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Originally Posted by kwahish
Aadaab Mayoos sahab ....
Bhai kya baat hai janab badi fursat mein the ya yeh gazal likhane mein jalbazi kii...
But gazal ke ahsaas to khoob hai mauzoo bhi khoob hai.... But kuch ek sher ko aap
words fit karne ke chakkar mein aapne sher ko proper mod nahi diya aisa lag raha hai ...
All of all some sher are too touchy,....
In sheron per dil se daad kabool kijiye...
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ताब-ए-गम-ए-दिल कहाँ
अंगारों में शरारों में
ढूँढते रहे उन्हें हम
लकीरों में सितारों में
and last one har baar ki tarha maqta la jawab hai ...
जिसे देखूं है मायूस
तन्हाइयो में हज़ारों में
Likhate rahiye aate rahiye
Khush rahiye.. Khuda Hafez
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Thanks Khwaish, I really appreciate ur comments since I know u r a very good writer.
Believe me, there is a lot of thought behind each line. But since I write them, I know or rather think that I know the context. It may appear a bit different to the reader thus making it something other than what I thought.
rgds