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25th August 2006, 04:00 AM
dost bankar sare raah mil gaya suraj
jara si roshani mangi to dhal gaya suraj........ "dilip" Dilip hope its ok with u, mei kuch different chahera dena chahti thi aap ke shayri ko.................. dost bankar sare raah mil gaya sura humitne khushnaseeb the, jara si roshani mangi to aur jal gaya suraj........ Samita |
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25th August 2006, 08:54 AM
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samita ji aapke ehsas pade bade hi khoob surat ehsas hain aapke aapne jara sa chenge karke dosti ko ek naya mod diya, jahan meri rachna bewafa dost ko indicate karti hai wahin aapka jawab ek bafadar dost ka chehara prastut karti hai. bahut acche jajwat hain aapke. samita ji is duniya main khushi bhi hai or dukh bhi ye to pane wale ki kismat pe nirbhar hai ki uski jholi main kya aata hai. is mamle mai main kahna chahta hoo.n " tukde tukde din bita dhajji dhajji raat mili jiska jitna aanchal tha usko utni hi sougat mili isi prakar reply dete rahna aapka dost dilip dilip  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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25th August 2006, 02:19 PM
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dost bankar sare raah mil gaya suraj jara si roshani mangi to dhal gaya suraj........ "dilip" 2nd share har kadam par mere saath challa suraj, jab jaroorat padi to muh chuppa gaya suraj.... -sunita virender  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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25th August 2006, 03:48 PM
all r perfect
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25th August 2006, 05:07 PM
ek meri aur se..........
3rd sher Roshan kiya hai saare jahan ko, Na jane kyu, mere aangan me andhera kar gaya suraj... aapki dost pooja  ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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25th August 2006, 05:10 PM
ek sher meri aur se bhi dosto.................
andhero mese ujala karke rasta dikhata hai suraj.......... khud bhi jalta hai aur dusro ko jalata hai suraj........ |
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25th August 2006, 05:13 PM
fir se ek aur sher likh rahi hu
4th sher Barson baad khushiyan aai mere jivan me, Dekh kar meri khushi, jal gaya suraj.... aapki dost pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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25th August 2006, 05:18 PM
ek meri aur se.................
meri zindagi me subha kar gaya suraj............. yaado ko uski dil me se jala gaya suraj......... |
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25th August 2006, 05:20 PM
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raat bhar chand chupata raha mere aansuyo ko, subha hote hi meri halat sab ko batta gaya suraj... -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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25th August 2006, 05:22 PM
fir ek aur................................
halat meri dekh ke khud ro pada suraj........................ dard mera dekh ke bikhar gaya suraj............... |
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25th August 2006, 05:48 PM
sunita didi bich me se dhaval ji ke sher kaha gaye. hum dono hi dhaval ji ke sher gol kar gaye. aur aapne aapne number de diya. sorry dhaval ji
aapki dost pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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26th August 2006, 12:33 AM
Hello Veer ji,
Aaj phir kaafi arsay k baad aayi hoon is bazm main aur aate hi sabse pehle aapka hi kalaam padha aur reply bhi kar rahi hoon Arz hai............. Aa bhi jaao k ab thak gayi nigaahen Jiska barson se hai mujhko woh intezaar ho tum |
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26th August 2006, 10:18 AM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by hayanaaz
[B]Hello Veer ji, Aaj phir kaafi arsay k baad aayi hoon is bazm main aur aate hi sabse pehle aapka hi kalaam padha aur reply bhi kar rahi hoon Arz hai............. 1st share Aa bhi jaao k ab thak gayi nigaahen Jiska barson se hai mujhko woh intezaar ho tum -aman 2nd share sambhaal na paye mai tere be-panaah pyar ko, khizza mai jo milli mujhe woh bahar ho tum.......... -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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26th August 2006, 10:27 AM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by sunita virender
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sadiyo se paya tha maine teri rushwai ko..... barso baad mila jo mere dil ko woh karaar ho tum dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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26th August 2006, 10:49 AM
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mar kar bhi dil se na nikal paugi tere pyar ko, es tarah se meri dhadkano mai sumaar ho tum... -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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26th August 2006, 11:13 AM
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maine mana hai aaj ki kitne dildaar ho tum.... dilp " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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26th August 2006, 11:38 AM
