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Angry pm ke zariye dhamki...band karo ye dictatorship - 5th August 2014, 02:02 PM

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Praneetaa.... wese baat badhaane ki na to mujhe aadat hai aur naa hi koi shouq...

Shaad...pm ke zhariyen dhamki de rahe ho isse baat badhana nahi hai toh aur kiya hai?

Aur rahi baat apology ki to shaayad apology aapko karnii chahiye unwanted intrusion banne ke liye aur interfere karne ke liye....

aap achchi tarah se padhe toh i was raising an issue myself...i agree with naaz thats why i stopped participating in competitions but why should it bother anyone?

Rahii meri baat bolne ki to maine isliye bola kyonki wahaan par galat baaten ho rahi thii.. naaz sahiba aur ufaq saahab ke beech... aapko kisliye beech me aana pada, kisne bulaya, ye sab merii samajh ke baahar hai..

aap ko baat galat lagi toh aap bol sakte hain mujhe galat lagi toh chup chaap raho isi tarah aap mods aur members mein difference kam kar rahe hai? being a mod doesnt mean only you can object or raise concerns!


Chat box isliye nahi open kiya gaya hai ke aap log manmani baaten karen aur kisii par keeechad uchaalen...

jo aap ne quote kiya hai wo kal ka post hai jis par aap ne comment nahi kiya. aaj hum iss issue ko discuss hi nahi kar rahe tabhi shayad aap ko sujhi pm kar ke baat badhana...you just cant take that we are not moved by what transpared yesterday

warna mujhe baaki ke mods se baat kar ke in sab harkaton ke liye kade kadam uthaane padenge.....

karoge kya mujhe block ya thread close? waise bhi threads sirf wahi close ho rahe hain jis me mujhe interest hai jaise ki meri interview thread. baki sabhi interview thread open hai except mine. ab iss concern ko bhi ilzaam ke taor par dekha jayega for sure!


As a mod ye hamaari zimmedarii hai ke yahan har harkat par nazar rakhi jaae jo gair zaruri ho.... ufaq saahab se jis tarah tuu tadaak aur tanakasshi ke lahze me baat ki gayee main uske oppose me thaa , aur naaz se mera koi personal warship nahi hai, jasaa ke aapne aur chand logon ne use dikhane ki koshish ki hai...

as a member mujhe bhi haq hai ki jo mujhe galat lage uss par questions raise karun. agar koi mod ya judge hai to shayad iss liye ki wo baki members se zyada samajdaar hai. agar aap logo ko humari baat galat lagi to aap achchi tarah se samjha sakte the na ke jawab aur bhi arrogance ke saath dete. mod ho to kya kisi ke bhi feelings ka mazak banaoge? aap ne pm kal kyun nahi kiya apni reply post karne se pahele?

Naaz ya koi bhi member jeete ya haare mujhe personally usse kuch lena dena nahi hai... magar agar adab ke lahze se baaat baahar hhuii kisi bhi member se, to mujhe har baar interfere karna hi hoga bcoz i m here for that and its my duty....

lahze mein to aap aur ufaq sahab bhi nahi the. main sirf concern raise kiya tha. ufaq sahab se bahot respect se bhi baat ki. baat bigadi aap ke reply ne...naaz ka mazak banane ki koshish mein

aur shaayd aapka inerference gair zaruri tha yahaan pe... kyonki is ki zarurat hi nahi thii

like i said i was raising an issue myself plus as a member i also have rights mod nahi hun to kya?


ummmeed hai ab public site me kisii bhi member ke oopar koi keechad uchaalega.... aur ek dusre ke feelings ka khayaal rakha jaega...

umimd karne se pahele khud uss par amal karo! you have no rights to impose your wishes and thoughts on us!

Gaurav sahab se meri appeal hai ke shayad members ko rules bhool gaye hain, to basic code of conduct and code of ethics ek baar fir se post kiye jaaen, aur rules na follow karne waalon ke khilaaf kade kadam uthaae jaaen ....

