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jab badhe faansle - 3rd March 2013, 10:08 AM

jab badhe faansle
lage din akele

uthe nahin patthar
gire jab hausle

udhi nahin dhool
aankh sab male

gira nahin phool
pairon tale masle

bheedh me aurat
simat ke chale

kichaR me 'neetu'
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3rd March 2013, 01:01 PM

waah neetu saahiba jee..

mera shuruaat se ye maan-na raha hai ..choti beher meiN likhana bahut mushkil hota hai

khubsoorat juzbaat ..bhad khubsoorat alfaaz ke saath ..beintihaaN pasand aaye ..

daad haazir hai

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3rd March 2013, 06:17 PM

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jab badhe faansle
lage din akele

uthe nahin patthar
gire jab hausle

udhi nahin dhool
aankh sab male

gira nahin phool
pairon tale masle

bheedh me aurat
simat ke chale

kichaR me 'neetu'
kamal kai khile

waaahh bahot khoobsurat peshkash hai Neetu ji... bahot saral aur sahaj kavita likhi aapne.. likhti raheN... khush raheN

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3rd March 2013, 11:16 PM

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jab badhe faansle
lage din akele

uthe nahin patthar
gire jab hausle

udhi nahin dhool
aankh sab male

gira nahin phool
pairon tale masle

bheedh me aurat
simat ke chale

kichaR me 'neetu'
kamal kai khile
Tasleemaat Neetu Jee,
Buhat aalatareen kaavish! Buhat pasand aayaa yay mukhtalif sa laykin khoobsoorat andaaz e bayaan! Hamaree jaanib say bhee daad qaboul karayn! Likhtee rahayn!


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lage din akele

uthe nahin patthar
gire jab hausle

udhi nahin dhool
aankh sab male

gira nahin phool
pairon tale masle

bheedh me aurat
simat ke chale

kichaR me 'neetu'
kamal kai khile

Bohat khoob Neetu ji...........................




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6th March 2013, 11:58 AM

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jab badhe faansle
lage din akele

uthe nahin patthar
gire jab hausle

udhi nahin dhool
aankh sab male

gira nahin phool
pairon tale masle

bheedh me aurat
simat ke chale

kichaR me 'neetu'
kamal kai khile
uthe nahin patthar
gire jab hausle

gira nahin phool
pairon tale masle .....

Good One ! Neetu JI

Nice Effort




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7th March 2013, 01:15 AM

aadaab Neetu jee

aapki yeh kohshish yaqeenan qaabil-e-daad hai

wazan ki baat nahiiN karooNgaa go itni choTi beher meiN Ghazal raqm karna waaqye hi hauNsle ki baat hai, is se pehle aur is se zyada choTi beher shayad maine ek hi baar padhi hai aur uska matlaa yuuN tha :

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yeh janaab Dashmesh Gill Feroz saahab ki ek Ghazal ka matlaa hai


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jab badhe faansle
lage din akele

uthe nahin patthar
gire jab hausle

udhi nahin dhool
aankh sab male

gira nahin phool
pairon tale masle

bheedh me aurat
simat ke chale

kichaR me 'neetu'
kamal kai khile

kya kahuN Neetu Bala ji

bahut sundar likha hai aapne.


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lage din akele

uthe nahin patthar
gire jab hausle

udhi nahin dhool
aankh sab male

gira nahin phool
pairon tale masle

bheedh me aurat
simat ke chale

kichaR me 'neetu'
kamal kai khile
neetu jee:

namaste!

bahot Khoob rahiin aapki koShiSh !! dil se daad

KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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Neetu Bala ji

mukhtsar bahar mein sher kahna kaafi mushkil hota hai. koshish ke liye aap shabash kee haqdaar hain.

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waah neetu saahiba jee..

mera shuruaat se ye maan-na raha hai ..choti beher meiN likhana bahut mushkil hota hai

khubsoorat juzbaat ..bhad khubsoorat alfaaz ke saath ..beintihaaN pasand aaye ..

daad haazir hai

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jab badhe faansle
lage din akele

uthe nahin patthar
gire jab hausle

udhi nahin dhool
aankh sab male

gira nahin phool
pairon tale masle

bheedh me aurat
simat ke chale

kichaR me 'neetu'
kamal kai khile

achi kaawish ke liyN daad hazir hai qbool keejiye


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gire jab hausle

udhi nahin dhool
aankh sab male

gira nahin phool
pairon tale masle

bheedh me aurat
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uthe nahin patthar
gire jab hausle

udhi nahin dhool
aankh sab male

gira nahin phool
pairon tale masle

bheedh me aurat
simat ke chale

kichaR me 'neetu'
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uthe nahin patthar
gire jab hausle

udhi nahin dhool
aankh sab male

gira nahin phool
pairon tale masle

bheedh me aurat
simat ke chale

kichaR me 'neetu'

kamal kai khile

Hausale buland hai to darr kis cheez ka......


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uthe nahin patthar
gire jab hausle

udhi nahin dhool
aankh sab male


kichaR me 'neetu'
kamal kai khile

Neetu Jee Aadaab...

Bahut khoob jee bahut umdaa waqai chhoti si bher meiN umdaa kalaam kahi hai aapne... Chhoti bher meiN Khayaal ko mukammal taur par bayaaN karna aasaaN nahi hota...

Par aapki yeH koshish waqai qabil e daad haiN...
Is umdaa kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O Mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

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