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Mai Kon? - Tumhaara apna dil -
2nd May 2003, 10:27 AM
Mai kon ?
Dard-o-gam ke sheher me KhushbuoN ka wayapaar karta hooN, HaaN saudagar hooN mai sapnoN ka Mai sapnoN ko saakaar karta hooN, Mai jaanta hooN tumhaare aansuoN ki keemat Mai tumhaare hothoN par muskaan bharta hooN, Laao apne sab dard mujhe dedo Or mai tumhe thahaakoN se bharta hooN, Tumhaare in mandiroN-masjidoN ke baahar Ik phooloN ki dukaan hai meri, Ye pandit ye maulavi jane kya bharte haiN tum.me Mere kareeb aao, mai tumhe khushbuoN se bharta hooN, Paas ke nukkad me yooN to Ek maikhaana bhi hai mere, Mai prem ko piyaaloN me bharkar Use ‘mai’ se bhi jyaada, madhosh karta hooN, Tumhaara apna dil Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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waah -
2nd May 2003, 01:04 PM
channd dost,
Dard-o-gam ke sheher me KhushbuoN ka wayapaar karta hooN, HaaN saudagar hooN mai sapnoN ka Mai sapnoN ko saakaar karta hooN, bahot umda khayaal hai aapkae aur to kya kahu........ hum bhi yahi kahte hai dosto ko... raah jab kathhin lagae aur sathh chalna bhi na namumkin ho... gam n karna... banke pawan ki lahar dosti ki khusbu doongi tumhae.... |
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Shukriya Meena -
3rd May 2003, 10:14 AM
Meena, ek baar phir aapka bahut bahut shukriya jo dosti ka jazba aap rakhti haiN mai uski tahe dil se kadr karta hooN.
Aabhaari Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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main kaun_Baata tou diya :)** |
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main kaun_Baata tou diya :)** -
18th April 2005, 09:52 PM
Dear Chaand Jee, yahan aayi thi ek aur Kalaam dhundte houe lekin wo pata nahin kaha chala gaya...nazron ki roshni kaam padgayi hogi...**Lekin yahan aakar parha tou Dil ko chhoun gaya...
 **Dil Ki Gehraaion Se Shukriya Aur Dher Sare Phoul Kuboul Kijiyega **Daad iss pe main dena nahin chahti houn_main nahin Dil kehta hain...lol...**I hope You can Understand...*Waise youn laga jeise aapna jeisa...lol...**Aapko keise pata chal gaya? ha ha aha just kidding**Khush Rahiye ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care...**God bless You. Keep smilling....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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18th April 2005, 09:58 PM
HaaN shimul ...tumne daad dene se bhi bada kaam kar diya...meri is puraani kuchh keh paane ki koshish ko phir se live kar diya...or kya chaahiye...per sach hi to hai...
ye meri baat nahi hai.....ye to tumhaari hi baat hai... Dekha mai tumhe kabse jaanta hooN... (ab to shikaayat na karogi.) Khush raho ...yooNhi..or apni khushbuoN ki dukaan chalaati raho..or suno....mai jab udas ho jaauN...to kuchh ek phool muft me mujhe bhi de dena...tumhaare paas to bahut haiN na... Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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Muft mein~Ab tou shiqayat hain,,,**But Your smiles made me forget :)** |
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Muft mein~Ab tou shiqayat hain,,,**But Your smiles made me forget :)** -
19th April 2005, 04:22 AM
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Dil Ki Gehraaion Se bohot sare Phoul **pc abhi tak bohot slow hain**Jab Udas Honge tab hi baas? Theek hain Jee, ye koii badi baat hain keya? Really felt good**Aur Haan, Dekh Rahi Houn...lol...**Song ke bade mein kuch kehdoun? Meri Shohrat Meri Deewangi Ki Nazar Houi_Pee Gayi Mai Ki Botal Mere Geeton Ki Kitab~Lekin koii baat nahin hain...lol...**jab main chup rahoungi tou Aap gana likhdijiyega...lol...**Dard page mein jo thread submit ki wahan bhi yahin kehna tha par socha Rehne deti houn...lol...**Daad na dene Ki Baat Kyun Kahin thi wo baad mein baatadoungi...**Waise, Aapko Samajh Nahin Aaya Keya? Ye tou chalti hi rahegi...Dukaan aur keya...lol...**Mere Aapne Mere Hone Ki Nishani Mange_Aaina mujhse meri pehli si sourat mange...Phir se wohin yaad aaye jaa rahe hain...Haan, Abbu bohot yaad aati rahi iss liye shayaad? Khush Rahiye ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care...**God Bless You. Keep smilling....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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Re: Mai Kon? - Tumhaara apna dil |
