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18th September 2014, 10:00 AM
Jaane kyon kahte hain
ise aag ka dariya... Meetha jharna hai Hothon se laga ke dekho to.. Doob jayenge shaam o sahar khushiyon me.. Ek suhana geet hai Isko gakar dekho to.. Door se kya maloom ho ishq ki jadugari... Meher khuda ki hai ye Paas jakar dekho to. Khyaal uska badal deta hai Rangat chehre ki... Bhari bazm me chupke se Zara muskara ke dekho to. Shab jaag kar kyon bitao judai me,kareeb paoge use... Palko par koi khwaab sajakar dekho to... Maana Zindadili hai doosron Ke liye jeena bhi... Alag lutf hai kabhi Kisi pe mar k dekho to. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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18th September 2014, 10:32 AM
bahut bahut khoob madhu jee.......aapke ishq ka asar kahein ya is kalaam kee jaadugiri......aapke ehsaason ne is baar bhi kamaal kiya hai........
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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18th September 2014, 05:17 PM
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Madhu ji....bahut hi pyare ehsaas hai, apna apna nazriya hai, koi aag ka dariya kehta hai to koi Meetha jharna, jisko jaisa experience hua  hame aapke ehsaas bade pyare lge...yu pyar ke geet gungunati rhe...! god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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18th September 2014, 10:37 PM
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Sahi kaha aapne jisko jaisa experience hua ho...meri to rab se yahi dua hai ki ishq me sabko bas achcha experience hi ho...sab khush rahein aur pyaar k geet gate rahein... mere ehsaas pasand karne k liye bshut shukriya... Yoon hi aati rahiyega... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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19th September 2014, 09:48 PM
[QUOTE=N@zneen;469097][COLOR=DarkRed][B]Muhabbat ki khoobsurti ko bahot achchese bayaaN kiya hai madhuji...pyar wakai bahot khoobsurat hota hai aap aksar pyar ke upar bahot positive likhtiN haiN i really like that aur quoted lines bahot khoob lagey...yunhi likhtey rahiye
waise yahan male version ghazal/nazm ke bich ek aurat ke khoobsurat ehsaas padhna aisa hai jaise mai khudse hi mukhatib hun shayad ek ye bhi wajah hai i like reading Bahut shukriya naaz ji....... aapke alfaz bahut hausla dete hain... .....main b yahi manti hoon...chahe vo kisi b roop me ho par pyaar wakai khoobsurat hi hota hai....mere zazbaton ko samajhne k liye...bahut shukraguzar hoon...yoon hi sath dete rahiye...अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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16th December 2014, 04:25 PM
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aap mere kalaam par aaye..bahut khushi huyi mujhe... bahut shukriya ki meri mamooli see koshish ko tawajjo di aapne. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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17th December 2014, 10:35 AM
Madhu ji ..
Aap ki is nazm meiN pyar ki intiha nazar ayee. Maine mehsoo kiya ki aap ki pakar pyar ke subject pe bahut gehri hai aur aapki sabhi rachnaon mein pyar ki chah , pyar ka dard khoob dikhta hai .. Sanjay Sehgal khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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17th December 2014, 05:23 PM
aapki ek aur bahot hi aalatereen peshkash hai ye madhu saahiba.......
bahot khoob lagii hame aapki ye rachna bhii, hhar baar ki hi tarah... likhti rahiye, mahfil ko sajaati rahiye.... derii se aane ke liye maafi chahta hoon...... Shaad.... |
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19th December 2014, 02:14 PM
Mashaallah khoobsurat poem hai ..Madhu Sahiba...Mubarak ho.
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17th March 2015, 07:47 PM
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shukriya meri rachna ko pasand karne ke liye.... aage bhi sath dete rahiyega... ... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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18th March 2015, 10:43 AM
Maana Zindadili hai
doosron Ke liye jeena bhi... Alag lutf hai kabhi Kisi pe mar k dekho to. waah .. Madhu jee.. waaah... kia baat hy ... muaafi chahta hoon .. bohat dair sy nazar pad'i aap ky is haseeN kalaam py..... phol chaman meiN kyuN khilte haiN raaz diloN ke kyuN khulte haiN pyar ka jado kia hota hai apne dil se pocho na! haseeN peshkash ky liye be-panah daad... likhte rahiye.. tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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20th March 2015, 08:35 PM
Madhu ji bohor bohot bohot pasand aayi ye peshkash....lajawab hai
Dheeeroon daad and reps too Aapka apna Bhushan Bhushan Joshi |
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16th May 2015, 09:47 PM
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Shukriya jo aapne shuruaat se mera sath diya haii..maaf kijiyega main deri se reply kar rahi hoon... Yoon hee sath dete rahein... Salamat rahein..... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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17th May 2015, 07:04 AM
Bhaut pyaree baat pyaare tareeke se kah dee hai waah
kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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17th June 2015, 07:42 PM
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अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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20th July 2015, 03:41 PM
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tashreef late rahiye.... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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27th August 2015, 10:01 PM
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Aage bhi sath dete rahein... Aate rahein... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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28th January 2017, 12:09 AM
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Deri ke liye mafi chahungi...... Aate. Rahiyega... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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