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Love woh ek larki........ - 3rd May 2008, 06:39 PM

Woh ek larki tum jaisi,
Udaas logon ki bastiyon main.......
Woh titliyon ko talash karti hai,
Woh ek larki,
Woh gol chehra, woh kali ankhain,
Jo karti rehti, hazar baatein,
Mizaj sada, woh dil ki achi,
Woh ek larki,
Sari baatein, woh dil ki manay,
Woh karay wo, jo dil ki thanay,
Koi na janay, kya us ki marzi,
Woh ek larki,
Woh chahat k sehrab dekhay....
Mohabbaton k woh khuwab dekhay....
Woh khud samandar, magar hai piyasi,
Woh ek larki,
Woh dosti k nisab janay,
Woh janti hai ehadnajanay,
Woh achi dost, woh achi sathi,
Woh ek larki,
Woh jam chahat ka pina chahay,
Woh apni marzi se jeena chahay,
Magar hai darti, magar hai darti,
Woh ek larki,
Mohabbaton ka jo falsafa hai,
Woh janti hai, usay pata hai,
Woh phir b rehti, dari dari se,
Woh ek larki,
Jo jhootay logon ko sacha samjhay,
Woh sari duniya ko acha samjhay,
Woh kitni sadi, woh kitni pagli,
Woh ek larki...............!!!:confus ed:
   
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3rd May 2008, 06:47 PM

salaam SanaJi,

bahot umda aur lateef nazm hai aapkii. aisi achchhi nazmeN bahot kam paRhne ko milti haiN HaalaaN k maiN nazm ka shaidaai nahiiN phir bhi aapkii yeh taKhleeq bahot pasand aayii. is nazm ka markazi Khayaal aur us Khayaal ka bahaao bahoyt mutavaazan hai. ek kaamiyaab nazm kahne par amiN aapko dili mubaarakbaad pesh karta huN, qubul kijiye.

share karne ke liye shukria

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Woh ek larki tum jaisi,
Udaas logon ki bastiyon main.......
Woh titliyon ko talash karti hai,
Woh ek larki,
Woh gol chehra, woh kali ankhain,
Jo karti rehti, hazar baatein,
Mizaj sada, woh dil ki achi,
Woh ek larki,
Sari baatein, woh dil ki manay,
Woh karay wo, jo dil ki thanay,
Koi na janay, kya us ki marzi,
Woh ek larki,
Woh chahat k sehrab dekhay....
Mohabbaton k woh khuwab dekhay....
Woh khud samandar, magar hai piyasi,
Woh ek larki,
Woh dosti k nisab janay,
Woh janti hai ehadnajanay,
Woh achi dost, woh achi sathi,
Woh ek larki,
Woh jam chahat ka pina chahay,
Woh apni marzi se jeena chahay,
Magar hai darti, magar hai darti,
Woh ek larki,
Mohabbaton ka jo falsafa hai,
Woh janti hai, usay pata hai,
Woh phir b rehti, dari dari se,
Woh ek larki,
Jo jhootay logon ko sacha samjhay,
Woh sari duniya ko acha samjhay,
Woh kitni sadi, woh kitni pagli,
Woh ek larki...............!!!:confus ed:

hi sana

hamesha ki tarhan outstanding collection
thanks 4 shared


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4th May 2008, 12:02 PM

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Woh ek larki tum jaisi,
Udaas logon ki bastiyon main.......
Woh titliyon ko talash karti hai,
Woh ek larki,
Woh gol chehra, woh kali ankhain,
Jo karti rehti, hazar baatein,
Mizaj sada, woh dil ki achi,
Woh ek larki,
Sari baatein, woh dil ki manay,
Woh karay wo, jo dil ki thanay,
Koi na janay, kya us ki marzi,
Woh ek larki,
Woh chahat k sehrab dekhay....
Mohabbaton k woh khuwab dekhay....
Woh khud samandar, magar hai piyasi,
Woh ek larki,
Woh dosti k nisab janay,
Woh janti hai ehadnajanay,
Woh achi dost, woh achi sathi,
Woh ek larki,
Woh jam chahat ka pina chahay,
Woh apni marzi se jeena chahay,
Magar hai darti, magar hai darti,
Woh ek larki,
Mohabbaton ka jo falsafa hai,
Woh janti hai, usay pata hai,
Woh phir b rehti, dari dari se,
Woh ek larki,
Jo jhootay logon ko sacha samjhay,
Woh sari duniya ko acha samjhay,
Woh kitni sadi, woh kitni pagli,
Woh ek larki...............!!!:confus ed:




SALAM...bohat ache sana g nice post boaht achi lagi hai maza aya hai parh ker keep sharing like this more and more....take care,,,


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4th May 2008, 12:06 PM

hello to sana ji.
beautiful lines thanks for sharing.

