Quote:
Originally Posted by Misum Moosavi
Salam alaik Hatim sahaab,
Koshish karta hoon ke aapko unn ash'aar ki behr samajh aasake:
Behr-e-Mujtas with zihaafaat
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Ma-faa-i-lun Fa-i-laa-tun Ma-faa-i-lun Fa-i-lun
Classic by Faiz Ahmed 'Faiz':
GuloN meiN rang bhare baad-e-nau-bahaar chale
Chale bhii aao ki gulshan ka kaar-o-baar chale
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Poora kalam isi behr par kaha hai maine.
Ummeed karta hoon ke baat samajh agayi hogi...agar phir bhi koi sawaal aapke zehen mein hai toh mai aapki khidmat ke liye haazir hoon sarkar!
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Mohtaram janab Misum moosavi sahab ! baja farmaya aap ne k iss ghazal ka behr hai:-
Ma-faa-i-lun Fa-i-laa-tun Ma-faa-i-lun Fa-i-lun
Magar meri naqis samajh se iss ghazal ke chand misray iss behr meiN nahi lagte haiN, maslan :-
she'r no.5 ka misra oola-
gham mere baaNt leiN aisa koi hamdard nahi
2-----1--2--2--1---2---2-2---1-2--2--2--1---1--2
Faa---i-laa-tun-Fa-oo-lun-Faa-i-lun-Fe-lun-Fa-i-lun
issay kuchh yuN hona chahiye :-
Ghamo'N ko baaNt le ai sa koi rafeeq nahi
1----2---1--2--1-1---2--2---1-2----1--2-1-1-2
Ma-faa---i-lun--Fa-i-laa-tun-Ma-faa-i-lun-Fa-i-lun
she'r no.6-
Din bahut kam hi bache haiN ye zindgani ke
2---1---2---2---1--1---2---2----1--2-1-2-2---2
Faa-i-lun Faa---i--la-tun--Faa--i--lun-Ma-faa-ee-lun
Ab to bas ahle wafa hi se mera kaam chale
2---1---2---2-1--1--2--2---1--1--2--2--1--1---2
Faa--i--lun-Faa-i-la-tun-Faa-i--la-tun-Faa-i--la-tun
issay kuchh yu'N hona chahiye:-
Bahut hi kam haiN bache din ye zin d ga n i ke
1---2--1--2----1----1---2--2---1---2-1--2-1-1--2
Ma-faa-i--lun --Fa----i--laa-tun-Ma-faa-i-lun-Fa-i-lun
ba sab to ahle wafa hi se mera kaam chale
1---2---1--2-1--1--2--2--1--2--1--2--1--1--2
Ma-faa--i-lun-Fa-i-laa-tun-Ma-faa-i-lun-Fa-i-lun
waghairah waghairah
ye koi zaroori nahi mera aisa sochna durust ho,kyoNke maiN to abhi khud hi tifle-maktab hooN....l apne ilm meiN izaafa karne ki gharaz se aap ki rahnumaai cgaahta hooN.