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Zehar naya hai - 19th June 2014, 11:06 PM
Adavaton ka kahar naya hai
chalan wahi hai, shahar naya hai

gawahi detin hain bikhri lashein
yahan fiza mein zehar naya hai

hain thande chulhe, shahar jala hai
anal wahi hai, hunar naya hai

palat ke dekha nahin kisine
jhuki hain aankhein ye dar naya hai

tere sitam ka asar hua hai
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20th June 2014, 01:18 AM
Wah wah! ..bohat khoob abhi sahab

Bohat khoobsurat ghazal hai..

Maqta khaas pasand aaya mujhe

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20th June 2014, 09:18 AM
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Adavaton ka kahar naya hai
chalan wahi hai, shahar naya hai

gawahi detin hain bikhri lashein
yahan fiza mein zehar naya hai

hain thande chulhe, shahar jala hai
anal wahi hai, hunar naya hai

palat ke dekha nahin kisine
jhuki hain aankhein ye dar naya hai

tere sitam ka asar hua hai
nahin hain aansoo, sabar naya hai
Waah janaab. Ek se ek khoobsurat ashaar kahe hain aapne. Bahut hi khoob. Daad qabool keejiye.

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22nd June 2014, 10:28 PM
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Adavaton ka kahar naya hai
chalan wahi hai, shahar naya hai

gawahi detin hain bikhri lashein
yahan fiza mein zehar naya hai

hain thande chulhe, shahar jala hai
anal wahi hai, hunar naya hai

palat ke dekha nahin kisine
jhuki hain aankhein ye dar naya hai

tere sitam ka asar hua hai
nahin hain aansoo, sabar naya hai
waahhhhhh bahot khooob...... kyaa baat hai Abhii bahot hi acche sher kahe hain aapne... mubaarakk ho likhte rahiye

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23rd June 2014, 11:50 AM
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Adavaton ka kahar naya hai
chalan wahi hai, shahar naya hai

gawahi detin hain bikhri lashein
yahan fiza mein zehar naya hai

hain thande chulhe, shahar jala hai
anal wahi hai, hunar naya hai

palat ke dekha nahin kisine
jhuki hain aankhein ye dar naya hai

tere sitam ka asar hua hai
nahin hain aansoo, sabar naya hai
Awesome har ek aashaar damdaar....bahot hi khoobsurat aur umdaa ghazal....keep it up.
   
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Adavaton ka kahar naya hai
chalan wahi hai, shahar naya hai

gawahi detin hain bikhri lashein
yahan fiza mein zehar naya hai

hain thande chulhe, shahar jala hai
anal wahi hai, hunar naya hai

palat ke dekha nahin kisine
jhuki hain aankhein ye dar naya hai

tere sitam ka asar hua hai
nahin hain aansoo, sabar naya hai
Bahut khoob Janaab! Daad kubool kijiye!

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28th June 2014, 03:02 PM
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Aap bahut umda likhte hai .....janaab...aur dekhkar achcha lagaa ki siikhne Ke manshAa bhi rakhte hai.....yahi jazba banaaye rakhiye.....bataur shaayar aapka mustaqbil sunharaa hai.....

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