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sachha pyar - 20th December 2005, 03:46 PM
Chman se kaun chla hai khamosiyan lekar
Kali kali ro rahi hai siskiyan lekar

Jo rat din mare marne ki mangte the dua
Wo ro rahe the janaje par Hichkiyan lekar

Bhula saki na wo jakam jo diya tune mujhe
To ji gaye jindgi bewafaiyan sahakar

Saja mili un gunaho ki jo kiye na kabhi
Na do aur saja mujhko un ro ro kar

Vida ki bela mai aaye tum sakun mila
jabab do Kyu gaye tum tanhaiyan dekar

Jinda thi tab to na aaye tum
To so gaye hain tumhari nishaniyan lekar

Sab sahe gayi par dua thi ki teri khushiyon ki
Sakun na milega mujhe tumhe beecheniyan dekar

Mil gaya jism mitti mai hasrten na miti
Aaj kar do inhe bhi pura mera man chukar

nA thi sikayten kabhi tumse na kabhi socha bura
Main jaa rahi hoon tumhe aaj bhi khusiyan dekar

schhe pyar ke in jazbaat ko alfaz dene ko kosish kar rahi hoon .umeed karti hoon aap sabko pasand aayega .

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Re: sachha pyar - 12th September 2006, 04:42 PM
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Chman se kaun chla hai khamosiyan lekar
Kali kali ro rahi hai siskiyan lekar

Jo rat din mare marne ki mangte the dua
Wo ro rahe the janaje par Hichkiyan lekar

Bhula saki na wo jakam jo diya tune mujhe
To ji gaye jindgi bewafaiyan sahakar

Saja mili un gunaho ki jo kiye na kabhi
Na do aur saja mujhko un ro ro kar

Vida ki bela mai aaye tum sakun mila
jabab do Kyu gaye tum tanhaiyan dekar

Jinda thi tab to na aaye tum
To so gaye hain tumhari nishaniyan lekar

Sab sahe gayi par dua thi ki teri khushiyon ki
Sakun na milega mujhe tumhe beecheniyan dekar

Mil gaya jism mitti mai hasrten na miti
Aaj kar do inhe bhi pura mera man chukar

nA thi sikayten kabhi tumse na kabhi socha bura
Main jaa rahi hoon tumhe aaj bhi khusiyan dekar

schhe pyar ke in jazbaat ko alfaz dene ko kosish kar rahi hoon .umeed karti hoon aap sabko pasand aayega .
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Thumbs up hello - 13th September 2006, 01:49 AM
hello shrdh

how are you? bahote khoob likha hia nice work keep it up.

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13th September 2006, 01:52 AM
shraddha

kaisi ho aap?

aapki ye peshkas pasand aayi mujhe aap bahot achha likhti ho aur aapki peshkas padhna achha lagta haii


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hi - 13th September 2006, 01:54 AM
bahut hi khoob likha hai shradhha tumne aise hi likhti raho

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26th September 2006, 07:45 PM
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jo aapne likha hai mujhe bahut pasand ayi.
umeed hai aage bhi aisa padhne ko milega.


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26th September 2006, 10:16 PM
"schhe pyar ke in jazbaat ko alfaz dene ko kosish kar rahi hoon ."


shardji aapke jazbaat aur aapki yeh khoobsurat lines likhi hui bahut hi aachi lagin.

thanks for sharing them


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shhrdha ji,


aapki ye ghazal pad ke phir se apne guzre hue kal ki yaad aa gayi.
aisa lagta hai meri zindagi ke woh kuch saal jise mein bhoolne ki
koshish kar raha hu, yeh ghazal usi ke aas paas hai. aapne sahi
maino mein sachche pyar ke jazbat ko alfaaz diye hai.

bahut khoob

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Dear shradh

Very good bahut acchha likha hai aage bhi likhte rehna aur isse badiya
   
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Post 25th May 2007, 03:02 PM
Quote:
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Chman se kaun chla hai khamosiyan lekar
Kali kali ro rahi hai siskiyan lekar

Jo rat din mare marne ki mangte the dua
Wo ro rahe the janaje par Hichkiyan lekar

Bhula saki na wo jakam jo diya tune mujhe
To ji gaye jindgi bewafaiyan sahakar

Saja mili un gunaho ki jo kiye na kabhi
Na do aur saja mujhko un ro ro kar

Vida ki bela mai aaye tum sakun mila
jabab do Kyu gaye tum tanhaiyan dekar

Jinda thi tab to na aaye tum
To so gaye hain tumhari nishaniyan lekar

Sab sahe gayi par dua thi ki teri khushiyon ki
Sakun na milega mujhe tumhe beecheniyan dekar

Mil gaya jism mitti mai hasrten na miti
Aaj kar do inhe bhi pura mera man chukar

nA thi sikayten kabhi tumse na kabhi socha bura
Main jaa rahi hoon tumhe aaj bhi khusiyan dekar

schhe pyar ke in jazbaat ko alfaz dene ko kosish kar rahi hoon .umeed karti hoon aap sabko pasand aayega .

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Tumne bahut achcha likha hai.
Khuda kare tum humesa aise hi likhte raho.
   
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30th May 2007, 02:55 PM
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Chman se kaun chla hai khamosiyan lekar
Kali kali ro rahi hai siskiyan lekar

Jo rat din mare marne ki mangte the dua
Wo ro rahe the janaje par Hichkiyan lekar

Bhula saki na wo jakam jo diya tune mujhe
To ji gaye jindgi bewafaiyan sahakar

Saja mili un gunaho ki jo kiye na kabhi
Na do aur saja mujhko un ro ro kar

Vida ki bela mai aaye tum sakun mila
jabab do Kyu gaye tum tanhaiyan dekar

Jinda thi tab to na aaye tum
To so gaye hain tumhari nishaniyan lekar

Sab sahe gayi par dua thi ki teri khushiyon ki
Sakun na milega mujhe tumhe beecheniyan dekar

Mil gaya jism mitti mai hasrten na miti
Aaj kar do inhe bhi pura mera man chukar

nA thi sikayten kabhi tumse na kabhi socha bura
Main jaa rahi hoon tumhe aaj bhi khusiyan dekar

schhe pyar ke in jazbaat ko alfaz dene ko kosish kar rahi hoon .umeed karti hoon aap sabko pasand aayega .


WAH shrdh ji itna acha likha hai ke alfaznahi aapkelikhay ki tareef kerne ke liye her lafz ne dil per asar kia aur khas taur per ye do ashaar bohat hi achay lagay yunhi likhti rahain humesha khush rahain

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