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23rd June 2005, 06:20 PM
"dhup hu, saya-e-didar se dar jata hu...
tujse milta hu to kuch aur bikhar jata hu... sahilo pe muje aawaz na dena koi... aag jis sikt lagi ho, main udhar jata hu.. tu nahi hai to khyalo ke ajab mosum hai.. jane kis soch main chlta hu, thahar jata hu... aasma, rang, samndar hai taakub* main mere pyas lagti hai to sahra main utar jata hu... *taakub= picha karna, follow ruh jalti hai bahut, jism pighlta hai bahut.. aur main sahar ke jangal se gujar jata hu... "kiski aankho ne mere aks pahan rakhe hai...? khud se milna ho to us shaksh ke ghar jata hu...!" ----------------------------------------------------- (NM) hi friends.................. i m back...... aaj fir aap logo se milkar achcha laga... yakin mainye bahut miss kiya.. any way ye kisne likha hai main nahi janta.. par jab bhi maine ise padha muje iske andar ek khichav sa mehsus hua.... muje pasand aai socha aap logo ko bhi achcha lagega.... iski last line... "kiski aankho ne mere aks pahan rakhe hai...? khud se milna ho to us shaksh ke ghar jata hu...!" ne muje andar se hila diya... kya likha hai.... khud se milna ho to main uske ghar jata hu.. wah... i hope aapko bhi achchi lagegi... pls.. replie jarur karna.... bye.......... miss u.......... .................................................. ...........tArAnG.......... aksar bahte hue aansu bhi bat kiya karte hain...!" Tarang |
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24th June 2005, 09:05 AM
Tarang Ji......
bahut khoob......yunhi nagine pesh karte rahiye...... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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24th June 2005, 03:45 PM
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bahut bahut shukriya aman ji.... aapka sath raha to likhte rahenge aise hi.......... aksar bahte hue aansu bhi bat kiya karte hain...!" Tarang |
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to feel & to be felt...
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25th June 2005, 07:58 PM
wowwww. tarang ji... ek baar fir....its greatttt...agar ye bhi pata chal sakta hota ye likhe kisne hain to achha lagta....but bahut hi achhe aur itneeimpressive way me likha hai.... just greattt...
keep sharing take care ****** Your attitude towards life decides Life's attitude towards you... |
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"Taish meN hai Taish"
 
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26th June 2005, 12:05 PM
bahut hi ahcha liha hai aapne bahut hi khamoshi se aapne apne ehshashon ko pesh kiya hai.i just loved each and every line of it so pls do keep on writing like this.
aapka LUCKY  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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26th June 2005, 01:01 PM
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.............................aapka tarang aksar bahte hue aansu bhi bat kiya karte hain...!" Tarang |
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26th June 2005, 01:03 PM
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aksar bahte hue aansu bhi bat kiya karte hain...!" Tarang |
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28th June 2005, 05:49 PM
its very nice,supercool and very touching,thanbks for sharing with us,hope u do write more and more,
bye take care, luv, ritz. |
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29th June 2005, 01:52 PM
"dhup hu, saya-e-didar se dar jata hu...
tujse milta hu to kuch aur bikhar jata hu... sahilo pe muje aawaz na dena koi... aag jis sikt lagi ho, main udhar jata hu.. WaaaaaaaH...So Expressive, so beautifull!! tu nahi hai to khyalo ke ajab mosum hai.. jane kis soch main chlta hu, thahar jata hu... aasma, rang, samndar hai taakub* main mere pyas lagti hai to sahra main utar jata hu... Waaaaah.. real good one! ruh jalti hai bahut, jism pighlta hai bahut.. aur main sahar ke jangal se gujar jata hu... "kiski aankho ne mere aks pahan rakhe hai...? khud se milna ho to us shaksh ke ghar jata hu...!" WaaaaaaaaaaaH...!! Hi Tarang! Ek behad hi asardaar aur behad khoobsurat kalaam dhoond laaye ho tum... Mujhe bahut pasand aaya...Just Loved this one... Yun hi nagine chun laate raho.. TC Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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5th July 2005, 06:26 PM
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heartly thank to u... aksar bahte hue aansu bhi bat kiya karte hain...!" Tarang |
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5th July 2005, 06:29 PM
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thank you pulkit bhaiya.. agar aap logo ka yunhi pyar milta raha to muje apni kismat par shak hone lag jayega... ki kanhi ye meri hi hai ya maine kisi ki chura li... mafi chahta hu aapko samay par replie nahi kar paya.. bahar tha... aur chota sa accident bhi ho gaya tha... kal discharge hua aur aaj hazir ho gya... shukriya...... aksar bahte hue aansu bhi bat kiya karte hain...!" Tarang |
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5th July 2005, 09:13 PM
Thanks for sharing wonderful creation.. take care!
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6th July 2005, 05:17 PM
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thanx for replieing and liking my creation... aksar bahte hue aansu bhi bat kiya karte hain...!" Tarang |
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13th April 2010, 03:37 PM
Hi freinds
Hope you like my shayri.... aksar bahte hue aansu bhi bat kiya karte hain...!" Tarang |
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13th April 2010, 05:14 PM
waki ummada sher hai saheb..... share karne ke liye dhanyawaad
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27th April 2010, 08:43 PM
Thanks dhanjay.. thanks for reply
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9th June 2010, 11:01 AM
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Radhika  Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye E-mail : radhika.nm2@gmail.com |
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12th July 2010, 01:33 PM
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12th July 2010, 02:08 PM
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Thanks 4 Sharing.................................  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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12th July 2010, 06:36 PM
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beautiful sharing.....keep it up...........................................  "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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Main shayar to nahin.....
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12th July 2010, 07:03 PM
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"kiski aankho ne mere aks pahan rakhe hai...? khud se milna ho to us shaksh ke ghar jata hu...!" ye lines mujhe bhi bahut acchi lagin daad kubool kijiyega एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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14th July 2010, 02:25 PM
masha allha...so nice wording jani..
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15th July 2010, 12:15 PM
hey sadiq.a how are you kitne din ho gye no new post why
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