Gaurav sahab se meri bhi appeal hai ki mods ko bhi unka ethics or code of conduct plus disciplinery behaviour ke parameters samjhayen. waise to mods arson gayab rahete hain phir aa kar members par modship jharte hain...stop this dictatorship!

i am going to cc this to every1 involved in this issue and then create a thread which obivously you will delete before most people view but you wont be able to delete anybody's pm hopefully.

feel free to block me!

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5th August 2014, 02:06 PM

Good reply ....just bcoz somebody is a mod doesnt give him rights to influence and interfere in everything and do whatever he likes....all rules for members nothing for mods.....feel free to block me 2...its not our bread and butter.





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5th August 2014, 02:23 PM

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Praneetaa.... wese baat badhaane ki na to mujhe aadat hai aur naa hi koi shouq...

Shaad...pm ke zhariyen dhamki de rahe ho isse baat badhana nahi hai toh aur kiya hai?

Aur rahi baat apology ki to shaayad apology aapko karnii chahiye unwanted intrusion banne ke liye aur interfere karne ke liye....

aap achchi tarah se padhe toh i was raising an issue myself...i agree with naaz thats why i stopped participating in competitions but why should it bother anyone?

Rahii meri baat bolne ki to maine isliye bola kyonki wahaan par galat baaten ho rahi thii.. naaz sahiba aur ufaq saahab ke beech... aapko kisliye beech me aana pada, kisne bulaya, ye sab merii samajh ke baahar hai..

aap ko baat galat lagi toh aap bol sakte hain mujhe galat lagi toh chup chaap raho isi tarah aap mods aur members mein difference kam kar rahe hai? being a mod doesnt mean only you can object or raise concerns!


Chat box isliye nahi open kiya gaya hai ke aap log manmani baaten karen aur kisii par keeechad uchaalen...

jo aap ne quote kiya hai wo kal ka post hai jis par aap ne comment nahi kiya. aaj hum iss issue ko discuss hi nahi kar rahe tabhi shayad aap ko sujhi pm kar ke baat badhana...you just cant take that we are not moved by what transpared yesterday

warna mujhe baaki ke mods se baat kar ke in sab harkaton ke liye kade kadam uthaane padenge.....

karoge kya mujhe block ya thread close? waise bhi threads sirf wahi close ho rahe hain jis me mujhe interest hai jaise ki meri interview thread. baki sabhi interview thread open hai except mine. ab iss concern ko bhi ilzaam ke taor par dekha jayega for sure!


As a mod ye hamaari zimmedarii hai ke yahan har harkat par nazar rakhi jaae jo gair zaruri ho.... ufaq saahab se jis tarah tuu tadaak aur tanakasshi ke lahze me baat ki gayee main uske oppose me thaa , aur naaz se mera koi personal warship nahi hai, jasaa ke aapne aur chand logon ne use dikhane ki koshish ki hai...

as a member mujhe bhi haq hai ki jo mujhe galat lage uss par questions raise karun. agar koi mod ya judge hai to shayad iss liye ki wo baki members se zyada samajdaar hai. agar aap logo ko humari baat galat lagi to aap achchi tarah se samjha sakte the na ke jawab aur bhi arrogance ke saath dete. mod ho to kya kisi ke bhi feelings ka mazak banaoge? aap ne pm kal kyun nahi kiya apni reply post karne se pahele?

Naaz ya koi bhi member jeete ya haare mujhe personally usse kuch lena dena nahi hai... magar agar adab ke lahze se baaat baahar hhuii kisi bhi member se, to mujhe har baar interfere karna hi hoga bcoz i m here for that and its my duty....

lahze mein to aap aur ufaq sahab bhi nahi the. main sirf concern raise kiya tha. ufaq sahab se bahot respect se bhi baat ki. baat bigadi aap ke reply ne...naaz ka mazak banane ki koshish mein

aur shaayd aapka inerference gair zaruri tha yahaan pe... kyonki is ki zarurat hi nahi thii

like i said i was raising an issue myself plus as a member i also have rights mod nahi hun to kya?


ummmeed hai ab public site me kisii bhi member ke oopar koi keechad uchaalega.... aur ek dusre ke feelings ka khayaal rakha jaega...

umimd karne se pahele khud uss par amal karo! you have no rights to impose your wishes and thoughts on us!