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Pa gaya jo teri mahfil main bhee thodi si jagah maine mana hai aaj ki kitne dildaar ho tum.... dilp 6th share tere aane se tamana jagi thee jeene ki, sadiyon main jo mila thaa wo qaraar ho tum.... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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26th August 2006, 11:57 AM
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agley janam mai kudha se tumey maang lungi mai, kah dungi usey ki mera bichda pyar ho tum.......... -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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26th August 2006, 12:23 PM
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agley janam mai kudha se tumey maang lungi mai, kah dungi usey ki mera bichda pyar ho tum.......... -sunita virender 8th share janmo ki dooriyon main na banto yu mere pyar ko, har janam mera band labo se mohabat ka izhaar ho tum..... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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26th August 2006, 12:53 PM
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agley janam mai kudha se tumey maang lungi mai, kah dungi usey ki mera bichda pyar ho tum.......... -sunita virender 8th share janmo ki dooriyon main na banto yu mere pyar ko, har janam mera band labo se mohabat ka izhaar ho tum..... 'veer' ------------ khaab neendo ki dehleez par aakar laut jate hai, teri tarha yeh bhee mujhko aazmate hai......'veer' 9th sher bandh labo ke sath ankho se har bat samajh lena meri meri har dhadkan me basa hua mera pyaar ho tum............. ...........dhaval |
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26th August 2006, 12:58 PM
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ligiye veer sahab fir se ek gazal poori ho gayi......... ab fir se ek nayee shuruaat karte hain. per jara dhyan se pichali baar kuch sahebaan ne beech me hi dusari gazal shuru kar di thi... chlo naya dour main shuru kar raha hai..... 1st sher kitna sundar kitna pyara chand suhaana lagta hai tere hushan ke deedae ka her koi deewana lagta hai dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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26th August 2006, 06:24 PM
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kitna sundar kitna pyara chand suhaana lagta hai tere hushan ke deedae ka her koi deewana lagta hai dilip 2nd share mera har aansu jo apni palkon pe le raha hai, mere dil ko hai yakee wo koi yaar purana lagta hai...... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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26th August 2006, 06:46 PM
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jeevan ke har mod pe jo saya banke sath chala uska sath mila to ab har rang suhana lagta hai.... dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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26th August 2006, 10:46 PM
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jeevan ke har mod pe jo saya banke sath chala uska sath mila to ab har rang suhana lagta hai.... 4th sher thak gaye hoon logon ko umeed ki aas dilatay dilatay ab in umeed ki rahon pe chalana kuch afsana sa lagta hai.... apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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28th August 2006, 10:03 AM
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thak gaye hoon logon ko umeed ki aas dilatay dilatay ab in umeed ki rahon pe chalana kuch afsana sa lagta hai.... -koi to ho 5th share bin dekhe hi woh chahta hai mujhe diwano ki tarah, mujhe to mera uska koi rishta purana lagta hai......... -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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28th August 2006, 10:59 AM
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kitna sundar kitna pyara chand suhaana lagta hai tere hushan ke deedae ka her koi deewana lagta hai dilip 2nd share mera har aansu jo apni palkon pe le raha hai, mere dil ko hai yakee wo koi yaar purana lagta hai...... 'veer' 3rd sher jeevan ke har mod pe jo saya banke sath chala uska sath mila to ab har rang suhana lagta hai.... dilip 4th sher thak gaye hoon logon ko umeed ki aas dilatay dilatay ab in umeed ki rahon pe chalana kuch afsana sa lagta hai.... -koi to ho 5th share bin dekhe hi woh chahta hai mujhe diwano ki tarah, mujhe to mera uska koi rishta purana lagta hai......... -sunita virender 6th sher tere hushn ka jadoo mere khumar me shamil hai, khawabo me bhi milte rahana Ek fasana lagta hai dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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28th August 2006, 11:40 AM
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hum aur tum milney se phele hi eh dost bichad gaye, tumse ki thi jo baatey, ek khaab suhana lagta hai.... -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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28th August 2006, 11:59 AM
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hum aur tum milney se phele hi eh dost bichad gaye, tumse ki thi jo baatey, ek khaab suhana lagta hai.... -sunita virender 8th share wo khushiyon ke lamhe wo teri pyari baatain, hizar main sab kush guzra zamana lagta hai....... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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28th August 2006, 12:35 PM
