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bazm-e-Takhayyul - 16th July 2016, 05:12 PM

Shayri ki duniya ke tamaam khawateen-o-hazraat ko nacheez ka salaam, SDC shayri ka vo anjuman hai jaha humari koshish rehti hai ki bazm mein naye tasavur ko bazm-e-sukhan
mein aapke saamne laaya jaaye. Isi khayaal ke saath haazir hai is baar bhi ek naye takhayyul ke saath. Is thread par post karne ki hidaayaton se aapki waaqfiyat karvaa dete hai.

1. Yahan aapko ek misraa-e-oola diyaa jaayega aur aap sab ko us oola ke rabt mein misra-e-saani likhni hogi.
2. Ek oola ke saath 5 saani likhi jaayegi ya yun kahiye ki 5 sher banenge aur kyunki shayar alag honge khayaal alag honge sher bhi ek dusre se alag hi padhne milenge
3. 5 sher muqammal hone ke baad nayi misra-e-oola di jaayegi.
4. Halaki misraa--e-oola ki behr di jaayegi par yahan behr ki paabandi nahi hai.


To aaiye der kis baat ki hai, mehfil ka aaghaaz karte hai , Jigar moradabadi sahab ke ek sher ko dekhte hai

Teri khushi se agar gham mein bhi khushi na hui
wo zindagi to mohabbat ki zindagi na hui

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16th July 2016, 09:55 PM

Bohat hi achha thread ki ibtida hui hai

Jigar sahab ke iss sher pe apni ek mukhtasar koshish meri taraf se pesh-e-khidmat hai


Teri khushi se agar gham mai bhi khushi na hui
Ke ab nijaat- e -gham- e- dil mujhe kabhi na hui

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Shayri ki duniya ke tamaam khawateen-o-hazraat ko nacheez ka salaam, SDC shayri ka vo anjuman hai jaha humari koshish rehti hai ki bazm mein naye tasavur ko bazm-e-sukhan
mein aapke saamne laaya jaaye. Isi khayaal ke saath haazir hai is baar bhi ek naye takhayyul ke saath. Is thread par post karne ki hidaayaton se aapki waaqfiyat karvaa dete hai.

1. Yahan aapko ek misraa-e-oola diyaa jaayega aur aap sab ko us oola ke rabt mein misra-e-saani likhni hogi.
2. Ek oola ke saath 5 saani likhi jaayegi ya yun kahiye ki 5 sher banenge aur kyunki shayar alag honge khayaal alag honge sher bhi ek dusre se alag hi padhne milenge
3. 5 sher muqammal hone ke baad nayi misra-e-oola di jaayegi.
4. Halaki misraa--e-oola ki behr di jaayegi par yahan behr ki paabandi nahi hai.


To aaiye der kis baat ki hai, mehfil ka aaghaaz karte hai , Jigar moradabadi sahab ke ek sher ko dekhte hai

Teri khushi se agar gham mein bhi khushi na hui
wo zindagi to mohabbat ki zindagi na hui

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chaliye isi sher ki misraa-e-oola ko lekar silsilaa aage badhaaya jaaye
waah....anu aapka behad shukriya bahut hee achcha thread shuru kiya hai..sdc ki raunak me izafa to hoga hee hame bhi kuch seekhne ko milega..

..naye silsile ki bahut bahut mubarakbaad tamaam doston ko..aap sab ke sath ki ummeed karte hain ham....

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Teri khushi se agar gham mai bhi khushi na hui
Ke ab nijaat- e -gham- e- dil mujhe kabhi na hui
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17th July 2016, 11:38 AM

Chaliye ek koshish meri janib se..dekhiyega..

Teri khushi se agar gham me bhi khushi na huyi
Bharam tha dil ka muhabbat ise kabhi na huyi....

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Bohat hi achha thread ki ibtida hui hai

Jigar sahab ke iss sher pe apni ek mukhtasar koshish meri taraf se pesh-e-khidmat hai


Teri khushi se agar gham mai bhi khushi na hui
Ke ab nijaat- e -gham- e- dil mujhe kabhi na hui
Umdaa sher bhai...alag rukh liya hai aapke is sher ne, mazaa aa gaya



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Chaliye ek koshish meri janib se..dekhiyega..