Hi Rizi?
aap ka likha padha toh yeh faraaz ki shayari yaad aa gayi...
woh jo hum mein tum mein qaraar tha
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Woh ek larki tum jaisi,
Udaas logon ki bastiyon main.......
Woh titliyon ko talash karti hai,
Woh ek larki,
Woh gol chehra, woh kali ankhain,
Jo karti rehti, hazar baatein,
Mizaj sada, woh dil ki achi,
Woh ek larki,
Sari baatein, woh dil ki manay,
Woh karay wo, jo dil ki thanay,
Koi na janay, kya us ki marzi,
Woh ek larki,
Woh chahat k sehrab dekhay....
Mohabbaton k woh khuwab dekhay....
Woh khud samandar, magar hai piyasi,
Woh ek larki,
Woh dosti k nisab janay,
Woh janti hai ehadnajanay,
Woh achi dost, woh achi sathi,
Woh ek larki,
Woh jam chahat ka pina chahay,
Woh apni marzi se jeena chahay,
Magar hai darti, magar hai darti,
Woh ek larki,
Mohabbaton ka jo falsafa hai,
Woh janti hai, usay pata hai,
Woh phir b rehti, dari dari se,
Woh ek larki,
Jo jhootay logon ko sacha samjhay,
Woh sari duniya ko acha samjhay,
Woh kitni sadi, woh kitni pagli,
Woh ek larki...............!!!:confus ed:




SALAM...bohat ache sana g nice post boaht achi lagi hai maza aya hai parh ker keep sharing like this more and more....take care,,,


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4th May 2008, 12:15 PM

Hi Rizi?
aap ka likha padha toh yeh faraaz ki shayari yaad aa gayi...
woh jo hum mein tum mein qaraar tha
tumhay yaad ho ki na yaad ho[/quote]



HI ANKITA g main ne to post kerna chor dia hai ap ko meri kon s post achi lagi hai..but thx for this apna khayal rakhna..BYE BYE .....


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4th May 2008, 12:26 PM

meri har baat par tera woh muskoorana
tumhay yaad ho ki na yaad ho
hanstay hua mera woh chehra chipana
tumhay yaad ho ki na yaad ho

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meri har baat par tera woh muskoorana
tumhay yaad ho ki na yaad ho
hanstay hua mera woh chehra chipana
tumhay yaad ho ki na yaad ho

pehchaano toh jaanay.
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sorry janab kuch yaad nahi aa raha hai plz ..app bata do na plz...pvt main he bata do ager yahan nahi bata sakti to.....main intzar ker raha hon.ok take care...


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private kyon mein toh hoon ankita.
   
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lakin main app ko nahi janta app muje batao to sahi muje yaad he nahi hai app se kab baat ki hai ..app ksa se hain kya...iis main ...


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choro rizi.
chalo ek baar phir say ajnabi ban jaayen hum dono. song from some old moive. It does not matter. I was just an avid fan of your shayari.
   
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...I was just an avid fan of your shayari
aapki shairi? hmmm. OK




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Woh ek larki tum jaisi,
Udaas logon ki bastiyon main.......
Woh titliyon ko talash karti hai,
Woh ek larki,
Woh gol chehra, woh kali ankhain,
Jo karti rehti, hazar baatein,
Mizaj sada, woh dil ki achi,
Woh ek larki,
Sari baatein, woh dil ki manay,
Woh karay wo, jo dil ki thanay,
Koi na janay, kya us ki marzi,
Woh ek larki,
Woh chahat k sehrab dekhay....
Mohabbaton k woh khuwab dekhay....
Woh khud samandar, magar hai piyasi,
Woh ek larki,
Woh dosti k nisab janay,
Woh janti hai ehadnajanay,
Woh achi dost, woh achi sathi,
Woh ek larki,
Woh jam chahat ka pina chahay,
Woh apni marzi se jeena chahay,
Magar hai darti, magar hai darti,
Woh ek larki,
Mohabbaton ka jo falsafa hai,
Woh janti hai, usay pata hai,
Woh phir b rehti, dari dari se,
Woh ek larki,
Jo jhootay logon ko sacha samjhay,
Woh sari duniya ko acha samjhay,
Woh kitni sadi, woh kitni pagli,
Woh ek larki...............!!!:confus ed:
khub kahaa aapne jindgi ye sab kuch dikhati hai aur kehti hai darna nahi me tera sath dongi,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,***rahul***


