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है दर्द सब नज़ारों में - 15th September 2009, 11:39 PM

है दर्द सब नज़ारों में
खिजाओं में बहारों में


कुछ रिश्ते बदल गये
दीवारों में दरारों में

कितने झूठ हैं छिपे
कौलों में करारों में

ताब-ए-गम-ए-दिल कहाँ
अंगारों में शरारों में

ढूँढते रहे उन्हें हम
लकीरों में सितारों में


हमें मिले कुछ हमनफ़स
रिंदों में आवारों में


ज़िंदगी बस यूँही कटी
मुरादों में इन्कारों में


हर वबाल से परे हुए
आसमानों में मज़ारों में


जिसे देखूं है मायूस
तन्हाइयो में हज़ारों में



In Roman English

hai dard sab nazaaron men
khijaaon men bahaaron men


kuch rishte badal gaye
deewaaron men daraaron men


kitne jhooth hai chipe
kaulon men karaaron men


taab-e-gam-e-dil kahaan
angaaron me sharaaron men


dhundte rahe unhen ham
lakiron men sitaaron men


humen mile kuch humnafas
rindon men aavaaron men


zindagi bas yunhi kati
muraadon men inkaaron men


har vabaal se pare hue
aasmanoon men mazaaron men


jise dekhun hai mayoos
tanhaaiyon men hazaaron men




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15th September 2009, 11:55 PM

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है दर्द सब नज़ारों में
खिजाओं में बहारों में


कुछ रिश्ते बदल गये
दीवारों में दरारों में
??

कितने झूठ हैं छिपे
कौलों में करारों में
??

ताब-ए-गम-ए-दिल कहाँ
अंगारों में शरारों में

bahut khoob....daad

ढूँढते रहे उन्हें हम
लकीरों में सितारों में


shubanallah....wah ...wah

हमें मिले कुछ हमनफ़स( begum akhtar ke talaffuz ka asar lagta hai?)
रिंदों में.....bahut acche आवारों में????


ज़िंदगी बस यूँही कटी
मुरादों में इन्कारों में


???

हर वबाल से परे हुए
आसमानों में मज़ारों में


????

जिसे देखूं है मायूस
तन्हाइयो में हज़ारों में


wallah..........hasrat mohani sahab ki rooh bol rahi hai shayad


In Roman English

hai dard sab nazaaron men
khijaaon men bahaaron men


kuch rishte badal gaye
deewaaron men daraaron men


[SIZE=3]kitne jhooth hai chipe
kaulon men karaaron men

taab-e-gam-e-dil kahaan
angaaron me sharaaron men




dhundte rahe unhen ham
lakiron men sitaaron men




humen mile kuch humnafas
rindon men aavaaron men




zindagi bas yunhi kati
muraadon men inkaaron men


har vabaal se pare hue
aasmanoon men mazaaron men
che


jise dekhun hai mayoos
tanhaaiyon men hazaaron men

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16th September 2009, 12:06 AM

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That was quick Zidd
What are the question marks for ??
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16th September 2009, 12:12 AM

[QUOTE=m.mayoos;366249]That was quick Zidd
What are the question marks for ??[/QUOTE

I DIDNT GET IT
WERE MEANINGLESS TO ME
SORRY
   
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That was quick Zidd
What are the question marks for ??[/QUOTE

I DIDNT GET IT
WERE MEANINGLESS TO ME
SORRY

ज़िंदगी बस यूँही कटी
मुरादों में इन्कारों में

In wishes and refusals :

Wishes were refused


हर वबाल से परे हुए
आसमानों में मज़ारों में

Those who are dead are free from all the cares of life.
Also, as "Only the God and the dead are free from cares of life"

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Aadaab Mayoos sahab ....

Bhai kya baat hai janab badi fursat mein the ya yeh gazal likhane mein jalbazi kii...
But gazal ke ahsaas to khoob hai mauzoo bhi khoob hai.... But kuch ek sher ko aap
words fit karne ke chakkar mein aapne sher ko proper mod nahi diya aisa lag raha hai ...

All of all some sher are too touchy,....
In sheron per dil se daad kabool kijiye...
..
ताब-ए-गम-ए-दिल कहाँ
अंगारों में शरारों में


ढूँढते रहे उन्हें हम
लकीरों में सितारों में

and last one har baar ki tarha maqta la jawab hai ...

जिसे देखूं है मायूस
तन्हाइयो में हज़ारों में

Likhate rahiye aate rahiye
Khush rahiye.. Khuda Hafez


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16th September 2009, 06:54 PM

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Aadaab Mayoos sahab ....

Bhai kya baat hai janab badi fursat mein the ya yeh gazal likhane mein jalbazi kii...
But gazal ke ahsaas to khoob hai mauzoo bhi khoob hai.... But kuch ek sher ko aap
words fit karne ke chakkar mein aapne sher ko proper mod nahi diya aisa lag raha hai ...

All of all some sher are too touchy,....
In sheron per dil se daad kabool kijiye...
..
ताब-ए-गम-ए-दिल कहाँ
अंगारों में शरारों में

ढूँढते रहे उन्हें हम
लकीरों में सितारों में
and last one har baar ki tarha maqta la jawab hai ...

जिसे देखूं है मायूस
तन्हाइयो में हज़ारों में
Likhate rahiye aate rahiye
Khush rahiye.. Khuda Hafez

Thanks Khwaish, I really appreciate ur comments since I know u r a very good writer.
Believe me, there is a lot of thought behind each line. But since I write them, I know or rather think that I know the context. It may appear a bit different to the reader thus making it something other than what I thought.

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hay subhan alla mai to lajawab ho gaya apki tarif ku .. bhot bhto mast


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