Lubna Saheba
aadab
Aapne bahot hi achchi ghazal kahi hai. Aur ashaar se zahir bhi hota hai ke aap kaafi arse se likh rahii haiN.
Sabhi sher bohat pasand aaye aur isiiliye kisii aik sher kii nishaandehi karna baqi ashar ke ke saath na-insaafi hogi.
Aapke mazeed kalamoN ka intezaar rahega.
Aik behtareen ghazal kehne par mubarakbaad ke saath.
Praveen Saxena
Quote:
Originally posted by lubna sardar
mujh ko bay musami golab na day
kuhab day per koi sarab na day
ranjishien tou baja sahi lakin
itni nafrat say tou jawab na dey
mujh ko cehnay jo meray apno say
is tarhan ki koi ketab na dey
mein pojaran hoon chand raton ki
ya kuhda mujhe ko aftab na dey
wesil ki sham bhi dekha ya rab
musamay hijer kay azab na dey
mujhe ko pena hai un ki ankhon say
abb mujhay koi bhi sahrab na day
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