Gaurav sahab se meri appeal hai ke shayad members ko rules bhool gaye hain, to basic code of conduct and code of ethics ek baar fir se post kiye jaaen, aur rules na follow karne waalon ke khilaaf kade kadam uthaae jaaen ....

Gaurav sahab se meri bhi appeal hai ki mods ko bhi unka ethics or code of conduct plus disciplinery behaviour ke parameters samjhayen. waise to mods arson gayab rahete hain phir aa kar members par modship jharte hain...stop this dictatorship!

i am going to cc this to every1 involved in this issue and then create a thread which obivously you will delete before most people view but you wont be able to delete anybody's pm hopefully.

feel free to block me!

Shukriyaa


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Good reply ....just bcoz somebody is a mod doesnt give him rights to influence and interfere in everything and do whatever he likes....all rules for members nothing for mods.....feel free to block me 2...its not our bread and butter.
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Mods ki dictatorship sirf isi site par nazar aati hai (unpaid slaves).....mudda kya hai wo to sire se nazar andaz kar dete hain bas aise kyun baat ki waise kyun baat ki ye thik nahin wo thik nahin.......are pehle jo wakai thik nahin wo thik karo members ka lehza khud ba khud thik hojaega....yahan mods aise hain jaise kisi ne bandar ke hath mein ustura de diya ho le to liya samajh nahin ata kaise istemal karte hain ab chahe baal kate ya khaal now ban me, jab jawab nahin ban padta to tum log yahi karte ho unfair use of power.

@Pari good job pari i love ur guts baaki to bas audience hain yahan par .
I, too, condemn the undue interferance of mods on different occasions.


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Shaad & Ufaq sahab zara apne baare mein formal intro bhi de do...baaki to aapne sab dikha hi diya ki aap kya ho...!


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Wah kamaal ki sanjeedgi hai sabhi ki... bahut dukh ho raha hai yahaan aur isse pehle ki do posts pe logoN ka reply aur baat karne ka lehja dekh kar. Moderators se main bhi har baat pe sehmat nahin raha hun, balki bahut friction raha hai mera unke saath but I condemn the language used by most of the people during this entire issue.

Nazneen ji aapko ek example deta huN, kisi shayar ka ek sher kisi ko bahut pasand aata hai aur kisi ko nahiN, aisa isiliye hota hai kyuNki har kisi ka sher ko interpret karne ka tareeka alag hota hai... Ab aapka sher kisi ko utna pasand nahiN aaya to isme kya gunah ho gaya, aur uske baad aapne jo lehja istemaal kiya hai usse jarur dukh hua mujhe... Zara ghaur kijiyega meri baat pe..

Praneeta d aapko bhi main kaafi waqt se jaanta hun, aur is tarah se vyavhaar karte pehli baar dekh raha hun, main maanta hun mods kayi baar yahaaN dictating ho jaate hain, par kya uske liye hum apni jubaan bhi gandi kar leN...?? kya ye sahi hai...?? soch kar dekhiyega...

@fathomless saaheb, janaab aapse darkhwast hai kisi pe bhi is tarah ki tippani na karen to ahcha hai, shaad saaheb aur uffaq saaheb dono ahche shooraan hain, ab ho sakta hai ek jagah aap unse sehmat na hon par iska ye matlab nahiN ki aap unka aanklan us hisaab se kareN..kyuNki main nahin maanta ki personalized tippani ya comments kisi ko bhi yahaan kisi ke liye bhi istemaal karne ka haq hai...


Baanki shayad is muamle ko ab aaraam dena hi behtar hai, agar naraazgi hai to kalaam me dikhaye, usse kuch constructive hoga, ek choti si baat jo ki PM me clear ki jaa sakti thi, uska itna issue ban jana bahut dukhad hai...

Agar meri baat buri lage to aap mera virodh karne ke liye swatantra haiN... Par mujhe jo galat dikha vo maine keh diya...