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Re: Mai Kon? - Tumhaara apna dil -
19th April 2005, 11:30 AM
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Chaand sahab kya khoobsoorat nazm haiy,................... waah waah , paRkar mazaa aa gaya, bohot accha khyaal haiy, aapne apne ird gird ke mahowl aur tehzeeb ki bohot aachi nakaashi ki haiy mubarakbaad kubool karen.........aur isi tarah sunaate rahen Safiya... |
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19th April 2005, 04:35 PM
chand ji,
Aap ko bahut logo ne bahut kuchh keh diya, ab main aap ko har ek ki tarah wah bahut khub keh ke bor nahi karna chahti hu......aap ne jo kuchh likha hai woh dil ki gehrai yo se likha hai......aap ne shayad sach main "mai kon hu?"wala que solwe kar diya hai.....muje yeh bahut jaya pasand aaya hai.....shayad aapne shayri ke to par likha hai ya aapne bare main yeh to main nahi janti....magar jo kuchh bhi hai bhut khub hai......lagta hai jese aap ne dil ke under ke sare gum ko chhupa kar dus ro ko khushi di hai...... aur kya kahu.......keep it up........ take care, munazzah ------------------------------------------------- Be smilling Be cool.... |
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19th April 2005, 08:27 PM
Shimul...tumara reply muskaan le aaya hai chehre per.
Chaand Shukriya Safiya ji....tahe dil se shukrgujaar hai ye Chaand aapka ....jo aapne is naacheez ki hausla afzaai ki...koshish rahegi aage bhi kuchh or achchha or behtar pesh kar sakhooN. Shukriya Chaand Munazzah ji....aap meri post per aaye use saraaha ye hausla afzaahi hi kaafi hai is Dil ki khushi ke liye ...warna bade bade shabdoN me kya rak.kha hai... Ye jo maine likha hai apne dil ki nahi balki har ek ke dil ki baat likhi hai...bas jaroorat hai to use samajhne ki......tabhi to likha hai .....Mai Kon?....tumhaara apna dil. har dil khoobsoorat hai...bas use dekhne ka aaina sahi hona chaahiye. Shukriya aapke is pyare se reply ke liye. Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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25th April 2005, 04:50 PM
Tumhaare in mandiroN-masjidoN ke baahar
Ik phooloN ki dukaan hai meri, Ye pandit ye maulavi jane kya bharte haiN tum.me Mere kareeb aao, mai tumhe khushbuoN se bharta hooN, Chaand dost..... bahut khoob......kya baat kahi hai.......wah...... is andhi duniya ka ek hi raja hai..... paisa, paisa aur sirf paisa...... kafn lena hoo, to paisa maangte hain..... dafn karna ho, to safa maangte hain..... kya dil nahi bharta inka paisaon se...... jo qatil se bhi to bus paisa maangte hain.... tumhara dost..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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25th April 2005, 05:49 PM
Aman dost....bahut achchha laga tumhaara reply yahaaN is post me paakar.
tahe dil se shukriya... or rahi baat tumhare prashn ki.... to ye Paisa shabd...ab mujhe jiyaada dukh nahi deta... kyoNki shaayad maine bhi jaan liya hai iski ehmiyat ko.... Peisa bura nahi mere dost....ye jindgi ko kuchh or khoobsoorat bana deta hai....so khoobsoorat banane waali cheez buri nahi ho sakti...per haaN...bura agar kuchh hai to wo hai Niyat....Nafrat....inhe door rakhna hai apne aap se. Khush raho....muskuraate raho... kuchh kam hai....beshaq, Per jitna hai ...us per itraate raho. Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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