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kitna sundar kitna pyara chand suhaana lagta hai tere hushan ke deedae ka her koi deewana lagta hai dilip 2nd share mera har aansu jo apni palkon pe le raha hai, mere dil ko hai yakee wo koi yaar purana lagta hai...... 'veer' 3rd sher jeevan ke har mod pe jo saya banke sath chala uska sath mila to ab har rang suhana lagta hai.... dilip 4th sher thak gaye hoon logon ko umeed ki aas dilatay dilatay ab in umeed ki rahon pe chalana kuch afsana sa lagta hai.... -koi to ho 5th share bin dekhe hi woh chahta hai mujhe diwano ki tarah, mujhe to mera uska koi rishta purana lagta hai......... -sunita virender 6th sher tere hushn ka jadoo mere khumar me shamil hai, khawabo me bhi milte rahana Ek fasana lagta hai dilip 7th share hum aur tum milney se phele hi eh dost bichad gaye, tumse ki thi jo baatey, ek khaab suhana lagta hai.... -sunita virender 8th share wo khushiyon ke lamhe wo teri pyari baatain, hizar main sab kush guzra zamana lagta hai....... 'veer' areeeeeee wah kitni pyari gazal ban paye hai, ab naye shuru kijiye. .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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28th August 2006, 12:58 PM
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lo chali main aaj dil ki baat bayan kernay chali aaj dil ke dard ko zabaa denain chali........... apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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28th August 2006, 12:59 PM
1st sher..
ae khuda gar ye sach hai ki pyar bhare dilo me tu nazar aata hai.. to kyu toot jate hain dil aur tera wajood bikhar jaata hai.. nisha par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
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28th August 2006, 01:00 PM
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i am so sorry (koi to ho) dear.. mujhe nahi pata tha ki aapne bhi shuru kar diya hai.. waise pehle bhi aisa mere aur dilip ji ke saath ho chuka hai.. to koi baat nahi.. in dono ko saath saath aage badate hain.. aapki nisha par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
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28th August 2006, 01:06 PM
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lo chali main aaj dil ki baat bayan kernay chali aaj dil ke dard ko zabaa denain chali........... -koi to ho 2nd sher jin lamho ko teri baahon mein guzarne ki tamanna ki thi.. aaj unhi lamho ko kahi door dafn karne chali............ -nisha par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
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28th August 2006, 02:08 PM
2nd sher
jin lamho ko teri baahon mein guzarne ki tamanna ki thi.. aaj unhi lamho ko kahi door dafn karne chali............ 3rd sher log jis dagar ko mohabbat ka naam detay hain ik lerki anjanay main us dagar per chali........... apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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28th August 2006, 03:20 PM
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bahut kahti thi woh ladki, ki ab na karugi mohabat, par karti hai ishq kisi se, yeh aaj patta khabar chali.... -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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(#76)
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28th August 2006, 03:25 PM
sorry but iske pahle wali gazal main mujhe koi them nahi mil rahi.... so keet continue..... this gazal
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jab toot jata hai dil or ho jate hain dil ke tukde-tukde... her dil ke tukde main ujda hua aashiya.n nazar aata hai.. dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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(#77)
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28th August 2006, 09:37 PM
doston ab ye ek meri taraf se.
3rd sher Kyu milte hai mahobbat me ashiq bewffa, Jab bhi koi daga deta hai, chen-o-sukoon barbaad ho jaata ha.. aapki dost pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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29th August 2006, 12:13 PM
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tumpar vishvaas bhi karti hu, par na janey kyu mujhe, tumarey waffa mai bewaffeai ka khanjar nazar aata hai.... -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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(#79)
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29th August 2006, 01:09 PM
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tumhare ilzam me meri tabahi ka manzar nazar aata hai.. dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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30th August 2006, 10:13 AM
4th share
jana chahte ho to chale jao per meri wafa ko ilzaam na do, tumhare ilzam me meri tabahi ka manzar nazar aata hai.. dilip 5th share tere baad teri yaadon ne yu ashakbaar kiya humko, sehra main bhee rehkar aankho main sagar nazar aata hai.... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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