@Mods I am sorry to say another glimpse of a very bad management, plz koi senior mod aa ke is baat ko khatm kare yahiN pe, shuruat se cheezoN ko clarify karke, taaki kisi ke liye kisi ke bhi dil me karwahat na rahe...

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Wah kamaal ki sanjeedgi hai sabhi ki... bahut dukh ho raha hai yahaan aur isse pehle ki do posts pe logoN ka reply aur baat karne ka lehja dekh kar. Moderators se main bhi har baat pe sehmat nahin raha hun, balki bahut friction raha hai mera unke saath but I condemn the language used by most of the people during this entire issue.

janab kamal ki sanjidgi to aapki bhi dekhne ko mili... Waise kamaal hai na, yahan jis ko reply karna chahiye woh to chup hain aur aapse kisi ne advice maangi nahi fir bhi aap khud ko hurt kar baithe...kamaal hai na... No offence dude(shake hand) take a chill pill and try not to poke your nose in between and dont waste your energy by giving suggestion. Everyone here is quite mature to understand what is bad and what is good...hope you dont take my words otherwise....

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@fathomless saaheb, janaab aapse darkhwast hai kisi pe bhi is tarah ki tippani na karen to ahcha hai, shaad saaheb aur uffaq saaheb dono ahche shooraan hain, ab ho sakta hai ek jagah aap unse sehmat na hon par iska ye matlab nahiN ki aap unka aanklan us hisaab se kareN..kyuNki main nahin maanta ki personalized tippani ya comments kisi ko bhi yahaan kisi ke liye bhi istemaal karne ka haq hai...


Baanki shayad is muamle ko ab aaraam dena hi behtar hai, agar naraazgi hai to kalaam me dikhaye, usse kuch constructive hoga, ek choti si baat jo ki PM me clear ki jaa sakti thi, uska itna issue ban jana bahut dukhad hai...
thanks for you unwanted advice...

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Agar meri baat buri lage to aap mera virodh karne ke liye swatantra haiN... Par mujhe jo galat dikha vo maine keh diya...
thats what has happened here...bura laga to hum virodh kar rahe hai....


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@Mods I am sorry to say another glimpse of a very bad management, plz koi senior mod aa ke is baat ko khatm kare yahiN pe, shuruat se cheezoN ko clarify karke, taaki kisi ke liye kisi ke bhi dil me karwahat na rahe...

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thanks for your advice...


Mods your proactive intereuption required...


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A peaceful request - 5th August 2014, 08:31 PM

To everyone,

You all guys are very sophisticate and sensitive, it is advisable to not to give suggestions to any individual about what is good or bad. If you have any suggestion for forum, then pls you all are welcome, otherwise you might get hurt yourself with our vocabulary

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janab kamal ki sanjidgi to aapki bhi dekhne ko mili... Waise kamaal hai na, yahan jis ko reply karna chahiye woh to chup hain aur aapse kisi ne advice maangi nahi fir bhi aap khud ko hurt kar baithe...kamaal hai na... No offence dude(shake hand) take a chill pill and try not to poke your nose in between and dont waste your energy by giving suggestion. Everyone here is quite mature to understand what is bad and what is good...hope you dont take my words otherwise....



thanks for you unwanted advice...



thats what has happened here...bura laga to hum virodh kar rahe hai....




thanks for your advice...


Mods your proactive intereuption required...
Dude n what may I say about ur advice, moreover if u feel bad about something then u cud raise ur voice, so the very same way I am doing the same, and being a member I do have that right, n if it is called poking the nose, then unfortunately the same could be said for what you are doing. Anyways its not that I may not read a post or reply on it without your invitation, so thanks for your advice mate, but if u cant take a suggestion then better mind not giving one...

Neways carry on thanks for ur mature words... So hands shaken and I am taking your piece of advice and keep away from it....


P.S-Moreover I never had a problem with what u guys are protesting I only have a problem with the language used, when we claim being writers we gotta be more respectful and choosy with our words... Hope it gets resolved.



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Wah kamaal ki sanjeedgi hai sabhi ki... bahut dukh ho raha hai yahaan aur isse pehle ki do posts pe logoN ka reply aur baat karne ka lehja dekh kar. Moderators se main bhi har baat pe sehmat nahin raha hun, balki bahut friction raha hai mera unke saath but I condemn the language used by most of the people during this entire issue.

