any point and know wht we are with you dear!

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1st March 2006, 04:54 AM

Sweetu,

Welll written and breaks are good... but not that they have to be too long do they... u dont want ur bro to miss u too much do u....

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Re: Rain - 1st March 2006, 06:09 AM

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Originally posted by Mukhra
The sky grew to be dark with anger
Shortly, with no prompt, it tore
It poured all its emotions, whether angry or mad
It showed others, that yes, it was not happy, but sad
The rain poured down, concealing my tears
The salty, similar taste was vulnerable to all fears
And then, out of nowhere,
Came a ray of sunshine
Growing bigger and bigger, so prime
The rain left its mark, but not for the worse
The landmark, the droplets did nurse
Soon, everything became healthy and strong
People say rain is bad, they’re neither right, nor wrong
But after the rain, comes the glow
It heightens the beauty of everything that never seemed so
The shower is just a warning of the happiness that lies ahead
We just decipher the meaning as something else,
“Rain rain go away,” a million times we have erroneously pled

hmmm...nah...forget it...no need to explain wht i have written
Just that...for a while, going to stop writing, taking a break...for a few days
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warda jee
this wording hit my heart beats , beautiful is not the word , keep writing , i liked it ....... waiting to read soon someting from ur end .

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1st March 2006, 12:18 PM

hey kiddo!!!!!!!!! frankly speking i'didnt like little .................................................. .................................................. ........................................bcoz i liked a lot


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1st March 2006, 01:19 PM

warda rain has been my fav . alwayz and u have wtiren beautiful abt that .after rain comes glow agree dear

loved it
what happend y u r thinking to take a break ?
exam or stress
well in both condition i will just say take a break but come back soon we all r going to miss u and ur beautiful expressions

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Re: Rain - 1st March 2006, 02:45 PM

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Originally posted by Mukhra
The sky grew to be dark with anger
Shortly, with no prompt, it tore
It poured all its emotions, whether angry or mad
It showed others, that yes, it was not happy, but sad
The rain poured down, concealing my tears
The salty, similar taste was vulnerable to all fears
And then, out of nowhere,
Came a ray of sunshine
Growing bigger and bigger, so prime
The rain left its mark, but not for the worse
The landmark, the droplets did nurse
Soon, everything became healthy and strong
People say rain is bad, they’re neither right, nor wrong
But after the rain, comes the glow
It heightens the beauty of everything that never seemed so
The shower is just a warning of the happiness that lies ahead
We just decipher the meaning as something else,
“Rain rain go away,” a million times we have erroneously pled

hmmm...nah...forget it...no need to explain wht i have written
Just that...for a while, going to stop writing, taking a break...for a few days
beautiful honey..........
whenever u write something it alwaz touches me deep.....
hey honey do come back soon from ur break as u know very well that we all will be missing u a lot swetu......once in a while breaks r good but not the long ones....will wait for u.
love u..miss u.


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1st March 2006, 08:19 PM

very nice...
i knw u r angry with me...
take a break better...let thins settle down...
take care


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Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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I love my poetry…
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