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18th September 2014, 08:53 PM
Kerta hun jab bhi tujhe yaad main muskurata huN
Tehra masoom chehre ko apne roobaru pata huN.
Chhone ki tere aqs ko jab bhi ki hai koshish ,
Har baar ki tarah naqamyab ho jata huN.
Ye bebasi mujhe bechain kar deti hai kuch pal ,
phir na jaane kyun tere khayalon mein kho jata huN.
Peeche chalta hun tere kadmon pe kadam rakh kar ,
Mai dewangee mein teri parchayee se lipat jata huN.
Kai baar tujh se baat karne ko jee chahta hai,
Per jab bhi tum samne hoti hai khamosh ho jata huN.
Kyun khab mein aa kar mujhe satati ho tum,
Ankh khulne pe per dhoondne lag jata huN,
Jab jab bhi tera naam dil ko sunata huN ,
Dhil dharakne ke andaaz mein farq pata huN .
Jab Jab bhi tere ghar ki gali se guzarta huN ,
Ek pal ke deedar ko bhi taras jaata huN .
Mur mur ke dekhta huN tere ghar ki khirki ko ,
Har baar ki tarah use kyun use band pata huN.
Mera Ishq kahin ek tarfa tau nahi.shayad ,
Na jane tujhe paane ki hasrat dil mein basata huN.
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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18th September 2014, 09:17 PM
Sanjay ji
A touching poetry.keep up the good work
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18th September 2014, 09:26 PM
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Waaahhh! Sanjayji Kya khoob rumaani andaaz hai bahot hi pyari nazm hai mujhe hamesha aise lagta hai aap apni past feelings ke baare meiN likhtey ho jaise teenage meiN pehla pyar hua ho uske ehsaas abhi tk zinda haiN agr aisa nhi hai to wakai qamaal ki observation hai aapki...dheron daad yunhi likhtey rahiye
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agr aisa nhi hai to wakai qamaal ki observation hai aapki...dheron daad yunhi likhtey rahiye
Dear Naaz ,
Main imagination mein likhta hun aksar ...this poem I wrote in the morning at my workplace.. Pata nahin kahan se feelings aati gayi aur main likhta gaya ..
bus yun hi
Aisa bhi tau ho sakta hai ki deprivation leads to desire
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Sanjay Sehgal
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18th September 2014, 09:29 PM
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Sanjay ji
A touching poetry.keep up the good work
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Sukanya ji , Thank you very much for heartfelt appreciation
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18th September 2014, 10:31 PM
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Kerta hun jab bhi tujhe yaad main muskurata huN
Tehra masoom chehre ko apne roobaru pata huN.
Chhone ki tere aqs ko jab bhi ki hai koshish ,
Har baar ki tarah naqamyab ho jata huN.
Ye bebasi mujhe bechain kar deti hai kuch pal ,
phir na jaane kyun tere khayalon mein kho jata huN.
Peeche chalta hun tere kadmon pe kadam rakh kar ,
Mai dewangee mein teri parchayee se lipat jata huN.
Kai baar tujh se baat karne ko jee chahta hai,
Per jab bhi tum samne hoti hai khamosh ho jata huN.
Kyun khab mein aa kar mujhe satati ho tum,
Ankh khulne pe per dhoondne lag jata huN,
Jab jab bhi tera naam dil ko sunata huN ,
Dhil dharakne ke andaaz mein farq pata huN .
Jab Jab bhi tere ghar ki gali se guzarta huN ,
Ek pal ke deedar ko bhi taras jaata huN .
Mur mur ke dekhta huN tere ghar ki khirki ko ,
Har baar ki tarah use kyun use band pata huN.
Mera Ishq kahin ek tarfa tau nahi.shayad ,
Na jane tujhe paane ki hasrat dil mein basata huN.
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bahut hi pyari nazm sanjay ji..jaise ishq me doobe kisi naye aashiq ne likhi ho mahboob ki yaad me..bahut lutf aaya padkar...
Dil se daad qubul kijiye...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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18th September 2014, 11:07 PM
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bahut hi pyari nazm sanjay ji..jaise ishq me doobe kisi naye aashiq ne likhi ho mahboob ki yaad me..bahut lutf aaya padkar...
Dil se daad qubul kijiye...
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Madhu jhi aap ka bahut bahut shukrguzar hun jo apne apna keemti samay
humari nazm ko diya
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19th September 2014, 05:15 PM
kya baat hai sir
dil se wah nikal rahi hai...
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19th September 2014, 07:53 PM
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Kerta hun jab bhi tujhe yaad main muskurata huN
Tehra masoom chehre ko apne roobaru pata huN.
Chhone ki tere aqs ko jab bhi ki hai koshish ,
Har baar ki tarah naqamyab ho jata huN.
Ye bebasi mujhe bechain kar deti hai kuch pal ,
phir na jaane kyun tere khayalon mein kho jata huN.
Peeche chalta hun tere kadmon pe kadam rakh kar ,
Mai dewangee mein teri parchayee se lipat jata huN.
Kai baar tujh se baat karne ko jee chahta hai,
Per jab bhi tum samne hoti hai khamosh ho jata huN.
Kyun khab mein aa kar mujhe satati ho tum,
Ankh khulne pe per dhoondne lag jata huN,
Jab jab bhi tera naam dil ko sunata huN ,
Dhil dharakne ke andaaz mein farq pata huN .
Jab Jab bhi tere ghar ki gali se guzarta huN ,
Ek pal ke deedar ko bhi taras jaata huN .
Mur mur ke dekhta huN tere ghar ki khirki ko ,
Har baar ki tarah use kyun use band pata huN.
Mera Ishq kahin ek tarfa tau nahi.shayad ,
Na jane tujhe paane ki hasrat dil mein basata huN.
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bahot khoob waahh kya baaat hai Sanjay saahab.. naayaab alfaazon se sajaa khoobsurat kalaam...... mubaarak ho aapko.
Likhte raiye
Shaad.....
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20th September 2014, 12:32 PM
waaah !! khoobsurat ghazal Sanjay ji !! jazba e ishq ki mushtaaqee tadap bebasee ... in sab ehsaason ka mila jula pur luttf bayaan !! dheron daad aur duaein aap ko !!
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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kya baat hai sir
dil se wah nikal rahi hai...
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Shukriya Sukhraj bhai jo aap ko hamara kalam pasand aya
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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2nd October 2014, 10:44 PM
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bahot khoob waahh kya baaat hai Sanjay saahab.. naayaab alfaazon se sajaa khoobsurat kalaam...... mubaarak ho aapko.
Likhte raiye
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Sameer bhai ...aap bus yun hi haunsala badate rahe karo..
Thanx a lot
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
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kya baat hai bhut khoob.....
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7th October 2014, 05:23 PM
Sanjay g ..na jaane kaise vanchit reh gaya is dilfareb kalaam se.,..bahut hee sundar likha hai aapne..
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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Sanjay g ..na jaane kaise vanchit reh gaya is dilfareb kalaam se.,..bahut hee sundar likha hai aapne..
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Shukriya Arvind Bhai ... Vaise vanchit ka ulta hota hai chitvan........
Aapne apne chitvan mein jhanka aur humara kalam vahan paya
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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