Nazneen ji aapko ek example deta huN, kisi shayar ka ek sher kisi ko bahut pasand aata hai aur kisi ko nahiN, aisa isiliye hota hai kyuNki har kisi ka sher ko interpret karne ka tareeka alag hota hai... Ab aapka sher kisi ko utna pasand nahiN aaya to isme kya gunah ho gaya, aur uske baad aapne jo lehja istemaal kiya hai usse jarur dukh hua mujhe... Zara ghaur kijiyega meri baat pe..

Praneeta d aapko bhi main kaafi waqt se jaanta hun, aur is tarah se vyavhaar karte pehli baar dekh raha hun, main maanta hun mods kayi baar yahaaN dictating ho jaate hain, par kya uske liye hum apni jubaan bhi gandi kar leN...?? kya ye sahi hai...?? soch kar dekhiyega...

Taish sahab maine kab gandi jubaan ka istemaal kiya? what words in my reply are disrespectful? infact I have used most of words that were sent to me. mera jawab mujhe bheje gaye pm ke liye hai. I havnt brewed up this whole chaos. aap ke comments to aur provoke kar rahe hain! mera point bas ye hai threads par kuch aur dikhaya jata hai aur pms mein dhamki di jati hai. jaisa ki aap ne kaha ki ye issue ek simple se pm se solve ho sakti thi to mujhe please bataye jis pm ko main reply kar rahi hun wo kis angle se simple hai? mods aur members mein difference kam karne ki baat ki gayi thi par pm ke through differences ko aur bhi badhaya gaya aur mujh par impose kiya gaya! i just want this so-called SDC family to see how two faced some people are here. my language has remained same always. aap ko gandi lagi i cant help it because i am only responsible for what i say not for what you interpret! seedhen muh baat gandi hai to yahi sahi!

@fathomless saaheb, janaab aapse darkhwast hai kisi pe bhi is tarah ki tippani na karen to ahcha hai, shaad saaheb aur uffaq saaheb dono ahche shooraan hain, ab ho sakta hai ek jagah aap unse sehmat na hon par iska ye matlab nahiN ki aap unka aanklan us hisaab se kareN..kyuNki main nahin maanta ki personalized tippani ya comments kisi ko bhi yahaan kisi ke liye bhi istemaal karne ka haq hai...


Baanki shayad is muamle ko ab aaraam dena hi behtar hai, agar naraazgi hai to kalaam me dikhaye, usse kuch constructive hoga, ek choti si baat jo ki PM me clear ki jaa sakti thi, uska itna issue ban jana bahut dukhad hai...

Agar meri baat buri lage to aap mera virodh karne ke liye swatantra haiN... Par mujhe jo galat dikha vo maine keh diya...

@Mods I am sorry to say another glimpse of a very bad management, plz koi senior mod aa ke is baat ko khatm kare yahiN pe, shuruat se cheezoN ko clarify karke, taaki kisi ke liye kisi ke bhi dil me karwahat na rahe...

Khuda Hafiz
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Ab tak chup raha.....ye sochkar.....ki baat khatm ho jaaye to behtar.....lekin lagtaa hai aap logo Ka man nahi hai........to chaliye yu hi sahii......naaz Ji ne apne sher ki explanation maangi.....Maine kar Di.....lekin iske baad sher par koi baat nahi karne aaya...baaqi duniya bhar ki baat kar li aapne.......khair mujhe aap logo se isse behtar ki ummiid nahi thii.....agar aap logo ne jitna waqt yahaa ilzaam lagaane me lagaaya Hai...utna waqt gar aapne....khud ki shaairi behtar karne me lagaaya hota to kitna behtar hota.......

Naaz Jii ...aapne pahale kah dena thaa...ki mujhe winner banaao nahi to main....ho-halla karungi....to ye naubat hi nahi aati...

Fathomless....naak to aapne bhii biich me apni daali hai......Taish sahib ko sujhaav dene se pahale.......khud Ka girhebaan me jhaank le.....
   
