Right Time....!!

[Taish]

now this is something i had written when I was in 11th standard and i had just joined the website, so plz do forgive me for my mistakes.....



for doing everything,
there is a fixed time.
when it sud b done.
or d sweet taste of sugar,
will turn into sour of lime.


as while gathering flowers,
we sudn't b shying,
in plucking the new flowers.
as the same flower smiling 2day,
2morrow will b dying.


see the sun,
the higher he is getting.
and more is the time spent,
by it in the sky,
the nearer he is to setting.


the best time of life is,when youth,
as brain is sharper n blood is warmer.
as with the passing age,
the bad ,worse n worst times,
still succeed the former.


its the exact time,
for u 2 b a lover.
as its the best time,
2 live the best days of life,
n 2 get the best possible cover.

[Ahmad Hyderabadi]

Originally Posted by Taish

now this is something i had written when I was in 11th standard and i had just joined the website, so plz do forgive me for my mistakes.....



for doing everything,
there is a fixed time.
when it sud b done.
or d sweet taste of sugar,
will turn into sour of lime.


as while gathering flowers,
we sudn't b shying,
in plucking the new flowers.
as the same flower smiling 2day,
2morrow will b dying.


see the sun,
the higher he is getting.
and more is the time spent,
by it in the sky,
the nearer he is to setting.


the best time of life is,when youth,
as brain is sharper n blood is warmer.
as with the passing age,
the bad ,worse n worst times,
still succeed the former.


its the exact time,
for u 2 b a lover.
as its the best time,
2 live the best days of life,
n 2 get the best possible cover.

Wow! Two things great about this poem....... you can't get more original than this! Thank You Taish bhaee for posting it as it was when you wrote it in your school days! Makes me nostalgic! The second great thing is the message and the way you coneyed it! Deserves more than reps+++++.


Oopss....and one more thing Taish bhaee you certainly chose the Right Time to post this gem.....who knows cud well end up Poem of The Month.....
Please keep sharing ya treasure with us.

Duagoh
Ahmad

[Hamdam]

Dear Taish,

You were trying to synchronize with the time.


Very nice and simple effort to find your identity at
that time. Samay ko pehchane ki koshi at such young
age defines your caliber and identity.

Sanjay

[Taish]

Originally Posted by Ahmad Hyderabadi

Wow! Two things great about this poem....... you can't get more original than this! Thank You Taish bhaee for posting it as it was when you wrote it in your school days! Makes me nostalgic! The second great thing is the message and the way you coneyed it! Deserves more than reps+++++.


Oopss....and one more thing Taish bhaee you certainly chose the Right Time to post this gem.....who knows cud well end up Poem of The Month.....
Please keep sharing ya treasure with us.

Duagoh
Ahmad

Ahmad bhai, it was a pleasure to know that someoone understood the things going inside a guy of 16-17 yrs age, and even refreshing for me as i cud let my thoughts wander in those times, thanks a lot for the appreciation, wud trying writing in english more often....

[saadat tahir]

its a nice creation, I guess a bit of tinkering should do the trick.
its musical and light with a nice underlying message

cheers