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5th May 2008, 01:04 AM

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Woh ek larki tum jaisi,
Udaas logon ki bastiyon main.......
Woh titliyon ko talash karti hai,
Woh ek larki,
Woh gol chehra, woh kali ankhain,
Jo karti rehti, hazar baatein,
Mizaj sada, woh dil ki achi,
Woh ek larki,
Sari baatein, woh dil ki manay,
Woh karay wo, jo dil ki thanay,
Koi na janay, kya us ki marzi,
Woh ek larki,
Woh chahat k sehrab dekhay....
Mohabbaton k woh khuwab dekhay....
Woh khud samandar, magar hai piyasi,
Woh ek larki,
Woh dosti k nisab janay,
Woh janti hai ehadnajanay,
Woh achi dost, woh achi sathi,
Woh ek larki,
Woh jam chahat ka pina chahay,
Woh apni marzi se jeena chahay,
Magar hai darti, magar hai darti,
Woh ek larki,
Mohabbaton ka jo falsafa hai,
Woh janti hai, usay pata hai,
Woh phir b rehti, dari dari se,
Woh ek larki,
Jo jhootay logon ko sacha samjhay,
Woh sari duniya ko acha samjhay,
Woh kitni sadi, woh kitni pagli,
Woh ek larki...............!!!:confus ed:

beautiful sharing!!!!!


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hello Mukhlis? why the big ?? I am fool when it comes to shayari.
   
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hello Mukhlis? why the big ?? I am fool when it comes to shayari.
i'm sorry. i didn't mean ur shairi. u said something about Riz's shairi and on that i said what i said ... sorry




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Hello Mukhlis,

tum off line ho kar kaiisay post kar rahay ho? can I also do this? aur han meiinay toh pehlay bhi likha hai. jindagi mein humour ka rang na ho toh jindagi berang ho jaati hai. so do not worry I never mind anything aur han sorry mat kaho. tumhara frowing chehra pasand nahin aaya.

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tum off line ho kar kaiisay post kar rahay ho? can I also do this? aur han meiinay toh pehlay bhi likha hai. jindagi mein humour ka rang na ho toh jindagi berang ho jaati hai. so do not worry I never mind anything aur han sorry mat kaho. tumhara frowing chehra pasand nahin aaya.

hansi ki chamak teri tasveer par hai
arzoo meri tehreer par hai
tu rahay muskooraata har dam
aisi taseer meri dua par hai
i'm NOT offline. may be i was "invisible to the nacked eye" hehehe.

YES, u can do that by going into CP [Control Panel] which is the top left hand corner of ur screen and then go into ur profile and check the box that says "do you want to eb invisible to others?". its that simple!

by the way, she'r achchha hai

i noticed that u r in Canada. where abouts do u live in Canada?




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Hello Mukhlis,

wahin rahti hoon jahan koi aata jaata nahin. and thanks for liking my writing.

   
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kahan rahti ho muje bi batao humen bi koi aysi he jaga ki talash hai jahan koi ata jata na ho bas main akela he hon .....


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my plesure sana ji app ne acha likha hum ne riply dia ..bas app ayse he likhti rahiye


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Woh ek larki tum jaisi,
Udaas logon ki bastiyon main.......
Woh titliyon ko talash karti hai,
Woh ek larki,
Woh gol chehra, woh kali ankhain,
Jo karti rehti, hazar baatein,
Mizaj sada, woh dil ki achi,
Woh ek larki,
Sari baatein, woh dil ki manay,
Woh karay wo, jo dil ki thanay,
Koi na janay, kya us ki marzi,
Woh ek larki,
Woh chahat k sehrab dekhay....
Mohabbaton k woh khuwab dekhay....
Woh khud samandar, magar hai piyasi,
Woh ek larki,
Woh dosti k nisab janay,
Woh janti hai ehadnajanay,
Woh achi dost, woh achi sathi,
Woh ek larki,
Woh jam chahat ka pina chahay,
Woh apni marzi se jeena chahay,
Magar hai darti, magar hai darti,
Woh ek larki,
Mohabbaton ka jo falsafa hai,
Woh janti hai, usay pata hai,
Woh phir b rehti, dari dari se,
Woh ek larki,
Jo jhootay logon ko sacha samjhay,
Woh sari duniya ko acha samjhay,
Woh kitni sadi, woh kitni pagli,
Woh ek larki...............!!!:confus ed:


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kya baat hai sanajee.....sundar nazm.... ....daad hee daad



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