Teri khushi se agar gham me bhi khushi na huyi
Bharam tha dil ka muhabbat ise kabhi na huyi....

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Chaliye ek sher jigar sahab ki tarz pe ban paaya hai bazm mein pesh kar raha hoon...


Teri khushi se agar gham mein bhi khushi na hui
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waah!! bahut khoob ............................



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21st July 2016, 10:48 PM

waah! Waah

Bohut he acha thread shuru hua hai iske liye MODs ko bohut bohut mubarakbaad...

ek adna si koshish main bhi kar rahi hu, bataiyega kaisi lagi

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ek adna si koshish main bhi kar rahi hu, bataiyega kaisi lagi

Teri khushi se agar gham mein bhi khushi na hui
To sach hai mere dost dosti na hui

Kon aaya ki nigahon me chamak jaag uthi......

Yahi gana zabaan pe aaya tumhe dekh ke.....mubarakbaad ka dil se shukriya aur aapki aamad ka bhi...

Bahut khoob sher kaha hai..waahh....

sath deti raho..

Likhti raho...

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vah buhet acha silsila shuru kia hey mast saheb
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ek sher aana baki hai...saba ji...shaad sahab...sunita di...aap sab bhi shirkat karein hame khushi hogi....



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Teri khushi se agar gham mein bhi khushi na hui
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Bahut umdaa Jigar sahab ke tarz pe aap sab ki koshish qaabil-e-tareef rahi aur har sher mein ek alag khayaal nazar aaya...bahut khoob doston...

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Maufi ka talabgaar hoon doston, meri masrufiyat ki wajh se mehfil tham si gayi thi. Agle sher ki taraf rukh karte hai umeed hai Shahzad Ahmed sahab ke is sher pe aapke umdaa sher humhe padhne ka mauka naseeb hoga.

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Maufi ka talabgaar hoon doston, meri masrufiyat ki wajh se mehfil tham si gayi thi. Agle sher ki taraf rukh karte hai umeed hai Shahzad Ahmed sahab ke is sher pe aapke umdaa sher humhe padhne ka mauka naseeb hoga.

chhup chhup ke kahā˝ tak tire dīdār mile˝ge
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Waah!! Bahut khoob.....
Aapne mahfil ko aage badhaya apni masroofiyat me se vaqt nikal kar hame ek naya sher diya bahot shukriya anu.....

Doston ab apki baari mahfil ko aage badhayein..

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Ek koshish....

Chup chup ke kahaan tak tire deedar milenge
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Ek koshish....

Chup chup ke kahaan tak tire deedar milenge
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waahhhh kyaa khoob sher ataa kiyaa hai madhu ji ... bahut shaandaar

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meri jaanib se bhii ek sher nazar hai...


chhup chhup ke kahā˝ tak tire dīdār mile˝ge
naa mil ke bhi ham is tarah sau baar milenge..

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naa mil ke bhi ham is tarah sau baar milenge..

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Ek koshish....

Chup chup ke kahaan tak tire deedar milenge
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Wah umdaa sher Madhu seedhe shabdon mein dil ka haal bayaan kiya hai



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meri jaanib se bhii ek sher nazar hai...


chhup chhup ke kahā˝ tak tire dīdār mile˝ge
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Umdaa janaab bahut aala sher haazir kiya hai janaab, daad qubool farmaaiye



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ek adnaa si koshish....

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ek adnaa si koshish....

chhup chhup ke kahā˝ tak tire dīdār mile˝ge
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Waahh...kya kahne...bahot khoob sher kaha qasid sahab



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wahhhh Anu...bahut hi khoobsurat aur majedaar silsilla shuru kiya hai, aap sabhi dostoN ke ashiyaar padey, accha lga, koshish karuNgi ki jaldi hi koshish karu maiN bhi


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wahhhh Anu...bahut hi khoobsurat aur majedaar silsilla shuru kiya hai, aap sabhi dostoN ke ashiyaar padey, accha lga, koshish karuNgi ki jaldi hi koshish karu maiN bhi
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