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namaste!

sabhee dostoN se daKhaast hai ki we sab aapas meN shaanti banaaye raKheN.. yeh aik pariwaar hai aur pariwaar mein aapsi man muTaav kabhee kabaar ho jaate haiN... talKh lehja aur aik doosroN ke Khilaaf ees tarah se bayaan baazi saHeeH nahiiN...be-Shaq aap sab ka haq hai apni baat ko saamne raKhne ka.. ees baat ko yaheeN Khtm kareN to behtar hogaa...

maiN aap sab se dil se mwaafi maangtaa huuN agar kisii bhee sadasya ki wajh se aap ke dil ko TheNs pahuuNchi hoN to... ummid kartaa huuN aap sab ab ees baat ko aage nahiiN baDhaayenge...


agar aap ko kisii mod se Shikaayat hai to aap zaruur admin saaHeb ko proof ke saath PM kareN ...

aik baar fir se aap sab se darKhaast hai ki ab baat ko baDhaaye nahiiN...


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dostoN..

aik baar fir se dilii darKhaast hai ki Shayri.com ko Shayri ke liye hi rehne deN.. aapas meN jo pyaar aur saath haii aur dostaana maahaul hai wo banaaye raKheN


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Sdc ki kismat hi kharaab hai....jab bhi yahaan thodi chahal pahal hone lagti hai...kisi na kisi ki nazar lag jaati hai...

Main ab tak chup rahi kyunki dono hi taraf mere apne hain...

Khair ab bhi kuch nahi bigda....shaad sahab aur naaz dono se haq se ek dost ke naate request kar rahi huun...

Please just post one word here.........."sorry"... ( agar aap samajhtay hain aapne kuch bhi ghalat nahi kiya...tab bhi sirf meri khushi ki khatir aysa kijiye)

Ummeed hai aap dono mera dil nahi todenge......


Baqi sabhi members aur mods se sincere request hai ..please do not post anything else on this thread




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Zainy saahebaa...

kahna to bahot kuch thaa, magar abi tak bas aapki wajah se hi meri zubaan pe taala laga hua thaa... khamoshi se saari baaten sun lene ko aksar log buzdili ka naam dete hain... magar mere kuch tallluqaat bahot acche hain is jagah se aur aap jaise chand doston se, bas ussi ko dhyaan me rakhte hue hain maine na jaane kitne logon ke ilzaam aur zahar me doobi baaton ko dar kinaar kar diyaa....

khair jaisa ke aapka huqum hai, main aapse (sirf aapse) muaafi ka arzmand hoon jo mere is kadar opposition ki wajah se aapka dil dukha... baaki aap to khud bhi sab samajhtii hain...

take care.....


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Zainy ji ..main jaanta hu ki aapne kisi aur ko kuch post karne se manaa kiya hai...phir bhi post kar raha hu.....is huqmfarmaani Ke liye....muaafi....
Shaad sahib..Ko muaafinaama likhne Ke liye bolna ya unka maafinaama tasleem karna ghalat hai...jis tarah naazneen sahiba Ke favour me kuch members bole....usii tarah. Shaad sahib bhi mere favour me bole...Agar nazneen sahiba ko sorry bolne Ke liye kahaa jaata hai to as her counterpart ..mujhe sorry bolna chahiye....na ki Shaad sahib ko....
sorry...not for what happened here
Not for u zainy jii
For only welfere of SDC... Again sorry

Ab aakhiri baar .....I repeat aakhiri baar naaz Jii Ke mukhaatib hona chaahata hu.....poori tahaziib aur adab Ke saath

Naaz Jii ....aap aisa kaise soch sakti hai ki Maine aapko jaan-boojhkar 2nd position par aane se ROK liye.....kyaa meri aapse koi zaati dushmani hai?????
Hamare biich na hi kabhi koi difference aaye the....aur na hi hasan Ji meri friendslist me hai..ki main unhe jaanboojhkar favour karu

Surf aapke aur hasan Ke sher ki comparison karte hai......

