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4 Love - 5th September 2008, 02:02 PM

Tum zindagi na sahi
Dost bankar to zindagi me aao
Tum hansi na sahi
Muskan bankar to zindagi me aao.

Tum haqiqat na sahi
Khyal bankar to zindagi me aao
Tum nazar na sahi
Yaad bankar to zindagi me aao.

Tum dil na sahi
Dhadkan bankar to zindagi me aao
Tum gazal na sahi
Shayeri bankar to zindagi me aao.

Tum khushiya na sahi
Gam bankar to zindagi me aao
Tum paas na sahi
Ehsas bankar to zindagi me aao.

Tum kal na sahi
Aaj bankar to zindagi me aao
Tum zindagi na sahi
Dost bankar to zindagi me aao.
   
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5th September 2008, 02:13 PM

Dosti ki tadap, aapke khayaalo me sidhe se najar aa rahe hain... bahoot sundar... likhte rahiye yun hi

dost gam bankar nahi
khushi bankar hi aaten hain
gam hi banna ho to
chhorkar chale jaate hain


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11th May 2013, 12:29 AM

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Originally Posted by Subhash4G1 View Post
Tum zindagi na sahi
Dost bankar to zindagi me aao
Tum hansi na sahi
Muskan bankar to zindagi me aao.

Tum haqiqat na sahi
Khyal bankar to zindagi me aao
Tum nazar na sahi
Yaad bankar to zindagi me aao.

Tum dil na sahi
Dhadkan bankar to zindagi me aao
Tum gazal na sahi
Shayeri bankar to zindagi me aao.

Tum khushiya na sahi
Gam bankar to zindagi me aao
Tum paas na sahi
Ehsas bankar to zindagi me aao.

Tum kal na sahi
Aaj bankar to zindagi me aao
Tum zindagi na sahi
Dost bankar to zindagi me aao.
Bahut khoob likha hai aapne..ek modification or advice hai..acchi lage to manjur kariyega..
Aapne jo likha hai..
Tun ghazal na sahi
Shayri bankar to zindagi mein aao...
Yahan ghazal aur shayri lagbhag ek baat ho gayi hai..
Aap yahan shayri kee jagah 'lafz' ure kariye to jyada accha lagega..its only my personal view...



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Smile :) - 11th May 2013, 01:06 AM


Waah Wah Dil ko chu gayi.......



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Tum zindagi na sahi
Dost bankar to zindagi me aao
Tum hansi na sahi
Muskan bankar to zindagi me aao.

Tum haqiqat na sahi
Khyal bankar to zindagi me aao
Tum nazar na sahi
Yaad bankar to zindagi me aao.

Tum dil na sahi
Dhadkan bankar to zindagi me aao
Tum gazal na sahi
Shayeri bankar to zindagi me aao.

Tum khushiya na sahi
Gam bankar to zindagi me aao
Tum paas na sahi
Ehsas bankar to zindagi me aao.

Tum kal na sahi
Aaj bankar to zindagi me aao
Tum zindagi na sahi
Dost bankar to zindagi me aao.
   
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