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Love kal raat khuda aaya..... - 1st February 2009, 01:23 AM

hi frens... dis is d first creation dat i m going to post out here! i hope u all wud like it!

Kal raat khuda aaya mere khwab me..
Aur bola…
Kya dekha apne yaar me
Jo khuda bnaya use…?
Kya khaasiyat dikhi..jo bhuli mujhe
Aur mujhse pehle bhaithaya use…?
Maine tujhe jiwan diya…
Mere hi kaaran wo tere paas hai..
Fir kyun….mujhe bhul palko pe sjaya use?
Ye gustaakhi jo tune ki hai…
Kya kaaran main jaan skta hu…??
Kyun itna apna bnaya use??
Maine hi pyaar ka matlab sikhaya…
Main hi duniya chalaata hu…
Mere hi kaaran tu hai…
Fir kyun tune rab bnaaya use???

Main hasti rhi….chupchaap sab sunti rhi..
Ab baari meri thi bolne ki…
Aur us khuda ki sun-ne ki…
Haste hue maine jawab diyaaaa…
Wah re khuda....tu hi bta galti meri kya hai..jo khuda bnaya use
Gustaakhi meri kya hai jo khuda bnaya use??
Kyun itna achcha bnaya tune use?
Khaasiyat 1 ho to ginaaaun..
Tune jiwan mujhe diya..
Par usne jina sikhaya…..
Hasna rona….jid karna usne sikhaya…
Ik wo paas hota hai..to kaise tujhe yaad karun…
Kaise use chhod tujhe palko pe sajaoon…
Tu hi bta galti meri kya hai jo khuda bnaya use…
Tu beshak duniyaa chalata hoga…
Par meri duniya hi wahi hai…
Isliye apna bnaya use…
Tune pyaar ka matlab sikhaya…
Par pyaar ke dushman b tune hi bnaye…
Usne to bas pyaar se thaama mujhe…
Jb galti karu…to sambhaala hai mujhe…
Tujhe to aaj tk dekha hi nhi…
Tu hai b ya nhi..pta nhi..
Par dekhun use..to ik ajab sa sukoon milta hai….
Ya yun kahun ki mujhe usme tu dikhta hai…
Ab bta galti meri kya hai.. jo khuda bnaya use…
Tu laakh khafa rahe…koi farak nhi…
Uska khafa hona gwara nhi…
Tune dil diya…par dhadkan usne di…
Tu banata hai bigaadta hai…
Par main kya karu agar mujhe usme rab dikhta hai….

Khuda sab sunta rha…
Fir utha….aur mere sir pe hath rkh ke bola…
Sach hi to kaha tune…main to sabko banata hu..bigaadta hu..
Par wo to sirf tera hai….
Shayad isliye tujhe usme rab dikhta hai..
Itna pyaar na sahi par thoda humse b kar lena…
Mera dil bhi pyaar ke liye tarasta hai…
Ab to us din ka intezaar hai…
Jb tu kahegiiii…
E khuda… mujhe tujhme mera yaar dikhta hai!!!!
Mujhe tujhme mera yaar dikhta hai!!!
   
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2nd February 2009, 07:16 PM

aapke dil me ghar banana chahti hu..
aapke apno ko apna banana chahti hu..
apke gamo ko apnakar aapko hasi dena chahti hu..
jisme aapki khushi ho..wo kaam karna chahti hu…
har jagah har mod pe aapka saath dena chahti hu..
aapke liye jaan tk dena chahti hu…
agar ye pyaar hai to haaan main aapse pyaar krti hu..
itna pyaar jitna koi kisi se na krta ho.
Wo maanti hu aapko jo koi kisi ko na manta ho…
Shayad main layak nhi hu aapke…
Par fir bhi ik gujarish krna chahti hu…
Aapke dil me ghar banana chahti hu…
   
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8th March 2009, 11:36 PM

....
Kya kahu vishu ji...
Just tumne wakai me kamaal ka likha hai, sorry k maine thoda late reply kiya aapke posts par, wo isiliye k maine abhi-2 dekhi hai aapki posts,jb dekha to reply kiye bina nahi raha gaya, waise to mai comment karne k kabil nahi hu kyunki mujhe shayri ki jyada samajh nahi hai, par aapke posts ko dekhkar aapki taareef karne k liye mann kiya,par mujhe to tarif k layak lafz he nahi mil rahe hai, waise to mai naya hu is site pe, par jaane kyu sab apne dost se lagte hai.Meri ek dost b chndigad me rehti hai uska nick b vishu hai .Neways

aapki shayri ki mai dil se daad dena chahta hu,
afsos k mai urdu me kachha hu... !
It was just SUPERB

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9th March 2009, 02:12 AM

thanx for d compliments... nd for encouraging me..!

really very greatful..


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very nice shayri
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Love very nice shayri - 19th March 2009, 01:16 PM

vishu thanks for writing a nice shayri i dont say much things only one thing i want to say DIL KO CHUGYE APKE BAT
   
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24th March 2009, 11:22 PM

thanks a lott amit ji! really graceful to receive your compliment


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24th March 2009, 11:27 PM

TIMEPASS.....


tu sada is dil ke paas..
main ik timepass..
tu ik attoot vishwaas..
main ik timepass...
tu maarta hai thokre..
krte hai fir bhi wafa..
coz
u are u..
mere jine ki aas..
is rooh kaa ehsaas..
kya hua agar bana diya tune hume..
ik timepass....
timepasss...


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