Shaairi me adaayagi nibhaane Ke do taur hai..PAHLA.... sehal e mumtana ....Doosra maani e aafrini ........

Sehal e mumtana ....us sher Ko kahaa jaata hai...Jab shaair koi baat bilkul aasan lehje me kah jaata hai.....jaise hasan Ji ne kahaa hai......kaun aayega ab safar kare Ke....KYA KHOOB misra hai....hasan Ji Ka oola kuch kamzor rah gayaa warna main unhe is sher Ke 10 me se 8 marks deta.....

Maani e aafrini.......us sher ko kahaa jaata hai jab shaair symbols Ka use karke....apni baat thoda complicated taariqe se kahane ki koshish karta hai......maani e aafrini ashaar ko sehl e mumtana ashaar se behtar maana jaata hai....lekin isko nibhaana bahut muskil hai..AAPNE bhi maani e aafrini sher kahane ki koshish ki hai....aur badqismati se aap kaamyaab na ho saki....

Aap kahati hai ....I respected ufaq.....agar aapne kabhi ek minute Ke liye meri respect ki hai to yaqeen maaniye....aap ye sher nibhaane me naqqamyaab rahii.....aap har padne wale Ke saamne jaakar apna ashaar nahi khol sakti.....aapko do misro'n me apni baat saaf karni hai....yahi sher Ka husn hai...aur is husn ko.....EJAJ E IKHTISAAR kahate hai......ye husn aate -aate aata hai.......aapko ...ek salaah hai...agar Achchi lage to maan Lena warna meri bakwaas samajh Ke bhool jaaiyega......abhi aap mubtadi daur ki shaaira hai....maani e aafrini SHE'R kahane ki koshish mat kariye...is tarah Ke sher kahane Ke liye Ghalib Ke standard tak pahuchna padta hai...

Ek baat aur saaf kar du ki technical aspect ( bahr , qaafia ) alag cheez hai...Maine technical aspects par marking nahi ki....aapke sher me Jo kami hai....WO bayaani ki kami hai....

Ye ilzaam bilkul bebuniyaad hai...ki Maine sher ko nahi...shaair ko marks diye hai....
Aapko yaad dila du.....last tpt me jab main aur zidd judges they ..to winners...the.....sumit anzaan , aur Ahmad shakil......wahaa'n hame nahi pataa thaa ki
Ghazal kiski hai....but Jo winner rahe ..we SDC Ke aala shaair rahe....ye mahaz itefaaq nahi hai.....generally....umda shaair hi umda sher likhte hai.....

Naaz Ji... ..agar aapko koi doubt tha to aap mujhse pm karke poochh sakti thii....aur yahi sher kyun....kisi bhi sher par koi bhi doubt aap mujhe pm karke poochh sakti thii.......khair chhodiye Jo hua so huya.....

Shaairi mera shauq nahi...meri ibaadat hai...main apni ibaadat se dhoka nahi kar sakta....Maine koi partiality nahi ki.....Bas yahi sach hai

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Hi All,

It took me some time (almost a day) to locate the original thread. I read all competing creations, judgement & the resulting comments.

This is what I have to say. Atleast there is life now and SDC is breathing again.

There's something new & interesting I learned about Shayri from Ufaq's reply. And I thank Nazneen for that.

There was a time when I used to give undue importance to my own words & protected them. Now I focus on keeping it's breeding ground pure. The mind. I mean the heart part of my mind!

Cheers!
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Zainy ji ..main jaanta hu ki aapne kisi aur ko kuch post karne se manaa kiya hai...phir bhi post kar raha hu.....is huqmfarmaani Ke liye....muaafi....
Shaad sahib..Ko muaafinaama likhne Ke liye bolna ya unka maafinaama tasleem karna ghalat hai...jis tarah naazneen sahiba Ke favour me kuch members bole....usii tarah. Shaad sahib bhi mere favour me bole...Agar nazneen sahiba ko sorry bolne Ke liye kahaa jaata hai to as her counterpart ..mujhe sorry bolna chahiye....na ki Shaad sahib ko....
sorry...not for what happened here
Not for u zainy jii
For only welfere of SDC... Again sorry

Ab aakhiri baar .....I repeat aakhiri baar naaz Jii Ke mukhaatib hona chaahata hu.....poori tahaziib aur adab Ke saath

Naaz Jii ....aap aisa kaise soch sakti hai ki Maine aapko jaan-boojhkar 2nd position par aane se ROK liye.....kyaa meri aapse koi zaati dushmani hai?????
Hamare biich na hi kabhi koi difference aaye the....aur na hi hasan Ji meri friendslist me hai..ki main unhe jaanboojhkar favour karu

Surf aapke aur hasan Ke sher ki comparison karte hai......

Shaairi me adaayagi nibhaane Ke do taur hai..PAHLA.... sehal e mumtana ....Doosra maani e aafrini ........

Sehal e mumtana ....us sher Ko kahaa jaata hai...Jab shaair koi baat bilkul aasan lehje me kah jaata hai.....jaise hasan Ji ne kahaa hai......kaun aayega ab safar kare Ke....KYA KHOOB misra hai....hasan Ji Ka oola kuch kamzor rah gayaa warna main unhe is sher Ke 10 me se 8 marks deta.....

Maani e aafrini.......us sher ko kahaa jaata hai jab shaair symbols Ka use karke....apni baat thoda complicated taariqe se kahane ki koshish karta hai......maani e aafrini ashaar ko sehl e mumtana ashaar se behtar maana jaata hai....lekin isko nibhaana bahut muskil hai..AAPNE bhi maani e aafrini sher kahane ki koshish ki hai....aur badqismati se aap kaamyaab na ho saki....

Aap kahati hai ....I respected ufaq.....agar aapne kabhi ek minute Ke liye meri respect ki hai to yaqeen maaniye....aap ye sher nibhaane me naqqamyaab rahii.....aap har padne wale Ke saamne jaakar apna ashaar nahi khol sakti.....aapko do misro'n me apni baat saaf karni hai....yahi sher Ka husn hai...aur is husn ko.....EJAJ E IKHTISAAR kahate hai......ye husn aate -aate aata hai.......aapko ...ek salaah hai...agar Achchi lage to maan Lena warna meri bakwaas samajh Ke bhool jaaiyega......abhi aap mubtadi daur ki shaaira hai....maani e aafrini SHE'R kahane ki koshish mat kariye...is tarah Ke sher kahane Ke liye Ghalib Ke standard tak pahuchna padta hai...

Ek baat aur saaf kar du ki technical aspect ( bahr , qaafia ) alag cheez hai...Maine technical aspects par marking nahi ki....aapke sher me Jo kami hai....WO bayaani ki kami hai....

Ye ilzaam bilkul bebuniyaad hai...ki Maine sher ko nahi...shaair ko marks diye hai....
Aapko yaad dila du.....last tpt me jab main aur zidd judges they ..to winners...the.....sumit anzaan , aur Ahmad shakil......wahaa'n hame nahi pataa thaa ki
Ghazal kiski hai....but Jo winner rahe ..we SDC Ke aala shaair rahe....ye mahaz itefaaq nahi hai.....generally....umda shaair hi umda sher likhte hai.....

Naaz Ji... ..agar aapko koi doubt tha to aap mujhse pm karke poochh sakti thii....aur yahi sher kyun....kisi bhi sher par koi bhi doubt aap mujhe pm karke poochh sakti thii.......khair chhodiye Jo hua so huya.....

Shaairi mera shauq nahi...meri ibaadat hai...main apni ibaadat se dhoka nahi kar sakta....Maine koi partiality nahi ki.....Bas yahi sach hai


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mat-bhed, man mutaav, na-pasandgi, naaraazgi, ladaai-jhagda sab jaayaz hai! adab ka overdose bhi acha nahi hai. creative log eccentric nahi honge to kaun hoga? lekin inflated egos ko kab tak saath leke udna hai ye aap log taey kar lo. chalo dosti mat karo lekin koi middle-ground zaroor dhundh lo. yehi guzaarish hai.

P.S: I loved the title of this thread. One can't help but read it. Thanks Praneeta for drawing my attention to it.

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